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@sridhsc

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Posted: 9 years ago

#61

Hi Riya,

Too many Riya's in I F

Was waiting for the continuation of ur fics (the wait & first meeting)

But still happy with the new fic

Well penned and ur awesome writer.

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luvraj4ever

@luvraj4ever

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Posted: 9 years ago

#62

Liking the updates...waiting for the next update. ..pls update a bit longer this time...

Continue soon

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RNpoint1857

@RNpoint1857

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Posted: 9 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: sridhsc
Hi Riya,
Too many Riya's in I F
Was waiting for the continuation of ur fics (the wait & first meeting)
But still happy with the new fic
Well penned and ur awesome writer.

Lolz! Yes indeed too many Riya on IF 😉 right now my whole focus is on Rajveer-Naina story, will write the next part of KAYA after finishing RN story.

Thank you for liking this story. 😊 It's a small story so it will end soon!

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RNpoint1857

@RNpoint1857

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: luvraj4ever
Liking the updates...waiting for the next update. ..pls update a bit longer this time...
Continue soon

Thank you for liking the updates. Will update soon. 😊 Will try to update longer. 😊

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terrifictanzy

@terrifictanzy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#65

Waah !! Naughty kabeer 😆 kabab mai haddi 😛 haha it was a superb update continue soon

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RNpoint1857

@RNpoint1857

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Posted: 9 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: terrifictanzy
Waah !! Naughty kabeer 😆 kabab mai haddi 😛 haha it was a superb update continue soon

Thank you 😊

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RNpoint1857

@RNpoint1857

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Posted: 9 years ago

#67

PART 4 :

"Hello""Haan Ananya, hum bus pohnch rahe hain ghar!""Pohnch rahe hain? Par apne to kaha tha ki late ho jaoge?""Han beta par jaldi hi ho gya sub kuch zada time nahi laga" "Oh acha theek hai Ma. Main rakhti hun""Ok beta" As soon as she ends the call, Ananya pushes Kabeer to go back "Arey kya hua?" asks Kabeer. "Jaldi jaiye Ma aur Armaan aa rahe hain" "Arey par abhi tak to humari puri baat hi nahi hui!" Still pushing him towards the door she says "kal office mein kar lenge baat bhi aur..." Her line makes him to stop, he says "A ek minute baat bhi aur... Aur kya?" Ananya lowers her eyes "Mujhey nahi pata. Jayiye aap yahan se" she whispers.Rubbing her right cheek with the back of his fingers, he says "bye" and stares at her."Bye" she whispers back, looking at him intently. He comes closer to her slowly, her heartbeats pick up pace, as he reaches to her cheeks she closes her eyes, unable to see the forthcoming situation, she just wants to feel it. Slowly and silently he places a soft kiss on her right cheek, which makes her to blush. She opens her eyes and seeing him into his eyes and smiles. He smiles too, then saying bye for the last time, he leaves.

-THE END-

Edited by Sterolinelover - 9 years ago

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kajalkalwani

@kajalkalwani

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Posted: 9 years ago

#68

Wow. Ananya scared cuz her mom is coming. Nice update

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RNpoint1857

@RNpoint1857

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Posted: 9 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: kajalkalwani
Wow. Ananya scared cuz her mom is coming. Nice update

THANK YOU! 😊

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Sanchari

@BedouinMe

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#70

Ufff ! Yeh Anita ji bhi na ! :( I was hoping that she had called to inform that they won't be returning home at all, for that night ! ;) Bichaare love birds ! :( Romance shuru hone se pehle hi grahan lag gaya ;)

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