Kaya SS : Beneath It All.. Ch2-3 Pg 15- 15/6 - Page 3

awesome story ... waiting for your update... Do pm me

Your concept is really nice.
The chapter is awesome.
Its outstanding.
I would like to read it further.

You write really well. The pace is great and leaves more than adequate curiosity. I can't wait to read it further. Please do PM me your works.

Amazing start!

Originally posted by: Armagadon

Main soch hi rahi thi ki kab Avni ji in do characters ko apne tough angst waala love ke mohre banayenge!

Waise apne Khushi aur Arnav ko kyun spare kiya? Would love to read their stories from you too... hehehe...

*laughing*

but you have done fine job my lady! *bows*

In the first part itself you have added all the essential ingredients for this spicy mix of a story you have brought forth.

I completely agree with you that this story just fits for Kaya...

Waise a nice name for their baby girl right? *chuckling again*

That's a far call... hehe

As far as this is concerned, three thumbs up for the brilliant plot and fantastic concept.

Sigh, am just waiting for the other updates.

Best of luck and loads of love for this one!

Luv,

Shree <3 Of course your innocent cute fan :D

That was a plaintive start to the story.The character of Natasha seems quite promising. Lets await and watch how the two poles react when they come face-to-face.

Originally posted by: Fantasia_junkie

Hahaha.. Inevitable, hai na.. 😉

Had to happen some day.. Besides the real thing is very cute and subtle toh kuch toh karna tha na to spice up things until they get there.. 😛

Dhanyavaad ji.. eh.. Fan toh hum aapke hain.. 😳

O btw.. I did write something on Arshi.. but it's unfinished..

Okay so I might as well make my presence known since you keep tempting me with VMs and the story line.

it was a pleasant surprise when i opened the forum and saw your post. i am a huge admirer of your writing. i still can't believe you still have to deal with plagiarism in IF. it's aggravating. i also had a taste of that particular medicine also. i pray that you don't get forced to remove the story like Adhoori si dua. god i really loved that SS, but unfortunately couldn't read the ending, will always be a regret. but please continue writing. will now look forward to the story, update soon!