DiRa SS: Jaane ki zid naa karo(16+) part 2 on page 2 - Page 2

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Posted: 7 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: Doc.love

My reaction:



YES...THIS IS MIND BLOWING, BABY! 👏👏👏
This is such an amazing beginning... Loved every bit of it...👍🏼❤️
Diya in a backless dress! YUM!😉
Pleaseee post the next part ASAP!

I loved your reaction...😆 Thanks for the appreciation... actually I want to show a totally different bold side of Diya in this FF so I had to give her a bold and yet classy outfit so I had two options either a plunging neckline or a backless ensemble since my previous FF had a slightly low neckline so I chose the latter this time... and I knew that teju would look stunning in a backless maxi ... 😆 I'm glad that you liked it... 😆
Edited by mrs_weasley - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: plmzaq

Fantastic start

Continue soon

Thanks.. 😆
I'll update by today evening...😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi everyone... So this is part 2 of the story and this is the part where you get what you all voted for... Passionate Dark and Sensual DiRa... this is 16+... so we have some intense scenes between the lead pair... I REQUEST EVERYOME WITH A SENSITIVE AND INNOCENT MIND TO CHOOSE WILLINGLY WHETHER OR NOT YOU ALL WISH TO READ FURTHER... YOU'VE BEEN PRE-INFORMED...


Now the scene here starts exactly from where it had been left off in the previous part...

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PART 2

**Flashback**

*Ratan's POV*

Ratan reached his room where he saw her packing her bags... What! Was she leaving so soon! He was going to lose her? "Diya yeh kya kar rahi hain aap? " "Jaa rahe hain aapki zindagi aur iss ghar se... "
**End of Flashback**

*Ratan's POV*

"Excuse me? Kya kaha aapne?! Jaa rahi hain aap?" He walked towards her with so much anger that for once Diya stopped her packing and turned to face him... "Jaana hai naa aapko...?" he yelled "jaaiye... chali jaaiye... mujhe barbaad karne; meri feelings ko iss tarah se hila kar rakhne hi aayi thi naa aap meri life mein? kar liya jo karna tha... Ho gayi tassalli? bas aapka kaam pura ho gaya ab chali jaaiye.."

He pulled her closer to him, took her hand in his own twisted it behind her back, looked deep into her eyes and coldly said "Par yeh mat sochiyega ki main aapse rukne ke liye minnatein karunga... Yeh Ratan Maan Singh kaa waada hai - rokungaa nahi aapko.." "Ratan chodiye hume.. You're hurting me.." "Aur aapne jo mujhe hurt kiya hai uska kya haan? Jaaiye chod diya aapko..." He left her hand and stepped away from her "waise bhi iss rishte se khush kahan thi aap? Aaj main aapko khud se azaad karta hu... Aaj se aapke aur mere beech koi rishta nahi... Pehredaari ka rishta toh pehle hi khatam ho chuka tha, aaj humari shaadi humaari dosti aur apne pyaar... sabse azaad karta.." "Pyaar?" Diya interrupted him "Pyaar Ratan? kaunsa pyaar - kaisa pyaar ?! Huh! Aapko jo kehna ho kahiye bas pyaar word mat use kariye ... Aap jaante bhi nahi ki pyaar kya hai..." She looked away from him in disgust and turned to resume her packing when once again he pulled her to him and said "Kyu naa bolu? Sirf isliye ki aapne mujhse kabhi pyaar nahi kiya kya main apni feelings ko bhi express naa karu? Heartless aap hongi Diya Sajjan Singh main nahi... Haan main aapse bahot pyaar karta hu.. Aapko kya lagta hai ki aapka case jeetne ke liye mera motivation kya tha? main aapko khona nahi chahta tha isliye maine apni life risk mein daal di... Isliye ki main aapse beyhadh pyaar karta hu" He said...

*Diya's POV*

Her heart was beating at an unbelievable rate... Her Ratan had just told her how much he loved her... She knew she had to tell him that she felt the same way for him... Her mind was blank and her lips said nothing... So she did the first thing that she could think of... She pulled Ratan closer to her by the collar of his shirt and kissed him right on his mouth...
She had never kissed anyone before and so she was no pro but she let her instincts take over... After a few seconds when she felt no response from Ratan, rejection hit her hard and as soon as she started to back off she felt him tighten his grip around her as he slid his hands across her bare back and felt him kissing her... When she felt his tongue brushing at her lower lip she gave him entrance and their tongues fought for dominance... One of Ratan's hands explored her lower back while the other moved to her head and he pulled her hair hard... Diya moaned aloud at the pain that this caused... Or was it actually pleasure? She didn't know... All she knew was that she had Ratan with her in this moment that she was nit going to let anyone take this moment away from her..
When they separated for a moment to breathe, Ratan moved towards the bed and threw the suitcase down on the floor... he turned to Diya and signalled towards the bed, smirking...
Desire took over Diya as she pushed him onto the bed and then leaned on him and kissed him again... He kissed her as his hands explored her body and came to rest on her chest... She struggled to unbutton his shirt and she groaned in irritation when she had to end the kiss and sit upright so that she could successfully remove his shirt...

*Ratan's POV*

Ratan sat up straight and helped her to get his shirt off... Then he pulled on the straps of Diya's dress and let it slide off from her body and quickly removed her lingerie as well. His eyes devoured the sight of her naked body before him ... He gasped for air as he took in the pleasure of trespassing upon his wife's beauty... She was a Goddess in every sense...
Ratan laid Diya down on the bed and leaned down to kiss her neck... He kissed her collarbone and when she moaned in pleasure he bit her hard in order to listen to that pleasant sound all over again... Tonight he wanted to give her the kind of pleasure that she had never known before... He touched Diya in the most intimate way she could ever be touched... She trembled under his touch and bit her lip to suppress the moan that was about to escape her from her mouth when his hand brushed against the most private places in her body... He inflicted her with this sweet torture for some more time... None of them cared about anything else tonight as they made love...
When they were both finished, Ratan kissed Diya once more... He then covered the both of them up with a blanket and took Diya in his arms and whispered a muffled "I love you" into her ear and watched her as she fell asleep... he knew that his world was in his arms tonight and that he was the luckiest man in the world because he had the love of the beautiful lady who lay in his arms... He kissed her bare shoulder in the most chaste way possible and nuzzled her neck and lost himself to slumber...
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So that's the end... I know that some of it might seem a little too typical but trust me I haven't copied this from anywhere... I have made this up myself...
Also I tried to be as subtle as possible but in case anyone feels that this is too explicit or crude then I'm sorry...
Leave any suggestions or comments that you wish to in the comments... but please try to not throw chappals at me ...
Thank you for reading this story ...
Always
mrs_weasley
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Edited by mrs_weasley - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: Shafoo

This is beautiful update

thank you so much dear...😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awww Angel ... this was truly amazing! It covered everything from the right amount of emotions of anger, outbursts, desire, wildness,love. Everything was visualize-able. Nothing was explicit. It was all exquisite with subtle undertones. Nothing was loud. Even the love making scene was very Shareef... 😃 (Its a compliment for you that you showed a hot scene while maintaining its innocence and softness...as Diya and Ratan both are innocent and Diya is naive too ...You managed to bring that about without making it crude.👏👏) I loved it! ❤️So hats off to you for the awesome write up.
We know you will never plagiarize or copy anything. It was all your own creation and thats what makes it absolutely fantastic.. 👏👏⭐️
Love you buddy for writing such a mind blowing SS... Please do come up with more and more... 😊😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Beautiful and romantic update
Love it
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Posted: 7 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: Doc.love

Awww Angel ... this was truly amazing! It covered everything from the right amount of emotions of anger, outbursts, desire, wildness,love. Everything was visualize-able. Nothing was explicit. It was all exquisite with subtle undertones. Nothing was loud. Even the love making scene was very Shareef... 😃 (Its a compliment for you that you showed a hot scene while maintaining its innocence and softness...as Diya and Ratan both are innocent and Diya is naive too ...You managed to bring that about without making it crude.👏👏) I loved it! ❤️So hats off to you for the awesome write up.

We know you will never plagiarize or copy anything. It was all your own creation and thats what makes it absolutely fantastic.. 👏👏⭐️
Love you buddy for writing such a mind blowing SS... Please do come up with more and more... 😊😊

Awww... thank you sooo much Ayesha...❤️😆🤗 You're such a sweetheart!!! 😆 ❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: plmzaq

Beautiful and romantic update

Love it

thanks dear... 😆 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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apparently there aren't too many mature FFs on india forums and though this ain't too explicit I would still request you all to kindly not report it...
thank you...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: mrs_weasley

apparently there aren't too many mature FFs on india forums and though this ain't too graphic I would still request you all to kindly not report it ...


😕 NO ONE SHOULD REPORT IT!
If anyone does...that person needs to GROW UP big time!
Angel...honestly this is a very beautiful SS yar.. No one will hate it or report it.. Dont worry..🤗❤️

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