mohabbat-an kaha ehsaas

HI folks!

hope every1 is doing fine....i am a silent viewer of Reth forum,,,read all the posts,,found sumthing missing,,,,,,and that was a fanfiction,,,,so thought of starting a fanfiction with Reth Stars!!!!

hope u like my effort!

comments r most welcome,,,,

even if u dun like,,,,just say it,,,,,i'll stop writing,,,,😊

so folks!

get ready for the wonderful journey of love n friendship!

its 8 am in the morning!

Malhotra House:

some one calls

JIAAAAAAA..........utho baita!college keh liye dairee ho jaye gee!......

and then we see a hand coming out of the quilt,,,,alarm clock band kiya jata hay,,,,aur aik lambiii see angaryi lay ker aik larrki uth'ti hay,,,,,,,and thats our JIA!

Jia: aray baap re! 8 baj gaye,,,,aaj tau shekhar aur kshom meri class lay lain gay!

she gets up quickly and starts getting ready,,,,,,

aaiye! ab zara college chaltay hain aur daikhtay hain keh wahan kiya ho rehaa hay!

Shekhar: yaar Kshom!yeh achi museebat paali huee hay hum ne?

Kshom: konsee museebat?,,,,yeh aalu keh parathay hain,,,,museebat nahin!

S: abay nahin yaar! main Jia kee baat ker rehaa hoon!...daikh zara time kiya huaa hay...

K: 8 baj ker pooray 9 minute,,,,,yeh kehtay huay another bite of paratha goes into his mouth!

S: tu bus khatay rehna,,,,aanay de aaj Jia ko,,,,aisee khabar loon gaa naa!....humesha humain class se dair kerwati hay!

K: aanay kiya day,,,woh daikh aarahi hay,,,,humari Razia Sultan,,,,pink aur white color keh choori daar main,,,chooriyon ko chankaati!,,,,

S: bus ab daikhna tu!

K: chor naa yaar! tu humesha kehta hay keh yeh keroon gaa woh keroon gaa per jia keh samnay aatay hee sher se billi ban jata hay!

S: yaar mujhe billi na bana,,,,billa hee rehnay day!.....

J: hi guys!,,i am sorry,i am late!

S:ab bhee na aateen,,,,

J: kaha na sorry,,,,aye Kshom! yeh parathay mujhe bhee day,,sachi main subah nashta bhee nahin kiya,,,,

K: kiya Jia,,,college se 2 mins keh faslay per rehti ho per phir bhee aaker mera hee paratha khaati hoon!

J: kiya keroon! aadat parr gayee hay!!!!

yeh keh ker jia kshom keh parathay ka bite laiti hay aur bhaag jaati hay!....

at the end of the day,,three of them r sitting in the ground,under the shade of the tree!

S: Jia!,,,,,tera birthday aarehaa hay!

J: oye Kshom keh bachay! zara chutti kaatna,,,,,(kshosm chuttki kaat'ta hay) badtameez! itni zor se bhee nahin kaha thaa!,,,,Shekhar! tumhari tabiyyat theek hay?

S: kiyon kiya huaa hay meri tabiyyat ko?

J: nahin woh tum ne mera bairthday ka kaha naa iss liye,,,,,coz tumhain tau birth dates kum hee yaad rehti hain!....

yeh keh ker dono Kshom aur Jia hans parrtay hain aur Shekhar naraz ho jata hay!....

J: Shekhar!,,,,,,,,,,,,Shekhar!,,,,,khafa ho gaye ho kiya,,,,,aray main tau mazaaq ker rahi thee,,,,,,,acha daikho! kaan pakarti hoon!...

Jia keh kaan pakarnay se Shekhar hans parrta hay!........

acha ab zara yeh daikhtay hain keh Jia,Kshom aur Shekhar keh baray main un keh college fellows kiya kehtay hain!

Priya: yeh teenon tau aik triangle jiss main aik corner bhee ghayab ho tau baaqi donon incomplete nazar aatay hain!

Jhaanvi: yeh teenon tau college kee jaan hain,,aur in teenon kee jaan aik doosray main hay!

Gautham: Jia,Kshom aur Shekhar,,,,aik hee naam hain!,,,,teenon main kuch alag nahin,,,,dikhnay main teen magar reality main AIK hain!,,,,

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so folks!

i hope u liked it!

i'd be looking fwd to u'r replies!

this si really good👏👏👏

please continue soon!

okz ji

so lets see how did Kshom n Shekhar celebrate Jia's birthday!....

its 1130 pm,,,,shekhar is almost done putting up candles around the verandah....Kshom ne aunty aur priya ko sakhti se mana kiya hay keh jia ko kuch nahin batana,,,,,kshom as usual khanay peenay kee cheezain set ker rehaa hay,,,,,,

uss ka bus nahin chal rehaa thaa keh saara cake jia keh aanay se pehle hee k haa jaye,,,,bohat mushkil se sab ne use roka!

now its 12,,,

sab jia keh room main jatay haintau daikhtay hain keh woh apnay room main hee nahin hay!

every1 is shocked now!.....sab se buri haalat tau kshom aur shekhar kee hay,,,,yeh surprise unhi ka plan kiya huaa thaa

shekhar: kshom! main jia ko ghar keh ander dhoondta hoon,tu bahir dhoond!

donon bohat paraishaan ho chukay hain coz raat keh 12 bajay jia jaa kahan sakti hay!

Kshom bahir kee taraf bhaaga!....

lawn main dhoonda uss ko,nahin milli,peechay waali side per gaya,,,,wahan per bhee nahin milli....

woh kaafi paraishaan huaa,,,,,uss ne awaz bhee lagayi,,magar kaheen se koi jawab na aaya,,,,

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so gusy any guesses keh jia kahan gayee hogee?

awesome

please continue soon

i think that jia might be in the verandah

Jia is probably hiding somewhere to suprise Kshom and Shekar.....

okz ji tau lets continue!

by the way let me tel u one thing!,,,,,this is the third part,,,,,,i'll end the story by about 10 or 15 parts since i dun wanna drag it!,,,,,

and sorry for being late!

yes friends!

u were right!

jia was hiding!

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Kshom bahir verandah kee taraf gaya tau usse jia ka dopatta nazar aaya,woh bhaag ker wahan gaya magar tabtak dopatta ghayab ho chuka thaa,,,,,phir usse payal kee awaz aayi,woh murra,,,magar tab tak payal ke awaz gum ho chuki thee..woh behudd paraishaan huaa keh jia gayee kahan,,,

tabhi jia ne socha keh ab aur pariashaan nahin kerna!

aur udhar gharri ne 12 bajaaye,aur idhar jia kshom keh samnay aagayee!

K: kahan chali gayee theen jia.sab kitna paraishaan ho rehay thay?koi khayal bhee hay nahin!

J: mujhe birthday tau wish ker do!daantna shuru ho gaye ho!

K( ghussa khatam kerta hay): a veyr very happy birthday to my shweet,loving,janu friend,may GOD give u loads n loads of happiness!....per ab yeh bataao keh yeh sab mazaaq kiya tha?

J: kuch bhee nahin thaa!,bus apni birthday per tum se sab se pehle wish laina chahti thee

yeh keh ker woh ander bhaag gayee aur Kshom sochta reh gaya keh yeh sab kiay thaa!

back to Jia's rooM!,,,she apologizes from Shekhar,,,aur phir sab mil ker use wish kertay hain,woh cake kaat'ti hay,dua'en samait'ti hay aur so jaati hay!

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next day at college!

kshom aur shekhar as usual jia ka wait ker rehay hain,magar Kshom kuch aur soch rehaa hay keh kal jia ne shekhar per kshom ko kiyon prefer kiya!,,,,kiya wajah thee aakhir!,halankeh jia aur shekhar tau bachpan keh dost thay!...tabhi jia aayi aur teenon class kee taraf bhaagay!

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issi tarah masti main,moj main,hallay gullay main,din guzartay chalay gaye!aur phir college ka bhee end ho gaya!....uss din farewell party thee jab shekhar ne Kshom ko fone kiya!....

S: kshom! aik baat kerni hay tujh se,,,free hay naa?

K: haan free hoon! bolo!

S: yaar! i like jia,,,,

K(us kee baat kaat'tay huay): woh tau main bhe kerta hoon!

S: kiyaaaa,tu usse pasand kerta hay( a bit sad n angy)

K: haan kerta hoon,tabhi tau woh meri dost hay!,,,

S: sirf dostti kee hadd tak like kerta hay naa!,,,

K: haan main tau,,,,,,,,,wait a minute! dun tell me that u have started liking jia in other sense!

S: wohi tau batanay kee koshish ker rehaa hoon!

K: dats gr8 yaar!aaj acha moqah hay,apnay dil kee baat keh day uss se,,,
kiya baat hay,,,,kiay jorri hay tum donon kee!

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Jia( talking to her self n getting ready for the farewell party):aaj main us se apnay dil kee baat zaroor kahoon gee,kitna budhu hay na owh,itnay salon ka saath hay humara per tab bhee meri ankhon se mere mann ka haal nahin jaan paaya,,,,chalo koi baat nahin!,aaj zaban se keh doon gee,,,,uffffffff! us keh expressions daikhnay walay hon gay!,,,

she smiles to her self! and calls her ullu friends,shekhar n Kshom to pick her up!

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now folks u tell me!

jia loves whom?

kshom or shekhar?

and what will happen next?

this is the last time i am writing this,and i am gonna end this FF in this episode!

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so lets continue!

jia rans towards Kshom!,,,,,and upon reaching him,she stand still with her heavy breaths!

K: jia! aaram se,,,,kahan bhaagi jaarahi ho?

J: Kshom! mujhe tumse kuch kehna hay!,,,,

K: haan kaho!,,magar zara jaldi coz koi tumse bhee kuch kehna chahta hay!

J: kon?....aur kiya kehna chahta hay!

K: peechay murr ker daikho!,,,

Jia turns around and sees Shekhar there with flowers in his hand,,,,wo jia kee taraf aata hay tau jia usse rok daiti hay!

J: shekhar! iss se pehle keh tum kuch kaho,,,main kuch kehna chahti hoon,,,,shekhar! aaj main tumhari ankhon main woh daikh rahi hoon jo meri ankhon main kshom keh liye hay!,,,,,aaj main Kshom se yehi kehnay aayi thee keh main uss se mohabbat kerti hoon,,,,,shekhar! main tumhain takleef nahin daina chahti,tum mere bachpan keh dost ho,,,magar SIRF DOST!,,,aur kuch nahin!....

s: aray jia! tum ne yeh kaisay samajh liya keh main tumse mohabbat ka iqrar kernay aaya hoon,bulkeh main tau tum se Kshom keh behalf per baat kernay aaya thaa!

J: kiya matlab?,,kshom khud nahin keh sakta thaa!

S: jiaaa! tum Kshom ko jaanti ho naa,woh iss mumaalay main bilkul nikamma hay!,,,iss liye main ne socha keh main hee tum se baat ker loon!

K: magar shekhar!,,,,tum tau,,,,,

S: aray Kshom! tu bhee naa,chal jo baat tu nahin keh saka,,,,Jia ne keh dee!,,,,,hay naa jia!,,,,waisay kiya baat hay!,,,,kiya jodi lag rahi hay tum dono kee!..a match made in heaven!,,,,

aur yoon shekhar jia ka haath Kshom keh haath main day daita hay!,,,,

and the both of them dance on

tere naam hum ne kiya hay jeevan apna saara sanam,,,,

after the part,,,Kshom drops Jia at her home aur khud shekhar se milnay chal jata hay!

K: shekhar! kiyon kiya tu ne woh sab kuch jab keh tu jaanta thaa keh jia se main nahin,tu piyar kerta hay!,,,,

S: kshom!,,mohabbat sirf apni khushi nahin daikhti,,,,mohabbat apnay mehboob kee khusi diakhti hay!,,,,jia ke khushi tum se hay,,,mujh se nahin!,,,aur jis main jia khush,main bhee khush!,,,,aur suno! tum meri taraf se bilkul fikr mat kerna,,,aaj keh ba'ad main jia aur tumharay beech nahin aaon gaa!.....main jaa rehaa hoon!,,,humesha humesha keh liye London shift ho rehaa hoon!

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After 8 yrs!

J: Kshom! zara tum gurya ko homework kerwa do,,,,main zara payal ko daikh loon!,,,

K: acha!,idhar aaya mera chaand!

J: kshom! shekhar ka kuch pata chala,,,,woh tau humari shaadi keh ba'ad aisa ghayab huaa hay keh pata nahin kahan gum ho gaya hay!....

K: ummmm!,nahin!,,,,

ab kshom uss ko kiya batata!keh shekhar kis wajah se inhain chorr gaya hay!,,,,woh tau bus her waqt shekhar kee khushi keh liya duaa kerta hay!,,,,

door bell rings,,,,

kshom opens the door!

aur saamnay Shekhar kharra hay with a beautiful lady and a cute lil boy!,,,,

K: shekharrrr! tuuuuuu!,,,,,,jia zara bahir aao,daikho kon aaya hay!,,,,

J: shekhar,,,,tummmm,,,,,aur yeh yaqeenan tumhari biwi hogee,,,hay naa!

S; aray,ander bhee anay do gay ya nahiN!,,,,haan bhai! yeh meri better half hain,nethra!,,,,aur nethra in se milo,,,,,yeh!

N: jaanti hoon! yeh Kshom hay aur yeh jia,,,hay naa?

J: aray wah shekhar,,,tum humain bhoolay nahin,acha huaa tum ne shaadi ker lee!,,,

K: acha tum log ander jaao,main aur shekhar bahir hee baith'tay hain!,,,

both ladies go inside!

S: main jaanta hoon! tum kiya poochna chahtay ho!,,,Kshom! woh ehsaas sirf waqti thaa jo nethra keh milnay keh ba'ad khatam ho gaya!,,,,waqti iss tarah se keh main ne samajh liya thaa keh woh mohabbat mere naseeb main hee nahin thee aur jab koi cheez naseeb main na ho tau shikwa nahin kerna chahiye,,,,issi liye main khush hoon,bohat khush hoon!,,,,,,,

Kshom smiles and says!

K: tum ne sahih kaha,jia mere naseeb main thee iss liye mujhe mill gayee!,,,aur main bhee bohat khush hoon!

and then at this note,,,the FF comes to end!

hope u liked it!