KaYa OS : Surrender (2/7) - Page 2

Wow! You are a fabulous writer!! Can't imagine the actual scene to be more sensual than what you portrayed. Beautifully written.

Thanks ! Hope you feeling better ! Missed your analysis were really looking forward to read your take on the show !

Awesome yaar..

Fabulous Avantika...

thnx .. had missed u! How r u feeling now?

Oh this is amazing in so many different levels!!! All that feels!!!!

It's a wonderful update

Just finished reading it...and am I not in awe of your exquisite writing abilities...how can that even be possible?? You seriously bring these two to life Avni. If there's someone after the cvs who u/stands their essence, its you. How beautifully you made them express all their emotions, their pain, their love without any mention of the obvious...the three words. Specially the way he claims his rights back on her by showing his anger and the way she struggles to bare her soul in front of the only man who has the ability to rile her up, Its sheer beauty <3 I feel I have only one term for this OS of yours...intimate! Not just in a sensual way, but the way he tries to explore her deepest emotions by questioning her inability in judging her friend and how she surrenders to his love, ignoring all the rants and shouts the sensible part of her conscious makes...it's pure intimacy at its best!

Originally posted by: Malika

Just finished reading it...and am I not in awe of your exquisite writing abilities...how can that even be possible?? You seriously bring these two to life Avni. If there's someone after the cvs who u/stands their essence, its you. How beautifully you made them express all their emotions, their pain, their love without any mention of the obvious...the three words. Specially the way he claims his rights back on her by showing his anger and the way she struggles to bare her soul in front of the only man who has the ability to rile her up, Its sheer beauty <3 I feel I have only one term for this OS of yours...intimate! Not just in a sensual way, but the way he tries to explore her deepest emotions by questioning her inability in judging her friend and how she surrenders to his love, ignoring all the rants and shouts the sensible part of her conscious makes...it's pure intimacy at its best!

Thanks so much for this treat before the actual epi...😳

It was awesome...