| DiRa OS | Aaj Zid Kar Raha Hai Dil

LoveAnushka thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 7 years ago
#1
Hello, I was a silent reader but thought to write something on promo for which I couldn't wait! By the way I am Anushka & hope to make new friends here. I'm writing after many days so...
Hope you like it!
Do comment & tell me how is it?

~~~~~
DIRA OS : AAJ ZID KAR RAHA HAI DIL
~~~~~

They entered into the hotel & got to their suite, which was decorated with flowers & all but for them it was awakard because they were here to know each other... Not really on honeymoon...
As time passed, it got be evening. After their freshen up, Ratan sa changed into into another fresh pair of clothes & told Diya that they'll be going to have dinner in the restaurant of the hotel.

As he told Diya to also get ready, Diya asked to send a orange juice for because she was tired! Ratan smiled and nodded, leaving out.

Now, the hotel manager was a tad a bit confused to see a couple acting like awakard & all... He thought, maybe they are shy, so when Ratan sa ordered 2 glass of juice...
They mixed vodka shots into it for they could relax & enjoy their so called "honeymoon".

As Diya reached out for towel, she heard a knock on her bedroom. Diya got up & opened the door to see a waiter standing there with 2 glasses of juice! Awaiting something much more than the evening to be expected...

Diya closed the door & placed the tray on table... Suddenly her phone rang, it was a call by Ratan...

On Phone:
Ratan : Hello Diya, kya aap ready huyi?
Diya : Nahi Ratan hum bad apna juice peelen aur phir tayar hoke neeche aate hai...
Ratan : Thike Diya, by the way poora juice pijyega taaki aapko 1000 watt ki energy aa jaye aur phir hum bohot maza Karen. Ok!
Diya smiled on phone, shaking her head : Okay Dattahu... Ughhh sorry I mean Ratan...

As both cut their calls, Diya got to the glass to drink the juice but at first gulp only she felt it to be a bit bitter... Thinking maybe it's fresh juice that's why & shrugged, gulping down while in one to two quick! Not knowing what she drank was vodka!

After good 10 minutes the vodka started taking over Diya, she felt her head spin & sat on bed murmuring why is she feeling like this...

It was half an hour now for Ratan waiting for Diya, he called her many times but it got to be switched off... Ratan got worried & then came to their hotel room knocking but all he could hear were shouts!
Ratan was terribly horrified hearing her shouts, shouting her name reputedly he opened the door with another pass key & what found left him bewildered...

Diya on the bed dancing on loud music & scattering the pillow's cotton everywhere playing with it like a child!

Ratan closed the door & was shocked to core as to what's happening... After some time, Ratan stopped the music & shouted, "DIYA!"

As Diya stopped & turned behind, her long hair scattered on shoulder & black kolhed eyes watching Ratan as if he is a alien!?!

Diya innocently tipped her chin & then suddenly remembered who he was! Diya clapped her hands, cutely saying, "Hum jaante hai aapko, aap... Umm aap hai Ratan Sa, The Dattahukum! Aur aur Haan aap hi se humari shaadi hui hai na woh kya hai ki hum bhool Gaye..." Socrates her head while Ratan was still in shock...

A second after a realisation struck that Diya was being so open & frank was she drunk? And he was sure she was with the way of her talking & walking but could not get how is she drunk! Leaving aside for now everything, he needed to give her a wash in face so maybe she would regain in her senses back...

But here madam was busy singing & jumping here & there, he tried to hold her but she ran & got on the balcony's bench where he tried to hold her or tell her repeatedly to come down!

Ratan, "Diya aap... Aap abhi ke abhi neeche utariye aap aap gir jaayengi!
Diya shook her head furiously & said, "Main nahi girungi as main protein juice peeya hai aur pata hai usse mujh main 1000 watt ki nahi balki 2000 watt ki takat aa gayi hai! And I feel on the top of the world!" She shouted again!

Ratan held her hands murmuring that, "top of the world peace toh lagega jo pee liya hai tumne..." And shifted his attention on her saying "Diya neeche utro, please!"

Diya said,"ek deal pe neeche utrongi" Ratan helplessly & confused asked "what deal?"
Diya kept her hands on his shoulders, & said, "Rataaan! I want to... Dance with you!!!! Come on hum maze karte hai, naachte hai, come on Rataan!"

While Ratan was still shocked, suddenly Diya jumped onto him as Ratan tried to hold the drunken Diya...

With that Diya pulled her head from his shoulder & looked into his eyes... She took Ratan's hands only to put slowly on her waist & then her arms made way to his shoulders & eventually resting on his neck as Ratan was too drown in her dark Kohler eyes! He has always loved the fierceness, cuteness, anger & smile in those eyes but today he was seeing another thing which he wasn't able to form in words but something that he was living it somewhere...

Aaj zid kar Raha hai Dil!
Aaj zid kar Raha hai Dil!
Karna hai bas tujhe haasil...
Aaj zid kar Raha hai Dil

With the song as they danced in dim fairy lights, Diya snuggled onto him more & more... Both were lost in each other's eyes. Diya slowly untangled herself from him & walked backwards & was suddenly pulled by Ratan as she landed on his chest, lost in their world...

Mujh main tu ho bhi ja shaamil
Aaj zid kar Raha hai Dil
Woohoo...OOO...ooo...OOO...

As Ratan pulled Diya away & twirled her, as he pulled her again on his arms. Even Ratan was surprised but he couldn't help himself from doing so... He pulled her closer by her waist & slowly moved his hands on her face asiding the flicks coming between the view of his beautiful Diya...

Kahin khud Ko mujh main tu
Chod ja chod ja
Tere saath mujhko tu
Jod ja jod ja
He jo kaanch ke Jaisi ek deewar hai
Meri Bahain main usse
Tod ja Tod ja
Ye Jo ek adhurapan hai
Ek dusre se bhar de
Jise Umar bhar na bhule
Woh lamhe mil jaye

As the song continued they were a few inch away & simply staring into so deeply that could rip their hearts off... Ratan's heart was beating so fast with him losing his control for first time, specially for Diya who was standing so close to him... He slipped his other hand into her hair pulled her a little more closer...

Maan le mujhe tere kaabil
Aaj zid kar Raha hai Dil
Mujh main tu ho bhi ja shaamil
Aaj zid kar Raha hai Dil...

... And suddenly Diya felt asleep & fell on Ratan's shoulder, snuggling into his neck as he felt really good & the moment to be correct... But suddenly he simply got to think, was he going to kiss her just now! The Ratan Maan Singh was going to kiss Diya where they were just understanding each other?

Not being able to control his emotions, he picked Diya & laid her down on bed... Sitting beside her, he thought about moments spend minutes ago, so intimate ones...

He glanced at her, & one glance at her & he knew they could make this marriage work... He thought maybe I'm falling in love with her...

And smiled at the innocent face of the drunken beauty, a memorable side & moment on this trip for whole life.

He caressed her hair & bend down to give a peck at her forehead! And whispered softly in her ears, "Mr.India you are beautiful from outside & inside, maybe it's trip ke Baad hum sirf dost nahi balki shayad pyar karna shuru kar de...Goodnight Diyu!"

And staring at her, when he fell asleep beside her closely, he didn't knew...

But surely a new journey was started with new things being experienced by both Ratan & Diya.

~~~~~

Love,
Anushka

Created

Last reply

Replies

5

Views

2.7k

Users

5

Likes

21

Frequent Posters

pranurosid thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 7 years ago
#2
That was a superb start for the OS...Liked the style of your writing..So good to see Ratan falling for Diya😉..

I'm Pranu..Welcome to the crazy world of DIRA and sometimes lazy too😛

Hope you will be active here and have a great time and fun ...😊
LoveAnushka thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 7 years ago
#3

Originally posted by: pranurosid

That was a superb start for the OS...Liked the style of your writing..So good to see Ratan falling for Diya😉..


I'm Pranu..Welcome to the crazy world of DIRA and sometimes lazy too😛

Hope you will be active here and have a great time and fun ...😊

Thanks Pranu!
We all know ki ye Ratan will only fall first for her😆
I'm also lazy but I do visit the forum many times...
But will try to be active!

And I'm glad you liked the OS!

Love,
Anushka
DiRa_Love thumbnail
8th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago
#4
hii anushka!!
this is Sravani

loved this os!! awesome one!!
surbhimathur thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 7 years ago
#5
Hello Anushka, surbhi this side!
Welcome to the forum firstly, so nice to see you entering here with a writeup!
Loved the OS, full on romance and cuteness, monday ka wait ab aur mushkil ho gaya yeh padhke lol
Keep writing 😃 ab toh baatein hoti rahengi!
Doc.love thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago
#6
Hiii Anushka... 😃
Excellent OS.. 👏 Loved it. Please write more and more on DiRa.. 😊

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".