Reporters - Suggestions corner *Constructive Criticism*

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hola amigos!! How is everyone doing here. I hope you all had a great week and enjoyed the first week of our now common point of interest 'Reporters' 😃 Since our show has completed its first week with tonite's epi I thought why not open a suggestions post for the show. We all have praised Rajeev, Kritika and the other people involved in the show, over the past four days. We know the whole cast and crew is doing a great job. But at the same time it's very important to provide a true and a reasonable feedback to the makers so that we can get a better and improved product in the coming weeks. And I feel no feedback is complete without some constructive criticism. So if you feel there is anything you don't like or you feel is amiss from the show please feel free to share in this post. But there are only two rules of this post:

1. Dont bash any actor/character/makers.
2. Don't forget rule 1.

So here it goes guys...my share of suggestions I would like to give to the makers and the rest of cast and crew after my one week of viewership and I'd be brutally honest at this...brutally because I LOVE Rajeev to the T and I hate criticizing his show like anything but i feel its necessary as a viewer. I know its just been a week but we need to make some things clear since the beginning because this is a mini series and we cant afford to wait for improvements. If you feel it...say it! So
here goes my list...

WEEK #1

###Suggestions for the makers###

1. First and foremost, cvs I really feel the emotional connect is a bit amiss in the show. There is everything but something still feels incomplete. And that is probably because all characters in the show are TOO practical. Its strange the only emotional/family ties you showed was that of Ananya but I didn't feel much for that too. Ananya's mother seems aloof from her emotions and there is a lack of emotional connect between the mother and daughter which is very strange because this bond should have been the point of focus provided if Kabir has anything to do with Ananya's father and her family. I would love to see more bonding between Ananya's small and incomplete family. How they are coping without her dad and more meaning full scenes between Ananya and her mother.

2.You also need to make the side characters more interesting. There is not even a single character from the support cast I as a viewer can really feel strongly about except pandit ji who i feel might play an important role in bringing Ananya and Kabir on the same page. Rest all the side characters lack depth and insight. Be it malvika, Manav or the other two girls. They are real but not insightful.

3. You NEED to work on the makeup team. Honestly Rajeev's makeup is really not upto the mark. I have seen all his previous shows and all his movies and believe me on this he does not need so much of foundation that it starts hampering the expressiveness of his face. At times his face looks quite stiff that is I can bet is not his fault as an actor but the fault of the makeup man who does a pathetic job. Please tone down on that foundation. PLEASE!

4.We seriously need more intelligent characters on the show. Else it's better to quickly convert it into a love story coz the story does lack that crispiness which only a very strong villain or very shrewd anatagonist can bring.

5. Why there is so much focus on 'showing off' in the show. Not all dialogues need to be said with smirks or tilted faces or rolled up eyes. Please don't make that so regular. Kabir looks good when he uses his signature smirks and undertones to show his attitude but it does not suit every charchter. I hate seeing a khalid or a malvika doing that just to show off an attitude. THEY CAN TALK NORMALLY like normal people do without twisted words or tilted necks.

##Suggestions for Rajeev##

1. First of all first things first - Rajeev, I don't think anyone can play this character with the perfection and finise with which you are playing it. Kabir was written for you and you already own it. I just feel you need to loosen up a bit more and let your natural charm reflect from Kabir just the way it used to ooze and reflect from Sujal/Rajveer I know its a return on tv after a long time and that performance pressure does become visible sometimes that make it look you are putting in a lot of effort or a sense of self-consciousness in your body language. So just one suggestion, we all know you will do complete justice to Kabir...so forget all apprehensions and don't shy from coming to your 'natural' self...the loosened up ...the breezy...the relaxed version of you. 😳 Just like you were here...

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NZvJRTtcYf8[/YOUTUBE]

###Suggestions for Kritika###

1. First of all I would like to say you go girl!!! You are ROCKING as Ananya. I am loving how you are controlling your chirpiness to bring the originality in Ananya. Keep up the good work and maintain that balance between Ananya's serious and chirpy side. Its very important.

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That's it guys...what I really felt about the improvement areas for the show. And now the ground is open for you to add your povs. Will await some good and constructive ideas for our makers.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I totally agree with the points you have made.
I also feel that some of the characters haven't been introduced properly.

As for now, I don't have much else to add. But I am really looking forward to how this show progresses.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Great post. Very well said.

The show is great and started with a bang but as you said a couple things are missing.

1. In my opinion what needs improvement are the side characters. make them more likable or viewers will get bored when Kabir and Ananya re not on screen. And when i say likable i don't mean they have to be positive characters they can very much be negative but they need to be interesting to spice up the show.

2. Rajeev & Kritika as actors are doing a fabulous job with their characters I don't think nothing needs to be changed there.

3. In terms of sotry line I think pacing it up would be a great idea. Don't go to fast but also don't go to slow and we are left unhappy. The show will only be on air for 5 months so CVs please make the best of it.

4. We got a bit of background of Anaya, it'd be great if we get a backstory of Kabir. Does Kabir and Piunditji relationship go further than work or were they just colleagues in a newspaper. Please don't leave loopholes.

5. Show so far seems realistic. Hopefully it stays that way. Viewers aren't stupid we catch bloopers very easily.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi.. Nice thread. Thanks!

Agreed with ya on #1 & #2. Agreed, this aint a lovestory (and I dont want it to turn into one either) but representation of b/h the scenes tales of media-world... but somehow I too felt some emotional connent quotient is missing... Ananya's father is so far confined to photoframe only but still I could feel the father-daughter connect with Ananya talking her disappointment to his pic. Her mom is there but her bond with her daughter didnt touch me much... I felt like she is taking good care of her children but is so much overcome with grief of Ananya's father leaving them. She is still not out of what happened 8 years ago and still misses her man (like how she arranged his closet & in the end asked her daughter if he would return for sure) Maybe that's why she sounds aloof to Ananya's emotions. Maybe the story doesnt try to hide truth and thats why feels hard-hitting or maybe we need to be bit more patient and allow for the story to unfold more... Like Ananya & Malvika's character became more clear after today's epi.

Hats off to the actors! The leads Kritika & Rajeev are doing brilliant job and they aren't on board just for the sake of doing show or just act because acting is their profession; but are giving their best to the show with complete commitment and conviction. 👏

Also, many thanks to the channel & PH for trying something new & out-of-the-box. The concept has never been tried on TV till date & they have a team of all awesomes on board; so we too have high expectations from this show. (Dont want it to suffer fate like Yudh)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Great post, I guess the show started off with a bang...
So refreshingly different...

I quite agree with your points...I feel there is something missing...
Or maybe the pace is tad too fast...

Can't complain...its just 4 days...has a lot of promise.
Touch wood we get a good show to be a part of all the buzz in the forum...

While I like Rajeev and Kritika, I think they are great actors...I do feel that Rajeev could tone down his larger than life demeanour a bit...guess that camouflages his natural flair ...just a very critical observation...


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wonderful post 👏👏... & was very much required 😊😊 to have a balanced viewpoint of show without any biasness 😊😊

Agreed with most of your points stated 😊😊 specifically the make up part 😆😆 little make up can be done away with 😆😆 excess can be easily noticed in close up shots 😆😆

1. A interesting side character need to be brought in 😊😊...so that we have that urge to watch in absence of Kabir-ananya 😊😊

2. Need a good strong background music for Kabir... something which will be his identity...

3. Have liked Panditji's character...wud like to see more of him 😊😊

4. Dont make Kabir just as a sensationalizing news anchor...giving breaking news...let him grill politicians, people from various fields in his show...wud love to see his interaction with guests on his show 😊😊


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Great post.
I agree with your points friends.

After watching 4 episodes I think it is a very short time to complain ..but I am a bit bored of the studio. I want to see more outdoor shootings. Or atleast another locations.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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- I will suggest the creative teams to improve the picture quality be it from HD and normal picture quality because it looks the same to me!!
- They need to tone bit of Kabir and Ananya's makeup because it is quite visible and harsh on the high definition!!

- I would also like to know the family background of Kabir and his working relationship between Ananya's father..

- More variations in styling!! The lead actors should experiment more in styling !!

- More outdoor shoots and focus on sensitive issues!!

- I would like to see Kabir interview various people from different fields and takes certain class of them at his news hours just like Arnab Goswami invites few celebrities and have a debate with them!! 👏👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Personally, I feel the LACK of connect is what makes it more interesting. Don't mind me, saying this. :P That's exactly the way I talk to my Mom... Indian Television has this poorly dramatised manner of showing emotions/affection which makes it fake. No daughter keeps hugging her mother all the time. It is very natural. Regarding the other characters, I wanted Malvika to be a professional b*tch. Not negative. But, she is unfortunately a flirt. Sadly. The new lady introduced can be a professional rival but could be a personal friend. To show Ananya's points in positive light, IF they purposely make her points negative, say, I think we needn't bother about poverty, who cares and shit, it will screw it up. Regarding make up and stuff, I myself am an amateur. I'd like it better though, if RK does NOT wear the same shirt everyday. Nice post!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I agree with the person who said have debates. I was thinking the same... If its news they are showing, then they must show a few debates as well. There are celebrities involved in the show itself. Say, the director - Goldie is pretty famous to be featuring on TV. His wife. Some fellow actors. etc.

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