KaYa FF : Tum Sirf Meri Ho ( Chapter 23 : updated on page 40 ) - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
Hello ppl...I'm back...with chapter 1
I want big comments now...please😉

Chapter 1

After he finished his 9 pm show...he was walking back to his cabin, when he felt a tap on his shoulder. It was Malvika."Hey Kabir...you did an awesome job! Hmm...I think this calls for celebration...let's go for dinner Kabir" " Malv..." the words got stuck in his throught at the scene that unfolded before his eyes.Manav had used Ananya's story and his show had been a great success...
"Hey Ananya...we make up a great team..don't we ssweetheart?"...Manav asked being all the more cozy enjoying Kabir's disturbed face...he hugged her completely covering her in his arms.Oh! How his blood boiled seeing this but he could not understand why.A tap on his shoulder bought him back to the KKN studio from his thoughts..."chalein Kabir?"...Malvika asked."N..nahi Malvika...u go I have some work", saying this he stormed in his cabin giving the glass door a hard swing.
As he leaned on his rotating chair...he thought about his life...his past.
K: what the hell is happening to me?
Why am I feeling disgusted looking at Ananya and Manav hug?Power is everything for me now...because none believe in the truth said by a poor man...but a rich and powerful man's lie is also accepted gladly. But...suddenly I feel very different...this girl's driving me crazy...why am I affected so much...am I jealous??? "Sir"...called a sweet yet confident voice."Yes miss Kashyap.."he called..praying that she may not see his inner turmoil.They sat till late night.At around 11 they got up...
A:Sir...I guess I should be get going...it's too late
K: sure miss Kashyap...I'll drop u home.
A:sir bu...
K:( sternly) it's an order
A:yes sir...
They drove down to Ananya's house.Ananya asked Kabir to come in and have dinner with her.He simply couldn't turn down that offer...even though he tried his best to do so.
Ananya took out the key and unlocked the door.Her mom and brother were in Nasik enquiring about Armaan's college.
Ananya rummaged through the selves and all she found was some dough and a few boiled potatoes...
A: sir...I hope aloo parathas will do for u?
K: ananya plz...its ok...I'll go
A: no Sir...I listened to u...now it's your turn
K:yes boss( in mock salute)
As soon as ananya stepped in the kitchen the lights went off
A:oh no!!!!Kabir sir??..are u there?
K:yes...I'm there in the hall...tell me where are the candles kept I'll bring one.
A:thanks a lot sir..their in the drawer of the table behind the sofa
Kabir lighted a candle and got it to ye kitchen...he was awestruck to see the heavenly beauty of ananya in the candle light...he helped her with the cooking...making almost Indian map like parathas.
K: bye ananya...got to go...I guess we forgot we have office tomorrow (chuckled)
A: bye sir
K: this girl's surely doing something to me...I love to watch her...to hear her blabber...in short I like everything about her...even her slightly burnt parathas tasted heavenly today...why is it so???
He kept pondering till he reached home and collapsing on his bed
TBC😳
Hope u guys like this



Edited by akyabiggestfan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: zakter

Love it, please update soon 😊

Thanks dear...I'm so glad that u love it
I'll update soon😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
Oh u already updated
Great chapter
Loved it
A jealous kabir is cute
They had dinner together
Burnt parathas 😆
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: Gouri_Joshi

Oh u already updated

Great chapter
Loved it
A jealous kabir is cute
They had dinner together
Burnt parathas 😆
Update soon

Thanks a lot Ranjani😃
Will pm u next time😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
I felt it was too filmy from the prologue with Raj and Simran line
But I really liked the first part.
Map like Aloo Parathas 🤣
Although Ananya may do so, I didn't think Kabir was going to accept
But that's why it's fanfiction 😉
It was sweet.
Will you write what Ananya felt about the hug?
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
Loved the update!! 😊
Kabir is realising his feelings for Ananya! it was soo cute! Plz continue as soon as possible! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
Thanks a lot😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
Well written! :D
Do update asap! :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: -zainab

Well written! :D
Do update asap! :)

Thank u😃
I will
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
So Ananya cooked aloo parantha for kabir! Wow

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