Scene Antaakshri #2

In continuation of the first thread! ❤️

My last scene was:

He pulled her closer...lowered his mouth towards her ear, with a roguish grin on his face , he whispered,
"Diya..aapka gown bheeg chuka tha...Apko pehne rehne deta tou aapko sardi hojaty!"

Hearing this her mouth went dry and her soul smiled...she didn't reply...instead her expressions turned into an anxious lover who was waiting to be absorbed into the pool of passion.
At the same time she was surprised at her carefree reaction when the gown slipped off her body, her immense trust and undying affection for her man was the key reason behind it..as she knew that she was in safe hands...those hands which were now tucked on her waist and that handsome face was now closing up on her slowly...she felt her heart would pop out of her chest...it was beating so fast! She was feeling ashamed of the reactions her body was giving out and she knew that there is no turning back now. So she closed her eyes and gripped his arm tight!

Originally posted by: surbhimathur

In continuation of the first thread! ❤️

My last scene was:

He pulled her closer...lowered his mouth towards her ear, with a roguish grin on his face , he whispered,
"Diya..aapka gown bheeg chuka tha...Apko pehne rehne deta tou aapko sardi hojaty!"

Hearing this her mouth went dry and her soul smiled...she didn't reply...instead her expressions turned into an anxious lover who was waiting to be absorbed into the pool of passion.
At the same time she was surprised at her carefree reaction when the gown slipped off her body, her immense trust and undying affection for her man was the key reason behind it..as she knew that she was in safe hands...those hands which were now tucked on her waist and that handsome face was now closing up on her slowly...she felt her heart would pop out of her chest...it was beating so fast! She was feeling ashamed of the reactions her body was giving out and she knew that there is no turning back now. So she closed her eyes and gripped his arm tight!

^Ayesha man kar raha ki tumhe zor se hug karu aur tumse tumhaari tabhiyat puchu 😆
Bada masla khada kar diya mere liye 😆 Main kahan ke sapne dekh rhi thi aur tumne toh hahahahahah

And thats when realization dawned on her ...
Daatahukum ko sardi ho gai thy!
JUST BEFORE GETTING INTO FRIKKIN ACTION!!!!!ROFL

Diya looked at him and her mouth soon formed a smile, and in seconds she was laughing! Ratan too joined her and he was embarassed too!
She took her gown and covered herself immediately, then by holding his arm she signalled him to go walk inside. He sneezed again and blinked twice as his eyes were forming a red-ish color too.
Diya looked at him in concern and said "Ratan aapko toh bahut sardi lag gayi hai, chaliye baithiye
She made him sit at the bed and covered his legs with blanket.
All this while ratan was looking at her lovingly...'Diya kitni sweet aur caring hai'
As soon as she turned to go, ratan held her hand and asked "Diya aap kahan jaa rahi hai?
She smiled at his red nose and said sweetly "Ratan hum aapke liye fresh clothes lekar aa rahe hai cupboard mein se
Ratan immediately said "Par diya aapko bhi toh change karne ki zarurat hai, aap bhi toh gheeli ho gayi hai...aap jaayiye change kar lijiye fir main karlunga
Diya tried to protest but ratan was adamant on sending her first.
So she turned and went inside the washroom with a new gown in hand.

^^^ 🤣 Meko maaf ker dou Surbhiii.. Aur mujhe sardi nahi hui hai... tou meri tabyat theek hai.. Poochne ki zarurat nahi hai! 🤣

^ Car test drive cancelled LMAO 🤣

Then she pulled off his wet shirt...and Datahukum's perfectly chiseled torso came to her view...and her mouth went dry again!

Her eyes were stuck on his upper body and she was shamelessly checking him out when she heard "AACHOO! Her mind came out of the block and she quickly threw the wet tshirt away and then helped him in wearing the new tshirt.
She took his shorts and awkwardly handed them over to him...he grabbed them and signalled diya to turn, she immediately obliged and he changed under the blanket.
"Diya maine change kar liya hai
She looked at him and they both passed a brief smile to each other.

^ 👏👏 Surbhi you have an amazing talent to write according to different situations. This is actually very tough... Apke mind mien aik plot ho aur phir kisi aur ki wajeh se aap us plot ko tweak kerien.. 👏👏👏 and it still comes out amazingly! Wow! Hats off to you my friend.. ❤️

Originally posted by: Doc.love

^👏👏Surbhi you have an amazing talent to write according to different situations. This is actually very tough... Apke mind mien aik plot ho aur phir kisi aur ki wajeh se aap us plot ko tweak kerien..👏👏👏and it still comes out amazingly! Wow!Hats off to you my friend..❤️

Bro rulaaoge kya!!
Woh kehte hai na, heerey ki parakh johari hi kar sakta hai 😉
You are the real jeweller my friend ❤️ Your writing motivates me to improve mine! _/\_
Thankyou so much for this lovely boost up! Ab kya pata koi OS aapko dedication mein mil jaaye kuch dino mein 😉

"Diya maine change kar liya hai
She looked at him and they both passed a brief smile to each other.

Originally posted by: surbhimathur

Bro rulaaoge kya!!
Woh kehte hai na, heerey ki parakh johari hi kar sakta hai 😉
You are the real jeweller my friend ❤️ Your writing motivates me to improve mine! _/\_
Thankyou so much for this lovely boost up! Ab kya pata koi OS aapko dedication mein mil jaaye kuch dino mein 😉

Originally posted by: Doc.love

"Diya maine change kar liya hai
She looked at him and they both passed a brief smile to each other.

Diya then put her hands on his shoulders and made him lie down on the bed. She tucked him in the comforter so that he feels warm and cozy. When he was comfortable enough, Diya said,

"Ratan, hum apke liye kaadha (herbal concoction) laatay hain. Uss se apki tabyat jaldi theek hogy."

Ratan's pulse lurched in trepidation, and he thought in his mind,

"Diya...aur kaadha... Oh God no! Pata nahi kia mix ker dein gy..." A worried expression crossed his face and he quickly said,

"Arey Diya..nahi nahi.. kaadha waadha mien nahi peeta. Aap bas yahan bethy rahien...balke bethy kyun rahien. Aap ayein yahan.. leit jayein.. aap bhi tou bheegy thy. .Apko sardi na hojaye."

He ushered her towards the bed beside him and as if to reinforce, he untucked one end of his comforter and said with more force than necessary,

"Come come Diya..jaldi se comforter mien aa jayein... I am worried ke apki tabyat na kharab ho jaye! Aayein, lets go to sleep."

Diya was torn between her worry over his health and her nervousness over sleeping right next to him...sharing a comforter with him.. Her heart beats turned a little erratic as she thoght helplessly,

"Neend kis kaafir ko ayegy aaj!"

😛😉