KaYa TS: The Token Of Sorry ( chapter 3 on page 5) * complete* - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
Nice to see Kabir leave his akhad and sort his things out. Liked you OS a lot. Thanks for posting
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 2:
Ananya walked out of his cabin blushing...while he stared lovingly at her departing figure...
She took her seat and proceeded to complete her story...but all she could think was kabir...
That Evening kabir arrived at her house to pick her up for dinner...
Her mom asked him to wait in her room for her... Kabir entered her room...it was simply decorated but looked quite elegant...After a few minutes, the bathroom door opened and left kabir open- mouthed...
There stood Ananya in the peacock blue dress gifted by him...she looked like a fairy who had just come down from heaven...
She walked to him and blushed...that was the last strand...
Kabir pulled her closer by her waist and removing the inviting wet hair from her neck kissed her neck...
A: kabir...aap ye kya kar rahe hai?...ma Ya Armaan aagaye toh???...
He hugged her from the back and whispered very romantically in her ears...
K: u look stunning!.. mujhe nahi pata tha ki meri ye stupid Aur bubudaati reporter itni khbsoorat hai...
While in the car too kabir tried to make Ananya say the three magical words but couldn't...
In the restaurant...
Manager: welcome sir...today we have a couple's night organized please grace us with your presence on the dance floor...
Kabir pulled Ananya to the dance floor and twirled her around and pulled her back towards himself ...
K: ab toh kehdo...see main bolta hu pehle I love u Ananya...ab tum bolo please!
A: ( blushing) Kabir...uh...I...I...
K: hmm?..
A: I...I am hungry
Saying this she ran away and sat on her chair...
Kabir made a sad baby face and sat in front of her and ordered for dinner...

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After dinner...they went on a long drive after that...
Ananya was trying to pacify kabir who had made an angry face and was driving without sparing a glance at her...
A:kabir...Kabir...achcha baba I'm sorry...par main bol nahi pa rahi na...
K: fine mat bolo! Main bhi tumse baat nahi karunga...MISS KASHYAP...
A: that's not fair na kabir...
K: everything is far in love and war...
Ananya wanted to giggle seeing Kabir's puffed red cheeks...
She pulled his cheeks...
A: kisne socha hoga ki hamare editor and chief itne cuteee hai!!...u are shoo shweet!!!...
K: ( irritated) main cute nahi hu...I'm not a baby ki tum mujhe cutie pie bologi ek chocolate dogi Aur main maan jaunga...
He stopped the car and turned his head...

A: achcha ok...I...love...
Suddenly Ananya's phone started ringing...
Kabir almost wanted to wail like a baby...
Ananya was about to talk when he snatched it...
K: jo koi bhi hai...I'm not interested...hum kaafi busy hai...please call again later...
Ananya saw the caller ID and almost screamed...
A: ye kya kiya????????
K: kya do lovers ke beech ki haddi ko ukhaad pheka...
A: arrey par uss haddi ka naam Khalid hai!!!
K: achcha hua...khud toh ghar pe cake kha kha ke bore hota hoga toh socha chalo aaj dusre ko bore kare ...
A: ye kya kiya?...agar kal usne...
She couldn't complete as Kabir crashed his lips on hers...and kissed her possesively...with all his love

😳TBC
Edited by akyabiggestfan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
yipee...
this time m the first one.
good morning riya.
update was really beautiful.
kabir was too desperate to listen three magical words.
really cute and romantic.
awsome and fantastic.
keep smiling.
Edited by krazykaju - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
I thought the dress was blue? sea green kaise ho gaya?
Kabir ne ILu bol dala ab ananya ki baari.

Aur wo to bol hi nahi rahi...Kabir must have gone Waaah!
Khalid ka phone cut kar diya! Khalid ka phone Ananya ke cell pe aur answer kiya Kabir ne.

Yeh to next day ki breaking news hogayi!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: Sagi.

I thought the dress was blue? sea green kaise ho gaya?

Kabir ne ILu bol dala ab ananya ki baari.

Aur wo to bol hi nahi rahi...Kabir must have gone Waaah!
Khalid ka phone cut kar diya! Khalid ka phone Ananya ke cell pe aur answer kiya Kabir ne.

Yeh to next day ki breaking news hogayi!

Blue hi hai...by mistake green likha...I've edited it😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
hi
the up is really making me blush
haai kabir got mesmerised seeing his stupid reporter
they went for dinner but ananya didnt said the three magical words
which amde our kabir jee angry oh poor guy and in that anger he disconnected khalid call
the kiss haai
plz cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
acha hai,,, thanks for making it 3 shot... abh last partf me tho w/o I love u boldegi na... ya koi aur haddi hai
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
Beautiful update
Loved kabir in this story
Update soon
Pm me please
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
Even Kabir knows Khalid's love for cake... 😆
Lovely TS... 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
Bechara Khalid
Usse bhi bechara kabir
Ananya I love you bolti nahi and jab bolne gayi toh uski suatan Khalid ne call kar diya
Amazing update
Thanks for the pm

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