Kabeer and Ananya ~ The First Meeting (COMPLETED) - Page 3

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@pd786 Thank you so much! 😊 Will surely PM you. 😳
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Part 7:

Relaxing on his chair Kabeer starts thinking about Ananya and unconsciously closes his
eyes. "Main tang aa gyi hun Kabeer tumhare roz roz ke sawalon se. Main samjh nahi pa rahi ki main iss situation ko kaise tackle karun? Akhir tum bhi to office jate ho, kabhi kabar late bhi aate ho, to kabhi agar main late ho gyi to kaunsa pahad tut gya? At least tum jaise Tarini ke saath faltu mein time waste karte ho main to aise waise kisi bhi ladke ke sath time waste nahi karti". "Shreya..." Kabeer shouts at her and raises his hand.
"Tum uss ladki ke liye mere upar hath uthane wale the aj? Pata nahi usne kya jadu kar dia hai tum par"."Usne kuch nahi kiya. Main bus ussey insaaf dilana chahta hoon. Aise mein agar wo meri dost bann gyi hai to galat kya hai is mein? Tum kyu ussey humesha hum dono ke beech le aati ho?" "Main le aati hun Kabeer? Nahi balki mujhey to aisa lagta hai ki main tum dono ke beech aa rahi hun. You know what, shayad mujhe hi tum dono ke raaste se chaley jana chahiye". Packing her bag, Shreya calls her Dad "Dad I can't stay here any longer, I am coming back home" her father's answer makes her halt in the sitting area of Kabeer's home. "Alright Papa if you also, like everyone think that I am at fault, so it's okay" ending the call, without giving a chance to her father to reply, she makes her way out of the home."It's your decision to leave, I won't stop you. Par agar tumne iss ghar ki dehleez se ek baar kadam bahar rakh diya to yaad rakhna main tumhe kabhi wapas nahi aane dunga, na iss ghar mein aur na hi apni zindagi me" Kabeer warns
Shreya.
"You have already let me out of your life a long time ago Kabeer, staying at home and showing others that we are a 'happy family', I can't do that" saying this Shreya makes her way out of Kabeer's home. During her process of going out, her black saree gets stuck to a nail of the door, she pulls it free and in the state of anger she doesn't notice that the border of her saree tears off a little. Opening his eyes, Kabeer pulls drawer of his desk and brings out the torn piece of saree and stares at it, giving it a smirk, he keeps it back into the drawer.
"I am too tired Maa, please give a glass of water" says Ananya to her mother, as she sits on the dinning table of her drawing room. "Bringing in a moment" saying this her mother turns towards the kitchen."Hi Didi how was your interview?" asks Armaan, excited. "Okay tell me, were you able to answer all the questions you were asked? What all questions were you asked? Were you asked to show demo? When are you going to come on television?" "Bus! Bus Armaan. Bechari abhi aayi hai, ussey kuch der baithne to de" says their mother. "Koi baat nahi Maa. Armaan come here, I'll tell you everything". "He told me I don't deserve this job". As Ananya ends up saying this line, her mother and brother exclaims together "kya"! "You didn't get the job?" asks her mother. "Aapka jana waste hua?" asks her brother. Getting angry she scolds them "Yahi problem hai ap logon ki. Isiliye main aisi hoon. Bina sune kisi bhi faisle mein pohonch jate ho! Kabhi dusro ko bhi sunn lia karo. Hadd hai!""Ye tu keh rhi hai Ananya?" asks her mother, astonished.
Edited by Sterolinelover - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice
thank you so much for PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
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@sampa79 not a problem at all! 😊
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Lovely update!!
The flashback scene was very well written! !
Looking forward to KaYa!!
Please update soon and pm me!


Thanks a lot for the previous pm 😊
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@_habiba_ Thank you so much. 😊 Will update soon. 😊
Edited by Sterolinelover - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome update
what is kabir planning?
the first para creates mystery
kabir thinks about ananya
then takes out shreya's saari and smirks
is he planning something?
anyways that will be seen
thanks for the pm
update soon
continue to pm me about the updates and if you could just send me the link of the thread
it becomes easy or else i have to search the thread on reporters forum
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Keep guessing! 😉 Will update soon. 😳
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PART 8:
Ananya looks at her mother and tries to hide her smile, but her family is too smart to come under her influence. "Jab hansi aye na to hans lena chahiye" saying this she slaps lovingly on Ananya's forehead. "Chal haath muh dho le khana lagati hun" "haan jaldi de do bohot bhook lagi hai. Thak bhi gyi hun khakar so bhi jati hun. Kal subh jaldi uth kar office bhi jana hai".
Next morning Ananya wakes up before the alarm clock buzzes. She notices the time, it's six in the morning.
"You still have time Ananya, sleep" she assures herself. 'YOU ARE NOT PERMITTED TO WORK HERE IN KKN' Kabeer's voice in her head jerks her up. Sitting up on her bed she pulls her quilt. The breeze entering through the opened window brushes the curls of her hair. Enjoying the feeling, Ananya leaves her bed and stands in front of her room's window. "Aaj se main aapke saath kaam karne wali noon Kabeer Sharma, tayar hai na ap mujhe jhelne ke liye?" smiling she moves towards her bed and pulls out a piece of paper from underneath the pillow kept adjacent to her pillow. Sitting at the corner of the bed, "Hmmm... zada khush hone ki zarurat nahi hai, kal raat ko neend aa gyi thi apse baat krte krte, fir aj jaldi bhi to uthna tha, aur wo bhi kis liye? Aapse milne ke liye hi. Warna to ap wahin rahenge" she indicates towards her study table with her finger. Standing up she places the article on Kabeer, into her diary, kept on her study table and rushes to get ready.
Edited by Sterolinelover - 9 years ago
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Nice part again !!👍🏼
Thanks for the fast updating !
Love the way of Ananya's characterization !
Self-confident and career orientated!!
Looking forward to KaYa's scenes!!!
And hope for their sweet nokhjok 😛
Keep it up!

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