KaYa OS : Surrender (2/7) - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
What was that??????? U brought back memories for me and am all tears now looking at their love for each other. I don't have more words to praise this piece of work. This is an excellent form of art
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
Thanks Avantika.
I have been reading it on loop.
Reading it for the 5th time now.
Just a query...
In your titles you always write a number/ number eg. 2/7. What does that mean????
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
Beautifully written.. Enjoyed every bit of it.
Happy that Kabir had confronted Malvika in front of Ananya I wish something of this sort happens in the show I mean Malvika plan playing back on her..
Loved the scene between Kabir and Ananya in his cabin.. It was wonderfully showcased..
Do write something on shreya's entry too..Please
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24




*finding that water bottle 😆*

Ressieee... 🤣

Hayeee... u r the killing me.

Ek toh voh spoiler dikhake *dhiskayoo*

Upar se my LSD 😆, as in ASD dikhake *dhiskhayoo*

Aur ab ye!

Bacchi ke jaan logi kya 😲

Waise arz kiya hai...

Na sardi rok paye na zukaam

Jab chale Kabir ka charm

Phir dil chale dhadaam dhadaam

*seeing tomatoes thrown at me*

Baaki ka baad main!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: IArmageddonI





*finding that water bottle 😆*

Ressieee... 🤣

Hayeee... u r the killing me.

Ek toh voh spoiler dikhake *dhiskayoo*

Upar se my LSD 😆, as in ASD dikhake *dhiskhayoo*

Aur ab ye!

Bacchi ke jaan logi kya 😲

Waise arz kiya hai...

Na sardi rok paye na zukaam

Jab chale Kabir ka charm

Phir dil chale dhadaam dhadaam

*seeing tomatoes thrown at me*

Baaki ka baad main!


Hailaa.. tauba tauba..
ASD is not LSD.. *shakes head till it almost falls off*
Woh toh meri cute-si pahadon wali louuve ishtory hai.. 😉

Waaay dooor from Hotwa or Mr.Sharma's charm n sex appeal..
Ab ka karein.. 12 saal gehra pyaar hai.. zukhaam n bukhaar se badawala loveria hai yeh!
Sheesh.. waah waaah! Kya sher tha... aisa dhadaam dhadaam hua hai ki bass poochiye matt.. 😳

Haan ji! Hum waitings..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: IArmageddonI





*finding that water bottle 😆*

Ressieee... 🤣

Hayeee... u r the killing me.

Ek toh voh spoiler dikhake *dhiskayoo*

Upar se my LSD 😆, as in ASD dikhake *dhiskhayoo*

Aur ab ye!

Bacchi ke jaan logi kya 😲

Waise arz kiya hai...

Na sardi rok paye na zukaam

Jab chale Kabir ka charm

Phir dil chale dhadaam dhadaam

*seeing tomatoes thrown at me*

Baaki ka baad main!


Hailaa.. tauba tauba..
ASD is not LSD.. *shakes head till it almost falls off*
Woh toh meri cute-si pahadon wali louuve ishtory hai.. 😉

Waaay dooor from Hotwa or Mr.Sharma's charm n sex appeal..
Ab ka karein.. 12 saal gehra pyaar hai.. zukhaam n bukhaar se badawala loveria hai yeh!
Sheesh.. waah waaah! Kya sher tha... aisa dhadaam dhadaam hua hai ki bass poochiye matt.. 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
You express everything so beautifully! I am hooked to you writing style 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
I want cvs to use ur story...will love it...brilliant
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
lovely os
i still wanna know what did tarini tell kabir
loved the os
very precisely written

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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
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Yes Avni ji... u killed me in this one! I am nobody to state how wonderfully u write...

It's like constable DIG ka case le raha hai... lol...

Fantastic, passionate and full of Avni-ness...

Maar hi dalo humein!

Eeeshhh

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