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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sona_naksh

superb update
loved it ...n d change in kabir is visible
continue soon

thank you sweetie.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -purnima-

Kabir say a silent thank you...that it was just Sehar bear to find u in compromising position 😆😆😆 & she just thinks it was a cuddle party 😛😆😆...she is too innocent like us to have "head in gutter" 😳😆😆

God forbid if it was Ya Ya 😆😆😆 how u wud have gone explaining I wonder 😆

Arjun & Ya Ya ...good luck to both of you... lets see whats in store for two of u 😊😊😊
Manav bhai, now what this man is hiding 😆😆a secret GF 🤣 which I really doubt 😆😆😆 but Mr. Sharma knows the secret 😆😆😆 wonder what these two are cooking 😆😆😆
Ram 😆😆 hope ur life comes back on track ASAP 😆😆 u get someone to nurse your broken heart 😃😃
Poor Shravan😆😆 got heart attack... Shreya proposing him😆😆😆 lolz both deserved each other🤣 a made for each other couple😆😆



thank you for the comment Di. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
*Writes record* *writes assignment* *writes observation * *replies to comments* *replies to the texts my friends are bombarding me with* *watches a Korean series* *stresses about stress itself * *Pulls her hair* and ya!! *tries to sleep*
*Ufff and that's when she realizes that Niharika darlo has updated*
And she opens the page and reads the first line but.. Exhaustion wins and she dozes off!!! And its when I woke up and switched on my mobile to look at the time that I realized I slept without reading ur update !!!
And the first thing I do this morning is read Falling slowly... ( Even before I hug and wish a good moring to my mom and dad ) .. See ur story is special to me !!
It was really funny and cute !!
Man Shreya you have really lost it isn't it ? Ur upstairs are way more than empty !! It's filled with cobwebs!!
U know niharika at the start when Manav was talking to his *Sweetie * I really felt it was Shreya and I was going "Manav I will screw you!!!!!" And "Niharika I will strangle you"
LOLs !!!
Anyways Richa u better try to find out who that "sweetie" is !! And niharika if u make Manav the danav in ur fic... You better keep ur neck out of my reach !!!
Kabir if bear was like me ur dead !!
Love u sweetheart !!!
*looks at the heading of Falling slowly* and goes *This gal is a damaka for sure !!*
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shinyshajil

*Writes record* *writes assignment* *writes observation * *replies to comments* *replies to the texts my friends are bombarding me with* *watches a Korean series* *stresses about stress itself * *Pulls her hair* and ya!! *tries to sleep*
*Ufff and that's when she realizes that Niharika darlo has updated*
And she opens the page and reads the first line but.. Exhaustion wins and she dozes off!!! And its when I woke up and switched on my mobile to look at the time that I realized I slept without reading ur update !!!
And the first thing I do this morning is read Falling slowly... ( Even before I hug and wish a good moring to my mom and dad ) .. See ur story is special to me !!
It was really funny and cute !!
Man Shreya you have really lost it isn't it ? Ur upstairs are way more than empty !! It's filled with cobwebs!!
U know niharika at the start when Manav was talking to his *Sweetie * I really felt it was Shreya and I was going "Manav I will screw you!!!!!" And "Niharika I will strangle you"
LOLs !!!
Anyways Richa u better try to find out who that "sweetie" is !! And niharika if u make Manav the danav in ur fic... You better keep ur neck out of my reach !!!
Kabir if bear was like me ur dead !!
Love u sweetheart !!!
*looks at the heading of Falling slowly* and goes *This gal is a damaka for sure !!*



I know the struggles. I too am juggling b/w two assignments files each of 100+ page I'll swing the files at proffesors face. They have kept viva on my f**king birthday.
Manav thinks Shreya is some sort of daiyaan,voodoo crap etc. Richa will soon find out .
Bear is this generation kid ! Just wait to see what she does to our KaYa.

PS: I'm not Dhamaka. I is Rapunzel 😆 !
Shiny Chintu chants Rapunzel Rapunzel every time he pings me jab se he's read your comment
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Posted: 9 years ago
I loved the update ...
Now who is this sweetie ??? I hope manav is not cheating on richa
I loved kabir's answer to ananya's ques
And what i loved the most is the cuddle party 😉
Eager to know what will seher tell them...and sometimes i think only niharika knows what will happen when anya will come to know abt her pops relationship
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Posted: 9 years ago
loved the update..
What is Manav bhai is chupaving from Richa and us..?? 😕😕

Uff..Shreya , one dumbo woman.. she could never change... mujhe toh bechare Shravan pe daya aa rahi hai...😆😆😆

Poor father Kabir.. Now what will innocent bear do??😆😆

Is Arjun leaving somewhere.. ??

i guess i asked so many questions in one comment..😛😛

so waiting for answers...😊😊
update soon..😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
A dhamaka update darlo..!! Was literally laughing throughout the update..!!
Seriously.. Lols..!! Poor shravan hope he stays save from that shreya..!!
Arjun-Riv banter was fun..!! Manav dear.. What's the secret..*winks devilishly*
Poor yaya she is so disturbed coz of her SO CALLED MOTHER..
& last but not the least, the cuddling part was just awesome..!! Lols..!!!!!
Continue soon & thanks for the pm dear..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Firstly



Secondly
For commenting super late...was busy with my exams

Now coming to the update

To Manav...
Please don't cheat on Richa if you do

Shravan and Shreya are Match made in Hell...😈...They really deserve each other

My reaction to to the cuddle party

at the end

Lastly
Niharika you are


Love
Zannat❤️🤗

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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 18.

When we play games of thrones.

"Ananya" Kabir whispered out to a sleeping form over his chest trying not to disturb the second form who was also sleeping on him. "Hmmm" Ananya rubbed her eyes & cheekily smiled at him, waking up every morning in this way was the best part of her day.
She then followed his gaze.
"Oh" Ananya's smile grew bigger on spotting a curled up Seher on Kabir's chest too, sleeping soundly probably dreaming about Princes & fancy dresses. "Help" Kabir mouthed to Ananya. Careful enough not to wake up the child, Ananya leaned down & kissed him on cheek. "Figure out yourself" giggling Ananya leaped out from the bed. "Figure out yourself? Are you kidding me? If Seher wakes up, she'll be asking me three hundred questions. God!" He exclaimed, running a hand through his daughter's slight curly black hairs . Seher had always been his powerhouse since her birth, he didn't knew what would he had done if it was not her curling up against him after he'd sent off Anya to boarding at every night after stupid fights Shreya indulged him in. " It's just the start Kabir, Seher you must admit is more difficult to handle. You should really start practising how to indulge her in talks with you. Let me go and wake up Sanjh, he's frightened of waking up alone these days" She pecked him once again before bolting out of the door,Winning the little piece of Kabir's heart once again. In the world where own mother rejected her kids, came Ananya showering love on his kids as that of her own.

Seher wriggled against something hard as she woke up & seeing that their was no possible escape from the hands that engulfed her tightly in place, she sighed in defeat. "Huh! I'm trapped". Contently smiling to himself Kabir kissed her forehead and said "You very well know how to escape it. Don't you" drumming his fingers over her shoulders he left her. "I'm sorry Daddy. But" she bitted her lower lip fighting over the urge to tell her father something. "But I couldn't resisted myselfs from coming to you. I'd a bad dream, some nasty Prince stoles my flower crown Daddy" she mumbled, as Kabir stood up thanking heaven that his investing officer daughter hadn't yet fired a question on him sleeping with Ananya and quickly tossed in a t-shirt before collecting babbling Seher in his arms & walking down the living room.
The sight at living room shocked Kabir as Seher's squealing echoed in their apartment. "Happy Birthday Princess" Ananya greeted Seher as Sanjh, who was perched up on her hips clapped madly. Kabir stood astonished at his own living room,"Down Daddy" Seher pleaded her blasted father thus bringing him out of his stupor. He had forgotten his own daughter's birthday, how worse could all his fatherly instincts go. Slowly setting his jumpy daughter on the floor, he watched as she ran towards Ananya and hugged her. "Da" Sanjh opened his arms signalling his father to come & join them in the cake feast.
Ananya looked at Kabir, who looked like he would burst into tears any moment. Life was hard, and being a single father was even harder. She couldn't ever blame him for forgetting his kid's birthday, his divorce had a effect on him,an adverse effect which he too didn't knew. "Bear! Sanjh, go bring your Daddy" she hushed to the both the toddlers r, Seher holding out her brother's hand immediately ran to their father. "Daddy come cake" Sanjh pulled Kabir 's pyjama as Seher dragged him to the table. "Princess Daddy is sorry. I forgot your birthday" he confessed, "Manav says, mistakes that are not willingly made can be rec rect..." Seher quoted, "Rectified" Ananya smiled,
"yes yes that" Seher evilly smiled, Ananya smirked knowing what was on the way. "And to rectify it Daddy. You needs to buy me a new colouring set" She grinned, "You already have like 8 of them" Kabir reasoned out, knowing that he was all trapped. "I thought you wanted to rectify" Seher said dripping her small fingers into the cheese jar and started licking it. "Okay! I give up. Let's attack the cake" on hearing his father's command, not even missing a second Sanjh bolted with knife towards the cake, he needed to have it before gromnups again changed their mind.
Quickly catching Ananya before she caught up with his kids, he kissed her forehead and whispered "Happy Valentines day"
Seher gladly allowed her little brother to cut cake with her. Who now was trying his best to smear his hands on cream."Sanjhy" Ananya picked him up and placed him on the Booster seat as he pouted. Kabir picking up the plates decided to help Ananya in the breakfast. "Happy Valentines Day Daddy" Seher smiled as Kabir sat down besides her, after serving the whole meal to everyone. A new badge to his manliness. He still couldn't guess what about Ananya & his kids was making him soft. Had someone told him to serve meals to his kids, he would thrown the plates right on the person's face. "Daddy what are you doing today?" Seher again asked excited at the sight of her breakfast as Sanjh gagged on spotting tomato homemade pasta. " Nothing Bear! Just the usual office stuff, then your birthday party" Kabir said sipping his coffee & nudged Ananya, "Daddy! I want party at Baskin & Robins, they give best ice cream and hey how about going on a date with Ananya after my party" Seher grinned.
The thought process of Seher Kabir Sharma, never ceased to amaze Ananya. The things that went in her head were always a mystery for her. One moment she was talking about lala lands and other moment she was talking senses wisdom like that of a sixty year old.
Kabir chocked on his coffee, spilling over half the content over him. This was his daughter
His SIX years old daughter.
He didn't knew that her finding him sleeping with Ananya could lead her saying this. Damn this Generation!
Finding anything to focus his gaze on literally anything to, He settled his gaze on Sanjh who unable to understand anything gawked at others on the table. "Sanjh eat properly" Stuffing an already mouth filled toddler Kabir exclaimed. "Daddy go on a Date pls" Seher smiled before gulping down her shake.

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Richa felt something warm on her forehead, but before she could comprehend what that was, it was gone. On opening her eyes she spotted a five feet something figure sitting on the couch across. "Morning" he lazily husked making Richa squirm. This man still had the same effect over her like he first made love to her. "Good morning SIR" no matter how much heat her legs felt she still could forgive him for being an ass last night. "Good Morning Maa" Riz chirped rubbing his eyes and tumbled over to Manav, "Papa, Morning" he said ducking himself in Manav's lap. "Morning kid. Richa" He said looking at his wife, who refused to budge on him.
"Take your medicines. You forgot them last night "

"As if you care"

"Richa! Take your medicines "


" Maa take your medicines "

Knowing that she had no way out, Richa gulped down the medicines." Maa Did you enjoy the party? "Riz asked, sensing the tension between his parents." Yep, your father enjoyed it more "she commented, making Manav bit angry." But he wasn't even there "Riz replied and received a smack on his head," Oops. I was not allowed to say it. Sowie Papa" Riz looked at his father and slowly sliding down his lap quietly tried tip toeing to the door. "Riyaz Manav Gupta. Dare you step out without telling me what's going on" Richa commanded making the kid turn and smile at his father sulking at him.
"Last night, Sehar and I wanted to have the ice cream that Alia Bhatt has in that cute ad. So we sneaked to Anita Grandma & Sudhir Grandpa's room buts they were sleeping with Sasha. So I told Seher to call her Kabir uncle, but we knew he was sooo happy after ages for a party " Riz trailed.
Manav always knew his kid was smart but this smart. He never knew.
" So we decided to not call Kabir uncle cause we thought he was really enjoying the party. So I called Papa, he called me sweetie, I don't like being called sweetie but he called me sweetie. "Riz glared at Manav, who seemed a bit smirked." I told him to come, he said he's busy. I reminded him how important I'm in his life,a gift from God "Riz winked. " Oh! Definitely. An angel in disguise. Oh holy Son" Manav scowled at him. "He said not to call you cause he thinks you are on your mater something leave & you take care of my 24 into 7 shouting slash sleeping sister. So this might be a break for you & he came threw us in car ate ice cream. And when we came back Maa, Sasha was crying so badly. Papa checked on her. She'd fever. "Riz widened his eyes in shock exactly copying what he gave last night." We took her to doctor. Papa gave her medicine sang her a yuck song & when she slept we came to pick you up & now I'm tried, I spoke so much. I need rest. Goodnight "Not even glancing back once to his parents, humming a song to himself he opened his room and disappeared.
" I told you. I was with the most beautiful girl who accidentally due to my awesome genes and your seducing looks happens to be our first daughter and our third child. I prefer death over cheating. " Manav said, as Richa pulled him up for a kiss and he growled when she had him full in her hand,"Richa! f**k me right now don't play" . Soon with clothes gone off from their bodies Manav knew his valentine's day had just started with a make out sex.

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No amount of caffeine in his body was helping Ram to cope up with the tiredness he'd woken up with in the morning. No matter how hard he was trying to cope up around with people, the sight of couples holding hands, walking down merrily down his office street made him feel incomplete. He was 40 and still a loner. "Sir ! This file needed your sign " He turned around to face his new secretary Trisha. "Wohoho ! You look wrecked" Trisha commented, taking in the look of her boss. His eyes were red defiantly from the lack of sleep ,his usually neat hairs now made a mop on his head & his shirt was flying out from his pant. "It's Valentine's Day Richa,what are you doing here? At office" Ram taking the files from her hand asked. He finally had a secretary who was working.
"Not fascinated by the idea of Valentina's Day Sir. What about you? Any plans?" Trisha said,as Ram sighed in defeat and thudded his head with pain on the table. "Go enjoy your Day " He said unable to detach pain from his voice,"Let me help you" Trisha said as she lifted Ram's head. Placing his head back against the chair,she immediately tried searching his drawers. All she could recall from the times she spent with him ,was that he'd some health issues but her mind couldn't ducking recall it. "Close the curtains. Make it dark" Ram groaning in pain said. If this throbbing in his head continued ,Ram was sure he'll soon die. "No. There"He painfully pointed his finger to a drawer. Now even speaking was making his muscles tear up. Immediately ransacking his drawer, She found a sachet of medicines. Handing it over to him & making him it gulp down. Richa waited for Ram's seizure to stop.
"Migraine sucks" Ram bellowed, after finding the energy to speak. "Happy f**king Valentine day to me" He threw up his hands feeling a bit free. "You're free to go Trisha" he again repeated. "Shut up ! We're going to get you some rest & then work for design layout for Mumbai office. I would have gone on a date if I had Chris Evans or Adanan Siddiqui or Bari k or Adam Levine to date" Trisha sternly said. Ram chuckled, his voice echoing in the office as Trisha stared at him. The same man who twice had sex with her but couldn't even recall one.

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"Avni no " Anurag giggled as Avni kissed his earlobe." You always stay away. Let's take our relationship to another level "She said inching near him in the empty lobby." Avn... Ah"A miffed moan escaped Anurag 's lip as Avni stroked him over the Jean. "Don't scar her for your own pleasure" A voice echoed in Anurag' s head and he immediately stepped away. "Stop it. I'm hardly 17. It's wrong" he chimed.
"And which century is this? 18th?c'mon Anu, what had gone into your head. You were fine with foreplay stuff before & after you've returned from our spring break. You have changed. What happened over spring? " Avni chided.
What had happened over spring? He'd f**king found out that the person whom he hated the most was now the one he unfortunately loved the most. His dead sister's fiance. His life.
" What's happening here? " Before Anurag could answer Avni, they heard Arjun asking out to them from the other end of the lobby.
" It's over. We're done " Avni mouthed to Anurag & shyly smiling to Arjun for excuse left.


" Were going for this climb Anya" Rivan said as Anya tied his shoe laces. "No Riv! I reallt can't not too well" Checking that Rivan was all ready for climbing the rock hill thing the camp was basically about she said. "Happy Valentines Day" Rivan spotted a rather lethargic Arjun walking smugly in the room, if looks could kill Arjun was sure he had already killed girls on the way . "This calls for a hug" And before Anya could respond to him, Rivan pulled her by her hand and snaked his arms around her. "Oouch I can't breathe Rivan. There are better ways to kill me" Rivan heard Anya giggling and realised he's been hugging her a more tight than he initially intended to. "Seeya. Arjun Sir, I hope you aren't too tired? Rough night? All mushy can't come with us" Rivan said, as Anya smacked him. "Tsk Mr. RIVAN! I'm all good. Thank you for concern, Zahra mam will be leading front base. I'll leading from back base" Arjun lazily occupying seat in the food court blurted. "Like I care" Arjun shouted as Anya practically pushed him out, leading him to the reporting area.
All the while Her mind kept going to the grey track suit Arjun wore that she kept on his bed before silently existing.

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Seher 's birthday party was in full swing as Manav was dancing with Kaysha and Sanjh in his arms and Richa dragged everyone to click photographs while Ananya constantly poked Kabir to call Anya.
"Hello " Richa balancing the phone between her shoulder and ear answered Manav 's phone." I guess you must be Mrs. Gupta " Richa raised her brows at Manav who now had stopped dancing and was simply watching Sanjh stealing the show." Put the phone on speaker & call your husband "the voice ordered.
" Hello it's Manav Gupta. Who's this? "Kabir said signalling Manav to come over as four of them left for a silent corner to talk.
" Oh Manav. How's your family " the second Manav recognized the voice all he could do was clench his hand as Ananya hugged him from crumbling down." Straight to points indirectly. I've been dying to meet. And by the silence I recognize you've finally recognized its me Yogesh. Open your mail, let the game begin "with a click of phone Kabir looked back at everyone. This was true, the nightmare had just begun.

" He who was once there
Isn't around anymore.
Aged yet fragile
Save him if you can"
Richa read out loud the puzzle.
"Whom is he attacking? "Kabir banged the table.

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I'm back. Oh before It skips my mind I wanted to tell that I'll be starting a new FF on kaya probably by tomorrow. Aap sabka intezaar rahega waha pe bhi.
😳😃

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Posted: 9 years ago
hey niharika darlo... it was just fab love..😳
starting from sehar she is really a princess.. the cupid between kaya..
riz is a smart kid.. although he is a mama's boy but this time supporting dad was a good decision kiddo😉😃 & rivan is he getting possessive about yaya or something else.. hmm will have to wait to know about it..😛 ram had sex with trisha & doesn't remember.. common on man look at her she is just perfect for you.. stop crying over ur unsuccessful love..😉 lastly my mind is occupied by that puzzle..😃
all in all a dhansoo update😆😆 continue soon & thanks for the pm..

PS: do you watch pakistani serials?? actually i m pakistani so just got curious seeing those serial names in ur signature..😛
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