KaYa OS : Surrender (2/7)

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Chitra RaviKiran

@chitloner

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#21

What was that??????? U brought back memories for me and am all tears now looking at their love for each other. I don't have more words to praise this piece of work. This is an excellent form of art

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shazm

@shazm

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Thanks Avantika.

I have been reading it on loop.

Reading it for the 5th time now.

Just a query...

In your titles you always write a number/ number eg. 2/7. What does that mean????

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ssss97

@ssss97

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Beautifully written.. Enjoyed every bit of it.
Happy that Kabir had confronted Malvika in front of Ananya I wish something of this sort happens in the show I mean Malvika plan playing back on her..

Loved the scene between Kabir and Ananya in his cabin.. It was wonderfully showcased..

Do write something on shreya's entry too..Please

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IArmageddonI

@IArmageddonI

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

*finding that water bottle 😆*

Ressieee... 🤣

Hayeee... u r the killing me.

Ek toh voh spoiler dikhake *dhiskayoo*

Upar se my LSD 😆, as in ASD dikhake *dhiskhayoo*

Aur ab ye!

Bacchi ke jaan logi kya 😲

Waise arz kiya hai...

Na sardi rok paye na zukaam

Jab chale Kabir ka charm

Phir dil chale dhadaam dhadaam

*seeing tomatoes thrown at me*

Baaki ka baad main!

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: IArmageddonI

*finding that water bottle 😆*

Ressieee... 🤣

Hayeee... u r the killing me.

Ek toh voh spoiler dikhake *dhiskayoo*

Upar se my LSD 😆, as in ASD dikhake *dhiskhayoo*

Aur ab ye!

Bacchi ke jaan logi kya 😲

Waise arz kiya hai...

Na sardi rok paye na zukaam

Jab chale Kabir ka charm

Phir dil chale dhadaam dhadaam

*seeing tomatoes thrown at me*

Baaki ka baad main!

Hailaa.. tauba tauba..

ASD is not LSD.. *shakes head till it almost falls off*

Woh toh meri cute-si pahadon wali louuve ishtory hai.. 😉

Waaay dooor from Hotwa or Mr.Sharma's charm n sex appeal..

Ab ka karein.. 12 saal gehra pyaar hai.. zukhaam n bukhaar se badawala loveria hai yeh!

Sheesh.. waah waaah! Kya sher tha... aisa dhadaam dhadaam hua hai ki bass poochiye matt.. 😳

Haan ji! Hum waitings..

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: IArmageddonI

*finding that water bottle 😆*

Ressieee... 🤣

Hayeee... u r the killing me.

Ek toh voh spoiler dikhake *dhiskayoo*

Upar se my LSD 😆, as in ASD dikhake *dhiskhayoo*

Aur ab ye!

Bacchi ke jaan logi kya 😲

Waise arz kiya hai...

Na sardi rok paye na zukaam

Jab chale Kabir ka charm

Phir dil chale dhadaam dhadaam

*seeing tomatoes thrown at me*

Baaki ka baad main!