Kaya Drabble : Pyaar ki chaahat

Lavi_dovey thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 10 years ago
#1
Hello everyone.
my very first attempt of writing as this thought suddenly comes to my mind.
Read at your own risk coz i actually don't know how to write.

PYAAR KI CHAAHAT.
its been one month since kabir and ananya are back from jungle and as kabir had promised her they are friends now.

One fine evening Kabir, Ananya, Tarini, Laxman, Anurag were having their cofee together as they all are a team now.
all of sudden Tarini asked...
T: Ananya, what do u think about love?
A : kya bat h tarini? aaj sari reportergiri mujh pr hi dikhaogi kya?
T: nhi. just a casual question.
pyaar kya h tumhare liye?
kabhi to smjha hoga na tumne ise.
apne college mein...
apne office mein...
Kabir's gaze were fixed on his miss kashyap as he also wanna know her views about LOVE.
A: u know what Tarini?
jab papa hume chod k gye uske baad mujhe kabhi in sb baato ke baare mein sochne ka time hi ni mila.
scholarship ke liye journalism ki books pdte pdte mai ye bhool hi gyi ki library me ROMEO AND JULIET ki love story ki book bhi h.
but maine apne aas pas pyar ke bht saare face dekhe hai.
Pyaar Ka Intezar apni ma ki aakhon mein.
jo wo 8 saalo se papa ke liye kr rhi h.

Pyaar Ki Umeed jo Ronnie aur Richa ki aakhon mein h.
pata nahi kiske liye, pr hai.

Pyaar ki Khushi jo anurag ki aakhon mein hoti h jb bhi kabir sir use gale lagate hai.

aur finally...
Pyaar ki Takleef jo Kabir sir apki akhon mein dikhti hai.

to say Kabir was shocked would be an understatment.

looking into his eyes she continued
A: apki akhon mein pyaar ki takleef, dard, apko mila dhokha sb dikhta hai. aap bhle hi kitne bhi strong kyo na bn jaye but ur eyes...they always speaks that u are broken. Broken beyond repair..
suddenly ananya realised what she said.
A: sorry sir, mai kuch jyada hi bol gyi. ab mujhe chlna chahiye.and she left.

Tarini to herself: aur tum kahti ho tum pyaar ko nhi smjhti.

At night.
Kabir's POV
I don't know how this girl always able to see what i have hidden from everyone.
but Ananya nazar to tumhari aakhon mein bhi ati hai...PYAAR KI CHAAHAT...if wishes come true than i wish ki tumhari ye chahat zaroor puri ho.


Ananya's Pov
if wishes come true than i wish ki apki life mein koi aye jo apko smet le sir.
apki bikhri zindagi ko phir se jod de.

and God accepts their wish and smiled seeing their future..

finish..
now u all can throw jootaas and chappals on me but in pair.
Edited by krazykaju - 10 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

20

Views

5k

Users

14

Likes

66

Frequent Posters

TurnThePage thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#2


Nice 😛
Edited by onieloveian - 10 years ago
asyaarshilover thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 10 years ago
#3
please imform me when u update 😳
unresss
beautiful ❤️ the only word came to my mind after reading it...😳
i loved it and it was perfect...ajd i don't think anyone will throw juttas and chappals over you but will surely leave back words of appreciation for this cute little work of yours👏⭐️

thank you for pming...felt glad😳

P.s if u feel like then continue it or write more...and do inform me..

thanks
-aroo
Edited by asyaarshilover - 10 years ago
Maria_TR thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#4
Beautifully written..👏 I loved the fact that though you didnt show any cliched romance, yet I could feel the intensity of that conversation.. Very well written.. 🤗
sowmyap03 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
#5
good one krazy... tum bhi writer ban gayi... 👏
Edited by sowmyap03 - 10 years ago
archpai thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#6
Yeh toh phool aut taaliyon wala ending hai!!👏👏👏
Lavi_dovey thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 10 years ago
#7

Originally posted by: asyaarshilover

please imform me when u update😳

unresss
beautiful ❤️ the only word came to my mind after reading it...😳
i loved it and it was perfect...ajd i don't think anyone will throw juttas and chappals over you but will surely leave back words of appreciation for this cute little work of yours👏⭐️

thank you for pming...felt glad😳

P.s if u feel like then continue it or write more...and do inform me..

thanks
-aroo


thanks
m happy that u liked it.
if i will write further definately tell u.
Lavi_dovey thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 10 years ago
#8

Originally posted by: sowmyap03

good one krazy... turn hi writer ban gays... 👏


thank u sowmya di.
missing u
sowmyap03 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
#9

Originally posted by: krazykaju


thank u sowmya di.
missing u



sorry for spell error.. wo tab me autocorrect ho jatha hai... keep writing..even though I wont be much active i'll ensure I don't miss your writings...

love u..
Lavi_dovey thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 10 years ago
#10

Originally posted by: Maria_TR

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Beautifully written..👏 I loved the fact that though you didnt show any cliched romance, yet I could feel the intensity of that conversation.. Very well written..🤗</font>


thank u dear.
intensity is present in the name of couple itself KAYA

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".