SS - Mistakes happen - Chapter 5 (Page 31) Updated - 04/07/15 - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
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ya ya laugh now, i shall remember all these teasings and make u pay for each of them. i now think e u have become too frightened to begin ur mirzamarathon 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: shreya_rc

ya ya laugh now, i shall remember all these teasings and make u pay for each of them. i now think e u have become too frightened to begin ur mirzamarathon 😆

Ofcourse! You keep on threatening me from time to time 😆 😆
i'd better start watching now 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: SuperChillz1

Ofcourse! You keep on threatening me from time to time 😆 😆
i'd better start watching now 😆


yupdo that asap.a ccha one thing i changed all my dialogues to italics now.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: shreya_rc


yupdo that asap.a ccha one thing i changed all my dialogues to italics now.


😃 😃
Yes, the dialogues are distinguishable now :)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Second part !! second part !! second part !!
***bangs fists on the table to cheer ***

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: shreya_rc

Second part !! second part !! second part !!
***bangs fists on the table to cheer ***


Calm down baccha! 😆 i am going to write and take this story further .
But you have to accept the fact that the story is in a very nascent stage. And its all due to my imaginative skills that got hindered because a certain contagious virus 😆 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: SuperChillz1


Calm down baccha! 😆 i am going to write and take this story further .
But you have to accept the fact that the story is in a very nascent stage. And its all due to my imaginative skills that got hindered because a certain contagious virus 😆 🤣


hawww ! u r calling my green lake of unbelievable attraction , a contagious virus ??😭😭😭😭

***** cries her eyes out ******

waise be it virus, bacteria, protozoa, fungus ... we r capable of resisting him for a while to produce something fruitful here. we r powerpuff girls ! we can two-times also😆
although not really 2timing lolz, froze my mirzamania and indulging karbirkahani 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: shreya_rc


hawww ! u r calling my green lake of unbelievable attraction , a contagious virus ??😭

***** cries her eyes out ******

waise be it virus, bacteria, protozoa, fungus ... we r capable of resisting him for a while to produce something fruitful here. we r powerpuff girls ! we can two-times also😆
although not really 2timing lolz, froze my mirzamania and indulging karbirkahani 😆


🤣 🤣
Ah ,don't be sad , applepie!
It was all in good sense 😆 😆 well, i am also now officially a part of the 'green lake of unmatched beauty' 😉 Kya kare, Chahkar bhi its very difficult to resist. Both. However, I am really racking my brains to develop this os into a full fledged story. 😆 Anyways, the immense volume of hotness that is exuding from a certain gentleman is enough to make your brain go numb already 😆

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Posted: 10 years ago
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make it 3 shots. that way it would be easier. 1st toh u have written already, building up suspense is done, now the actual part of action would be on 2nd and denouement on 3rd.thora chamach of sexual tension between the duo bhi daal dena,mithas badhegi ! lol
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: shreya_rc

make it 3 shots. that way it would be easier. 1st toh u have written already, building up suspense is done, now the actual part of action would be on 2nd and denouement on 3rd.thora chamach of sexual tension between the duo bhi daal dena,mithas badhegi ! lol

LOL. I don't know how much of it I'll be able to add 😆 i suppose it won't be more than a seasoning on a cheese pizza 😆I am already halfway through chapter 2, so i am really excited as to how to efficiently progress the story. :) though 3 shots is agood idea, there's too much happening and denouement in the 3rd chap itself might feel rushed. I am thinking of increasing a couple chapters more. :) what do you think?

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