KaYa TS: The Token Of Sorry ( chapter 3 on page 5) * complete* - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
Lol
ThT line nae khalid k liye hai jao dedo usko! Hahaha
It was an amazing mixture of romance n laughter
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32


BR]
Eagerly waiting for next part.
Continue soon and pm me.
Edited by KaYa_licious - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
omg ! this one is really nice riya, pata nehi main pehle padhi kyu nehi. baas one thing, i am not really criticizing u, just saying, some things are best left unsaid for reader's imagination. u didnt really have to write they kissed...u can just leave a nanosecond before, that way it becomes more thrilling and romantic. just my 2 cents. hope u dont mind.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
Chapter 3:

Next day KKN office kabir stormed inside...he was in a foul mood because he had still not heard the magical words from his beloved...

Ro: kya hua sir?...any pro...problem ?
K: apni dost se kyu nahi puchte she'll explain better...saying this he marched away...

Later in the conference room all were present...
Kh: vaise Ananya I had called you yesterday to to inform u about this conference...but...

He smiled sheepishly...Ananya glared at kabir and both started fighting with their eyes...

Ananya walked out of the conference room...she was really angry and so was Kabir...both refused to talk to each other...

Kabir held Malvika's hand pulling her close...
K: let's go dear...
Ananya was seething in anger looking at this...

Sunny and Richa saw this...
S: Richa ji meri mata Aur pitaji ko milana hai mujhe...kuch sochiye...

R: haanji sunny paaji...
Suddenly they both grinned...and did a high five!

R: iss romeo juliet ki jodi ko toh main milaakar chodungi...😉


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Richa ran in a frenzied state to Kabir's cabin ...
R: kabir sir...Vo Ananya
She cried breathing heavily...

K: kya hua...Ananya...what happened to her...Vo theek toh haina?
R: sir Vo suicide karneki koshish kar rahi hai...Vo conference room main hai...


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On the other side...
Sunny ran to Ananya...
S: oye sun! Kabir sir behosh hogaye hai...conference room mein...jaldi chal...
A: abhi aati hu...


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Both ran inside the conference room like maniacs without realizing each other's presence...

As soon as they entered sunny locked the door...
S: ab jabtak saber clear nahi hojaata darwaaza nahi khulega...

Ananya sighed...
Slowly, their anger started melting...kabir was the one to initiate...
K: Vo..I'm sorry...kal ke liye...
A: no no...I'm sorry...maine kuch zyaada hi...

K: I'm sorry
A: no I'm sorry
K: me
A: no me...

They kept on fighting and at the end burst out laughing...
Kabir pulled her close holding her waist...

He bought his lips near hers and whispered...tell ne it's me...
A: ( blushing due to proximity) uh...kabir...I...I...

K: hmmm?
A: I...lo...love...you...v..very very much...
Kabir was so happy that he picked her up and twirled her around...
A: kabir what are are you doing?...gir jaaungu main...

K: toh ab ek pyaar bhari kissie milegi?
A: nahi aaj aapki jamkar pitayi hogi...
K: kyu?...ab kya hua?
A: uss malvika se itna kyu chipak rahe the...

Kabir smiled embarrassingly...
K: Vo toh tumhe jaalaane ke liye...vaise tum badi cute lag rahi thi...jalte hue...
Ananya was about to yell when he locked their lips...

They pulled back after a long time...Ananya was blushing thinking of a few seconds ago...

K: ab toh mujhe chahiye...chalo mera gift do...
A: yes boss!
Ananya mocked and they got closer...😉


The end😳


Edited by akyabiggestfan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
Sunny ke mataji aur Pitaji! This just cracked me up.
Maybe thats why Kabir never has any problem with Sunny.

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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
hi
the up is really cute
oth kabir and ananaya are angry with each other
so their friends richa and sunny playing the role of cupids locked them in a room
where finally their anger got melted

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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
awesome ending
richa aur sunny kya kamal kida!!
loved it yaar
accha sorry session tha
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
haha.. Sunny and Richa...
Mata and pitaji... funny...
Finally she said those words..
nice ending
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
Mataji-pitaji 🤣
Thanks for making it 3shot 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
mata ji aur pita ji.
amazing yar.
kabir was really disappointed. ab mata ji ko magical words bolne hi pd gye.
lovely and beautiful.
superb ending.
lots of love

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