KaYa FF:PyarThoHonaHiTha(intense) Discontinued...Note On Page 143 - Page 76

Originally posted by: manaalkhan

God this update was amazing zannat...👏👏

Thanks Mini😊
& Raman DI hats off to you👍🏼 amazing story...
So kabir let the mystery of the night unfold to ananya😆😆
Poor girl...!! she was so tensed..😉
OH my god...!! another kiss☺️ I think they will surely set a new record of kissing when they even don't want to see each others face🤪 so kabir taught ananya what real kiss means😳
Go kabir go...!!! 😆 finally kabir got to know about the dogwaiting eagerly to know what's gonna happen next...!!! all in all loving the pace of the story..!!
continue soon & thanQ for the Pm dear...

Originally posted by: sutapabanerjee

Rocking update.

Raman only deserves a big applaud.

You definitely do Raman⭐️

Ananya doing stupid things has really become your nature! How come wearing a payal you can run away from HIM. ( I know 😆)

I bet Ananya nothing happened don't over stress your mind in this state the karoos is only teasing you.

Ogling lusting everything happening. I so loved their discussions conversations negotiations there end result is sooo thrilling as Mr. Sharma always loosing control.

Love sick puppy is now furious against the puppy and his Mommy dear but must say Sweetoo loves his Daddy too much.

Thanks Zannat for the PM but you missed me on the 7B reply under so much pressure to update

( I am extremely sorry about that Sutapa...I have no idea ..how did that happen???...so I went back and I read your comment...and I loved your take on that update )Take your time and update let the suspense hang.

Thanks ...Loved your take on this update too😳 ...updating soon 😊

Originally posted by: Ksfandishi

Originally posted by: sonia_adelaide

Love u zannat and Raman

Love u too Sonia❤️
U alive those characters so beautifully

I know she is great ⭐️
Love led the way kabir is sinking likes helpless teen. 😭
Sweetu is another catalyst for this two crazy people's

I am sure kabir is going to get another beautiful penalty
for his expensive shoes from his beautiful life partner,

Ohh this the first time I am so happy to see a mess like this
Ananya is loving this negotiations I believe
She will make kabir crazy for saving sweetu I am dam sure
This time the negotiations should be more hot and crazy


Love u Raman
Keep writing
We r such a fan of urs
Hope when u will be a celebrity writer U will not forget us

Thanks for pm me
Update soon
Bye
Sonia 😛

Originally posted by: -Prinky-

As always it was Awesome !!!!!

wo Negotiation part...ohh my...she was just driving him crazy...

but wo last me kya hua...now it was the HAD for Mr. Sharma...

so eager to read more...

plz come soon with next update...

Originally posted by: -purnima-

Its kiss day & I am reading ...oops Mr Sharma is explaining what is a kiss 😳 😳 ... 😆😆 dat was a nice learning experience though lost focus 😳 😳

OMG purnima Di...I just can't 🤣
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Ok, focus back after a day 😆😆😆 lovely UD 😛😛
Thank god 😆
Mr. Sharma was having fun I guess, teasing his wife 😛😛😆 poor girl confused "kuch hua tha ya nahi" (nahi 😆)... waise Mr. Sharma, Ananya ripped off your shirt ....& you dont seem to be minding it the least 😆😆😆...man seemed to have loving it, he cud have always taken back shirt with him 😆😆 but he didn't wanted to miss opportunity to tease his wife 😆😆😆 & must say ...quite a controlled man 😛😆
He is😆
The name of game is "control"...it wud be interesting to see who looses it first 😛😆 ...& Kabir playing pool .must have been a sight ...

Waise, Mr. Sharma is this the way to negotiate?

...I doubt how long you will be able to control yourself 😛😆...even your wife 😆 waise Mrs. Sharma ...mujhe bhi naukri ki zarut hai 😆😆 can I apply too, Kabir 😛😆 7 ko employment di, ek aur sahi 😆 Mrs. Sharma will give another kiss 😆

I just can't Purnima Di...Shaking my head😆

& Sweetooo run for your life Baby 😳😳...come to me I will hide you 😆😆 let your mommy & daddy dear sort out 😆😆😆 coz can imagine Gussa+Kiss is on the way ...or may be time for some caveman romance.Lets see😉

By the way, Mr. Sharma...will gift you brand new shoes as a Vday gift, as many as pairs you ask 😛😆😆 Sweetooo ko maaf kardo 😛😆😆
Yes do Mr Sharma 😛
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p.s.--wonderful effort from the writer ...& ofcourse putting in extra effort to post it here... 😃😃
Keep the updates coming 😃😃😃

As always Loved your take on the update😃

Thanks...Whole Credit goes to Raman Di 😳

Updating soon😳

Originally posted by: fym23

Valentine special ek update aaj banta hai...pyar to hona Hi tha...plz

Originally posted by: Komalbubly

Amazing ...

I loved ur story dear ...

Thanks for pm ...

Originally posted by: sonia_adelaide

Ohh zannat
Please request Raman to make. Valentine's Day special.
Sorry about that Sonia...was busy 😔

Please please please

Originally posted by: Jeneviv

I read d actual fanfic

It is for kithani mohobbatein hai 2

That story is not complete

So will u write d rest on ur own??