#8 July Update#|Falling Slowly| Page 73 Part 21 - Page 42

Created

Last reply

Replies

528

Views

61.5k

Users

48

Likes

717

Frequent Posters

VrushSoundarya thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Plz Plz Plz Update Soon... I'm have followed this SS From Begining... And since all ong time I wanted To Congratulate and Thank you for writing such a fab story.!.! Plz continue soon..!.! Eagerly waiting for the next part...!
Coloursoflove thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
Ok I'm commenting b.'cos I love you and this ff like crazy
Where do I begin...
Ok lets begin with anya and my arjun.aai haai thats what we call some bonding and sparks.im so freaking love them.they're my favourite as you know.And my kaya are the best...totally enjoying the honeymoon period of their dating phase.mana and rich a hot as always.I'm telling you if either one of these couples don't have sex I'm gonna sexually combat. So ya waiting eagerly for the next update...precap sounds hmmm...interesting.why do I have a feeling shreya is gonna propose ram...hmmm...
Loads of love..
Slytherin_ thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Ksgrkfan

Ok I'm commenting b.'cos I love you and this ff like crazy

Where do I begin...
Ok lets begin with anya and my arjun.aai haai thats what we call some bonding and sparks.im so freaking love them.they're my favourite as you know.And my kaya are the best...totally enjoying the honeymoon period of their dating phase.mana and rich a hot as always.I'm telling you if either one of these couples don't have sex I'm gonna sexually combat. So ya waiting eagerly for the next update...precap sounds hmmm...interesting.why do I have a feeling shreya is gonna propose ram...hmmm...
Loads of love..

love from Mars to you. 😃 Shreya is one plethora of twists.
MyselfMihu thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
Hey Niharika. This fiction I bet is completely beyond the level of our thinking could go. You've Ram who's a back legged hero. F.Scott Fitzgerald says -"Show me a hero & I'll tell you a tragic story" (not exactly the same but hey I forgot), Then comes Manav, boy! I was first one on forum along with Naziya Di to blow Manav's trumpet. You took his hotness to whole another universe, then comes your Richa just a Venus to Mars that Manav is. Kabir I could sell myself to be there with the ff Kabir. He's a father & recently a fabulous boyfriend ( Steamy ,Don't shy away from writing their sexual escapades in detailed) Ananya she's pillar of your story. I see you've not a big amount of likes or comments people usually give but babes don't you get disheartened. Edison was thrown out of school cause they thought of him to be Incompetent to chores & rest is history. PS: You can update now! pls an update soon. hasta la vista.
BedouinMe thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
A great update again ! Shreya is back again ! Ek Maya kam thi, Jo yeh phir se aa gayi.. And whom is she proposing ? Kahin Kabir ko hi toh nahi ? Since its Shreya, kuchh bhi ho sakta hai ! ;)
Slytherin_ thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 17.

When We Hide to get Caught.


Kabir almost forgot how to function his brain, when Ananya winked at him from across the tables they were seated at. He being the second guest of honour was sitting at the table on the stage and Ananya was sitting at the last row winking at him.
"How are you" Kabir heard a slurring voice next to him
"Aha Bhardwaj Jr, I'm fine how are you?" Out of courtesy & for sake of not charging a murder against him,Kabir replied. "If I say I'm not fine, will...will yo..you hel...p me?" Shravan slurred again, running a hand through his untamed curls. "Shravan you know,,,. some people, create their own storms & cry when it f**king rains" Kabir gesturing that it's all fine to a stiffened Ananya across the table answered Shravan. "I wasn't cheating on Ananya, out of all the people you knew it. Still you helped her in the divorce." Shravan quietly spoke, tears stinging his eyes.
"You knew I wouldn't do a thing that of such standard ever to her. That Day"
"I know you didn't kiss Malvika on that day,I knew it was she who kisses you.But you know what,I f**king didn't knew that you " Kabir jabbed a finger in Shravan's cheek,"That You won't accept your own bloody child" He hissed.
With Tension being quite visible in air,Ram intervened the duo hissing to each other before they made a good show of fight. "Enough you both. Shravan sit beside Manav" Ram eyed his brother who too weak to protest, shifted a seat left sitting next to Manav who was engrossed on a call to notice a showdown amongst desirable men.

"Sweetie Relax" Manav uttered ,whispering in a low tone over the call
"I need you here" Came the voice,
"Sweetie I'm at a important meeting" Manav replied as Richa raised her brows at him. Giving a sign that all's good he again resumed the call.
"Am I not important. Come here please" The voice captivating Manav, finally got a yes to arrive as soon as possible. Now He needed to come up with some real good excuse to Richa.
"Wohhoo f**ker! " Manav sneered at Shravan sitting next to him in surprise as he quit the call and turned around,"When did you sit your ass besides me?" he inquired looking out for Kabir on stage and sighed that his best friend hadn't created a havoc.
Manav glaring at Ram,whom he'd to still take a revenge upon rolled his eyes at Shravan for answers. "When you were busy over your sweetie talks" Shravan plainly answered messing up his perfect hairdo his Father spent 4K upon for the night. "Now now Junior! Don't put your broken leg in other's business. Kabir I'm leaving" Manav removing his tux coat announced,
"Leaving me alone! f**k you Mann" Kabir answered, still breathing in & out as Ananya asked him to do,he knew Manav won't ditch him until it's not important. "You call me MANAV ,Bye" Sprinting off from the stage after answering,he marched up to the seat Richa & Ananya sat.
"How's the conditions up there?" Ananya grabbing Manav by his arm pulled him on couch they were seated at. "Oh there!" Manav looked up the stage,Kabir looking at them smiling and Ram looking sad in his own miseries. "Hiroshima & Nagasaki can be attacked by America anytime soon.Though, Nagasaki is still under some good impression so it won't be harmed" Manav resting a hand on Richa's thigh spoke as both ladies snickered over the comparisons. "Mr.Gupta? Why are you so restless? Going somewhere?" Richa sensing her Hubby's hurries spoke,"Actually yea! I need to go back to office, They're struck in some important project. Seeya later" Manav squeezing her hands immediately again apprated off. "That was f**king such a Manav hurrying Gupta" Richa said,"Lol Reecha! Traits of being in Manav Family! Learning how to talk like your husband" Ananya said laughing at Richa's cursing exactly matching like that of Manav & she shared a brief eye lock with her present boyfriend & ex husband spoke.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"Since, It's quite late in the night" Arjun taking a swift look at his watch announced a bunch of students present before him,half dozing off while standing & half trying to stay awake. "We'll be starting our activities from tomorrow, Boys to the left side of the inn and girl to the right " He concluded, picking up his bag . "Where do you get to stay?" Rivan stonily asked,holding out two bags at a time on his shoulders. "None of your Business I guess Mr.Rivan" Anya snapped her head from the cellphone and looked at both guys respectively. Why were they being so harsh to each other?
"Hope not into girls inn. Last thing we want is you getting raped by my hormonal classmates" Now this was so not Rivan that everyone knew and his this comment made the girls look at him in astonishment. Surprise Bitches!
"Hold your tongue Mr.Rivan,Last thing I want is making you sleep in my room with me. Leave I'm tired " With a flick of his hand, Arjun closed the lights making the students scramble off suddenly inside. "Son of Holy God! What was that for?" Anya said,thankfully holding Rivan's collar only in the darkness of the lobby. "Was testing Mr.Hot's temper, he's dead tired Poor chap" Rivan held the hands on his collar ,a bit long than he initially intended to. AWKWARD!
"Night" Anya being the bolder one bided adieu softly as her phone vibrated.
Sure that Rivan had gone to the boy's temporary dorm, Anya hurriedly opened up her whatsapp messaging.
A smile crept up her face on reading the message, one matter how hard he was in denial. But someone was surely caring for her more than he was willing to accept.
"Feel Free to talk,I know you don't sleep at night. Room 394"...


It was a small yet cozy room that the inn provided them. Anya, totally determined to sleep this time washed up her feets & face before jumping up on the bed & pulling down the comforter on her. It was quite a chilly weather at Manali sending teeth chattering winds in every direction.
She being tired from continuous travel, immediately fell asleep before slipping up into yet another dream.

*Anya literally shivered as Shreya banged the door of her room loudly in anger. "What do you want me to do exactly?" She could hear her mother shouting from the room she sat in,a sleeping one month Sanjh beside her. "Lower your Voice, Anya is at home" Kabir said, his voice yet loud. "Let her be,she should also know what her Father is all really about. " Shreya declining the offer continued shouting in her high pitched voice. Soon the voices faded away in Anya's head replaced by a numb feeling that burst open in her chest. Consoling herself that the fight would end up soon,she plucked in the earphones & lay down next to her tiny brother who was completely oblivious to the fact that his parents were fighting couple.
Next Anya knew was soft rustling of the bed sheet and she knew that her father had come. "Are you okay Papa?" Anya only called Kabir Papa,instead of Pops when nervous or upset this time being both. "YaYa I'm all good" Adjusting the small frame of baby whom Bear profoundly called Boy ,Kabir was horrified to find his 11 years old daughter cheeks tear strained. "She left us right?" Anya excepting another shot of pain in her heart asked,"Yes" Kabir was fast enough to hold his daughter before she burst open crying and picked her up cradling her near his chest, he was thankful to Richa for taking Seher along with her or else she would have reacted much worse to see her mother banging the door at her father's face,after proudly announcing her affair to him.
"YaYa stop crying. " Kabir chocked,his own voice betraying him. *



Anya woke up with a jolt,the images of her silent crying father playing in loop in front of her eyes.' This won't ever stop again' screaming in her pillow, Anya stepped down and slipping on her sneakers she existed her room.
Third knock on the door & it flew open, revealing Arjun standing at the door in simple pj & vest. "Hey" Anya controlling her voice mumbled,"Did I disturb you? I'm so sorry, I must go. ' in a hurry, Anya started retreating back when Arjun quietly said, "It's okay Anya, slip in before we get noticed" And he stepped aside as she cautiously came in the room. "What happened?" rubbing out the sleep from his eyes & downing down a shirt over his vest, he spoke. Who so ever said, a man's voice is sexiest when he just wakes up was uptight right.
"Couldn't sleep "
" It's 1 AM Anya, what's troubling you please tell me! I want you to be all good before I go away " Shite! He shouldn't have told her this. But then he noticed that she was too engrossed in her own thoughts to hear him. Relief


" Should I dry my hair black,?


"What makes you think about it? "


" I look like my mom same burgundy hairs and if Dad gets reminded of her through me, Maybe he won't love me ever the same "


" THAT'S COMPLETE SHIT! YOUR DAD WILL CONTINUE LOVING YOU THE SAME, Always "
He didn't intended to tell her that loud, but somehow her doubt over herself agitated him.
"I am going to sleep"Anya relived that he was around to talk her shits away,climbed up the bed and brought the blanket up.The Pillow still smelled like his sandalwood scent.
"Sleep. " Switching off the light,Arjun simply leaned himself on the couch
The sounds of ragged breathes & rainfall lulled both of them in sleep.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Kabir was sure,if the functions continued for some more minutes. He would rip off the curtains soon. This was taking more time than his original marriage took place. "Ram" He whispered & on getting no response from the man turned to see him.
Something was surely wrong somewhere, cause Ram according to Kabir, wasn't a man who sat at a function silently. Rather he was someone who spoke with a command.
"Ram"
"Hmm. Yup " breaking his trance from his thoughts, Ram surprisingly turned to face Kabir." Problem? "Kabir genuinely asked." My mere existence is problem. But hey, why is Shreya looking here from past 10 minutes "Ram joked, and Kabir drifted his eyes to look at his ex wife sheepishly smiling at something. "Believe me, I don't want to know" Smiling at him Kabir breathed a air of relief as the ceremony was brought to an end and soft music took over the hall.

Ram was certain that his head was spinning like a top when he descended down the stage.Seeing Richa look at him with such hate made it suffocating for him to breathe, plus he was sure that Manav will break each and bone of his body when he met him next. Things couldn't get worse now.
With slow stride,he was about to exist the hall go into his house book tickets to Greece & disappear from everyone's sight but someone had just called his name and it's not a good trait to not respond someone.
"Yes Richa" He said, not looking back. "Kabir told me to say this to you. There's a friend of our who needs a job here at Delhi" Richa gaped in horror as she saw him turning around ,the pink scar on his head was fresh and he was now limping

"What did you do to yourself??"

"This friend of your can be my Secretary on trial. Thank you "

"What did you do to yourself??"

"Stop picking up the matter Mrs. Richa Manav Gupta,don't act like you f**king care. Cool, A car ran over me & to your much displeasure I somehow survived. Came out Alive! Now please excuse me" Ram instead of bolting outside, carried himself inside deciding to face his fears more closely.

"What happened outside?" Kabir was quick to catch a look on Richa's face as he sat at a reasonable distance from Ananya but their legs still touching. "Ram said yes to what you told me to ask" Richa feeling uneasy,gulped down the glass of Martini in one sip. "Want to dance?" Kabir smoothing Richa's back asked ,as Ananya blew out a kiss to him for the gesture. "No I'm fine. Why don't you people go and dance" Richa feeling light said. Exchanging a known look,Kabir & Ananya nodded their heads in a no. They were simply enjoying the tingling feeling erupting in their stomachs as they sat with their legs joined.


Ram fell on the floor. When will people learn to walk with knocking others.
"I just hit the old boss of mine, this feels awesome" .He raised his eyes and tried recognising the voice.
"Here " Ram saw an offering hand waving in front of him. And soon he was pulled on his feet to stand up.

"So Ram Sir,I heard you had settled in California! What brings you here ?" Trisha snatched the drink from Ram's hand as soon as he took it from the waiter & sipped casually making Ram remind himself that she's one hell of a bold women. "Yes, I'm here cause of the mergers & Shravan's marriage" Ram spoke softly. " f**k! He's getting married Again? I thought he was leptosadist or Gay" Trisha inched forward now leaving a small distance between them. "I see you're same old ,Sheriff of Northumberland..Bold & mischievous Richa" Ram smiled & said. "God! You still remember how I pushed you in the pool." Rene dosing the past times, Trisha laughed at how she had pushed Ram in the pool when she was under his training along with Richa.
" Shit Lol! Sir, I must take a leave now" Trisha smiled and adjusted the wind swept hairs of Ram as he smiled back at her over the gesture.

"And Sir"

"Yes"

"It's Trisha,not Richa" Tucking a loose strand of her hair Trisha swiftly walked off from his view sight. Had Ram Bhardwaj f**ked it up again.
f**k.


"Tell us who is it?" Ananya heard, but her eyes were closed by someone's hand. "Uuummm Sakshi" Ananya heard Kabir giggling and answering which meant his eyes too were closed. "That was your twelfth standard girlfriend" Kabir heard the voice & he instantly knew who it was,not that many people knew about his past girlfriends. "Maybe Tania then" Kabir smiled and answered. "Both of you are so f**king useless" Ananya laughed & in unison with Kabir said Trisha. "Surprise" Trisha hugged both of them from behind,"Include me too" Richa pouted & hugged Trisha from behind.
"Ananya you take care of them I gotta go & receive the office keys from Prasad " Kabir smiled," What did you mean by office keys? Isn't Manav at in there? " Kabir bitted his tongue, well how was he supposed to know that he shouldn't have said that.
Soon all of theirs attention was grabbed by a high pitched voice booming over the Mike.
"This has been one pleasant evening where everyone's dancing & loving. So today I too want to try my luck. Shravan Bhardwaj" Shreya faked her voice to a lovely one & batted her eyelashes.
"God bless " Kabir uttered making Trisha snort & Ananya Richa glare at him.
"Marry me"

Shravan looked left & right,then pointed his finger over his direction & said "Me" . Nodding her head in a yes Shreya confidently smiled. "You Bitch" Shreya turned around to see a hyper Maya advancing towards her. "You think you can steal my fiance from me. " Maya snapped at her. "Shreya. I'm not going to marry you. Shit! " Shravan grabbed Maya by her upper arm and dragged her all the way down.


Kabir smiled as Trisha waved bye to them & Ananya climbed back to the front seat of his spacious car. Keeping legs over the board on his car & leaning against the window, Ananya sighed. "How did you feel when Shreya was happily making advances towards that Shravan" ,"See,If I'd been the same old Kabir. I would have definitely felt bad" Kabir said keeping one hand firm over the steering & other making circles on her bare foot. "But since I'm someone's boyfriend, it effects me least. Having you Ananya has made me more subtle towards feelings & emotions. " Ananya giggled on listening his answer & smiled as he pulled up the car in the parking.

"Manav, who is she? "Richa calmly asked as she took a sleepy Riz from her husband and laid him on the bed." Who she? " tucking the comforter over his son Manav muttered." The one who was with you after you left the party "Richa biting her quivering lips said, she didn't wanted to think it but yet she was struck on same thing. " You think I'm cheating on you. Fabulous, yes! There's this one girl, most beautiful on earth. Happy, now let me sleep" Manav snatched his towel from her hands & left a agitated Richa swearing to f**k the man in his real senses tomorrow morning.

Kabir kissed Sanjh as he waggled in his arms. "Daddy. I'm sleepy make Sanjhy stop making noises" Seher shouted from the other room, hitting her head again on the pillow. "Sssh" Ananya patted her head. After picking up the kids from her parent's, Kabir & Ananya noticed that their kids were not willing to cooperate in sleeping process. "I no sleep" Sanjh rubbing his eyes kept head on his father's shoulder. "No problem" Kabir giggled very well knowing that keeping Sanjh in that position was definitely going to make him sleep.

"Sanjh is asleep. Wow" Kabir stopped dead in his tracks on seeing Ananya wearing his t-shirt, her long waxed legs glimmering in dim lights of the room. "Hungry," Draping arms around his neck, she found herself crashing her lips on his. "You're wearing nothing down in there" He said, catching a hold of her leg as he slid his hands over them teasing her skin. "I do. I wear a shot" she threw her head back as Kabir cupped her breast in his firm yet gentle hand while kissing her earlobe. "I accidentally did it" Kabir shyly smiled, as he took her over to the bed. "I loved the accident" Ananya giggled as Kabir removed his shirt in haze.

"Removal of pant is too required"

"Someone is too excited "

" Head out of gutter. I need you to remove pant cause it would itch me while sleep"

Kabir smiled at her before sliding besides her & engulfing her tight as sleep took them over.


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"I'm awakens " Seher stretching her hands frowned when she realizes the cast over her left hand. Jumping & falling down in from the bed, she danced her way to her father's room knowing that he would allow her to snuggle with him, if she didn't wake him up. Opening the door to a king size bed room, Seher 's smiled faded as she couldn't find Kabir in his room, plus his bed was made which meant he'd even slept in there. "Idea" Seher giggled again on the thought, Ananya! Yes, she's always up for cuddling.
She silently tip toed to the room & opened the door. What was this? "Nobody invited me to the cuddle party" the kid whispered as she made her way on Kabir 's side, as he slept with Ananya wrapped on his bare torso. "Good night daddy." kissing her father's forehead, she too slept on him.



"f**k" Kabir uttered as he discovered that his daughter had discovered him such a comprising state.




Wonderful!
Edited by Draco_Elt - 9 years ago
BedouinMe thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Hot.. Funny.. Emotional.. Suspense-filled.. And the last part was really embarrassing ! Happy Cuddle party to the Sharmas... ;)
sona_naksh thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
superb update
loved it ...n d change in kabir is visible
continue soon
-purnima- thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 9 years ago
Kabir say a silent thank you...that it was just Sehar bear to find u in compromising position 😆😆😆 & she just thinks it was a cuddle party 😛😆😆...she is too innocent like us to have "head in gutter" 😳😆😆

God forbid if it was Ya Ya 😆😆😆 how u wud have gone explaining I wonder 😆😆😆😆

Arjun & Ya Ya ...good luck to both of you... lets see whats in store for two of u 😊😊😊
Manav bhai, now what this man is hiding 😆😆a secret GF 🤣 which I really doubt 😆😆😆 but Mr. Sharma knows the secret 😆😆😆 wonder what these two are cooking 😆😆😆
Ram 😆😆 hope ur life comes back on track ASAP 😆😆 u get someone to nurse your broken heart 😃😃
Poor Shravan 😆😆 got heart attack... Shreya proposing him 😆😆😆 lolz both deserved each other 🤣 a made for each other couple 😆😆
Slytherin_ thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: BedouinMe

Hot.. Funny.. Emotional.. Suspense-filled.. And the last part was really embarrassing ! Happy Cuddle party to the Sharmas... ;)



Lol. It's going to be much more embarrassing when Bear wakes up.
😛

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".