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Posted: 19 years ago
#41
hey lamina aka sapna that part was damn kool and sweet....
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Posted: 19 years ago
#42
o god this was so funny 😆 😆 😆 hope your fan fic come true 👏 atlest here they r together 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#43
lamina it awesome omlette wah kya baat hai 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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now don't expect me to have this too lamina.......the cake was bad enough. 😉 god! i am now getting an idea of how it will be if u cook 😆 seems like it is ur autobiography 😉 neways.it was cute.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#45
rikz...i am not THAT bad 😉 ....n ek aad stone cake should be maaf yaar...dosti ke naam pe 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#46
thanx a lot sappy i am relieved 😉 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey rikzik even i am ur freind will u not taste my cake, although it's a stone cake

lamina plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue it's awsum again
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Posted: 19 years ago
#48
hey lamina that was gr8 plz send the next one soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#49

Part 5

Ranveer walked into the kitchen to find Tia cooking….well actually trying to get rid of the smoke is more like it

R: Tia 😕

Meanwhile…Tia tries to put out the slice of bread from the toaster….with her bare hands…I mean she didn't know much about toasters n all na…and ends up burning her fingers😭

R: Tia …Tia aap thik toh hai na?

Ranveer shuts off the toaster and switches off the gas before the omelette burns

R: Tia …Aap thik hai na??

T:Ranveer…(Tia is about to cry😭)…Tia ka finger burn ho gaya😭

R: Tia …aap yahan kar kya rahi thi??…aapki ungli hume dekhaiye😊

Ranveer puts some ice on the finger😊

R:Abhi aap yahi rukiye…kahi maat jayiye…aur kissi cheez ko haath maat lagayiye

Ranveer finds ointment to apply to Tia's finger…he comes back and gently puts it on Tia's wound😃

R:Tia….kya aab aap thik hai?…kya abhi bhi aapko hurt ho raha hai?😃

T:nahi Ranveer…Tia is ok now…tumne Tia ko medicine jo laga diya hai…now Tia will be fine😳😃

Ranveer smiles at Tia

😃

R: Par…Tia aap hume batayengi …ki aap yahan kitchen mein kya kar rahi thi??😕

T: woh Ranveer…Woh Tia tumhare liye breakfast bana rahi thi😃

R:KYA😕

T:Kyu Ranveer…Tia tumhare liye breakfast nahi bana sakti😆

R:ha …par Tia aap ko yeh sab karne ki kya jaroorat hai…Kailash kaka bana dete breakfast na…aap ko taklif karne ki kya jaroorat thi😊

T:Ranveer…Tia tumhare liye aapne hatonse breakfast bana chahti thi😳

Ranveer takes Tia's hand in his😳

R: Woh toh dikh raha hai…par Tia is saab mein aap hurt ho gayi…

T:Ranveer…Tia wanted to be the perfect wife for you😳...is liye Tia ne yeh kiya😃

R:Kya…(smiles😃…releasing that Tia thinks so much for him)…Tia..yahan dekhiye😳

Ranveer holds Tia's face in his hands😳

R:Tia…aapko kisne kaha ki aap hamare liye perfect wife nahi hai

T:Woh Ranveer…Tia ko toh khana bana bhi nahi aata…toh Tia perfect wife kaise banegi😆

R: (smiles at her innocence)…Tia aap ko hamare liye perfect wife banane ki liye khana bana ne ki jaroorat nahi hai…aap hamare liye pehle se hi perfect hai😃

T: Ranveer tum yeh sirf Tia ka dil rakhne ke liye keh rahe ho na

R: Nahi Tia…hum sach keh rahe hai…hamare liye khana toh koi bhi bana sakta hai…Kaillash kaka bhi …hai na? par hume aap jitna pyaar aur kon kar sakta hai😳…iss liye hamare liye aap se perfect aur koi ho hi nahi sakta…aur hum aapni zindagi kissi aur se saath share karne ka sooch bhi nahi sakte

T: Sach Ranveer😃

R: Ha Tia…Aur waise bhi…hume pura yakin hai ki aap aacha khana bana lengi😆……………………

Edited by lamina - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#50

Part 6

Ranveer looks around to find some food ..cooked by Tia….so that he can prove to Tia that she isn't that bad…he sees the omelette…with the shells popping out…n then the burnt toast…and the coffee

R:Coffee try kar lete hai…coffee kitna mess up kar sakti hai Tia…aur isse Tia ka dil bhi nahi tootega

Ranveer tries the coffee…and after the first sip …he feels like throwing up…🤢

Tia sees this

T: Ranveer…(Tia is about to cry😭)

R: Its ok Tia… hum majak kar rahe the😕…yeh dekhiye hum saari coffee pee rahe hai…bohot acchi bani hai

He somehow drinks it🤢…his stomach feeling a bit queasy now🤢…and tries to smile back at Tia😆

T:Ranveer…coffee acchi nahi bani thi na?

R:Nahi Tia…bohot aachi thi😉

T: Ranveer tum jhooth bhi thik tarah se nahi bolte😭

R:Sorry Tia…par hume jo pehle kaha tha woh sach he…yeh cooking hamare liye important nahi hai…hum aapse pyaar karte hai…kyuki aap jaise koi aur ho hi nahi sakta😳

T: Oh Ranveer😳 (Tia is all lovey dovey eyed now)

Ranveer comes real close to Tia........ and kisses her on the cheek😳…and holds here face in his hands😳.....and then runs his finger across Tia's lips😳…gently kissing her…on the lips😳

T:Ranveer!! (Blushes)😳

Ranveer lifts Tia up in his arms😳 and takes her out of the kitchen

Tia is blusing 😳

T:Ranveer ..koi dekh lega😳 (totally filmy dialogue ofcourse..sorry couldn't think of anything else😆)

R:Toh kya hua😉

T:Ranveer…Kailash kaka aa gaye toh?😳

R:Toh kya…hum kissi se darte nahi hai…humne chori tohdi na ki hai…aapni biwi se pyaar kar rahe hai😉

Ranveer carries Tia and walks towards the bedroom😳😉…………

Just then…TRING TRING………………………………

Edited by lamina - 19 years ago

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