SS : KABEER AND ANANYA - HOME VISIT updated Pg 10 LAST PART

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KABEER AND ANANYA -

HOME VISIT

Hello everyone! Although I am working on my Rajveer-Naina fanfic these days. But I constantly get requests to write something new on Kabeer and Ananya. Although I am thinking of bringing another part of my previously written fanfics : KABEER AND ANANYA - THE FIRST MEETING & KABEER AND ANANYA - THE WAIT, but of course it has to wait as for now, because I am thoroughly indulged in writing RAJVEER AND NAINA : THE MYSTERY BEGINS! But I thought of writing a SS on KAYA for my readers. I hope you'll enjoy reading. Do post your feedback, would love to read them! 😊

P.S. : You can check my other works on KAYA by clicking 'MY INDEX' in my signature. 😊



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PART 1:

Ananya sits on her bed, wearing her white night dress, suddenly her phone rings. The name 'Kabeer Sir' flashing on the screen, makes her heart to skip a beat. Although they have talked on professional matters on messages, but that's the first time, he is calling her. Anticipating how will she feel when she'll listen to his voice over phone for the first time, succeeds in giving her ticklings. She stares at the clock, it's 9 pm. Then she peeps towards the main door from her bedroom, to make it sure that her mother and brother haven't returned back home yet. After assuring herself that she is alone, she smiles and receives the call. She remains silent for some seconds, to bring back her heartbeats to normal speed, then whispers "hello!"


The inhalation of Kabeer, proves her that she too affects him, as he affects her. Then a sudden thought pops up into her mind which makes her angry at him in a loving way 'agar inhe mere hone na hone se farak padhta hai to fir ye mujhey batate kyu nahi ki ye mere barey mein kya sochte hain! Humesha ladna zaruri hai kya? Pyaar se baat nahi kar sakte mujhse Sir?' Dragging her attention back to the present situation, she rolls her eyes. "Mujhey tumse kuch important discuss karna hai" says Kabeer, uttering each word slowly, in no rush. "Han main bhi konsa keh rahi hu ki apne mujhse aise hi baat karne k liye phone kia hai. I know koi baat hi hogi important, warna apko meri yaad aati bhi kahan hai" "Kya Miss Kashyap?" asks Kabeer, although he is fully aware what she said and meant. "Kuch nahi. Kahiye kya kehna tha apko" "Wo main... Waise tum busy to nahi ho na? Time hai na tumhare paas?" "Haan Ma aur Armaan ghar pe nahi hain to main sone to wali nahi hun abhi". Listening that aunty and Armaan are not at home, a smile comes on his face as he thinks of some naughty idea. "Hmm... Fir hum kya karein?" he asks. "Kya karein? Apko to kuch baat karni thi na important?" "Haan karni to thi but I guess that can wait" "kyu? Ab wo baat important nahi rahi?" "Nahi important to ab bhi hai wo baat, but ab usse zada important baat yaad aa gyi mujhey" "kya?" whispers Ananya. "Kya hua Ananya tum upset ho?" "Kya farak padhta hai apko sir? Anyways apki important baat kya..." as she was about to continue, she hears the beep sound, indicating that he has already ended the call. She tries again saying "hello" but the only thing she hears is the 'beep'. She tries to call him back, but he doesn't attend the call.


After sometime she hears a ping on her mobile, quickly she checks her mobile, praying under her breathe "kash message sir ka ho!" A smile comes to her face when she finds his name flashing on the screen, it was indeed Kabeer's message. Quickly she checks the message and reads 'darwaza kholo!' At first she doesn't understand why he wrote that, but as soon as her mind admits that he might be standing out, her whole body gets current running through it, this is the result of the mere thought of Kabeer. She quickly runs towards the door to open it and finds Kabeer standing there. They keep staring at each other.

Edited by Sterolinelover - 9 years ago
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Welcome back mam🤗...so happy..kya baat do do treat... Rajveer n Naina and now KaYa🥳..
Read it in one go...started superbly...
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Awesome awesome update loved their cute conversation on phone😉 waah direct ghar PR as gaya...plz continue soon thanks for pm😉😆
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Originally posted by: Aalina.

Welcome back mam🤗...so happy..kya baat do do treat... Rajveer n Naina and now KaYa🥳..

Read it in one go...started superbly...


Thank you! Thank you! 😃 hahaha! 😆 🤗 Wrote this a few months ago. Thought of posting today. That too I made this decision because it's an SS. Will end soon. 😉 My main focus is still on Rajveer and Naina. ❤️😳❤️ 'Do dil mil rahe hain, magar chupke chupke' - for Rajveer and Naina 😉
Edited by Sterolinelover - 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: 0913155

Awesome awesome update loved their cute conversation on phone😉 waah direct ghar PR as gaya...plz continue soon thanks for pm😉😆


Thank you! Thank you! Haan dekho besharam Kabeer 😉 Will surely PM! 😊
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THANK YOU! 😊
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Originally posted by: Sterolinelover


Thank you! Thank you! 😃 hahaha! 😆 🤗 Wrote this a few months ago. Thought of posting today. That made this decision because it's an OS. Will end soon. 😉 My main focus is still on Rajveer and Naina. ❤️😳❤️ 'Do dil mil rahe hain, magar chupke chupke' - for Rajveer and Naina😉


Hey,have I missed something there? Do dil mil to rhe the..but ladte ladte..u have updated it today?.
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Originally posted by: Aalina.


Hey,have I missed something there? Do dil mil to rhe the..but ladte ladte..u have updated it today?..n u have not updated ur signature as u mentioned in the abt PS.


Why? Can't you see in my signature it's written MY WORKS? I am talking about that. 😊

And yes I have updated it today itself. Or else why would I choose to send PM today? 😉 And how dare you think ki tumhe PM nahi karungi agar maine kuch new likha to! 😡
Edited by Sterolinelover - 9 years ago
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Wow...finally...u listend us...a new story...with completely new idea...thats just great...👏👏
Part 1 completely gave me a reminiscence..of thr initial talks n convos...awww...that wae so nice...😳
Annie's sweet feelings... kabirs naughtiness ...though initially friendship wali...n that being her EIC...He arrives at her place...great...
So ...update soon...now...waitng to see..how kabir surprises Annie as her EIC...😆😳n thanks 4 pm😊

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