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Posted: 19 years ago
#21
hey its really nice...plz continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#22
hey plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue
u stopped again
i can't wait again
u write awsum
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Posted: 19 years ago
#23
arey continue,tum monday kha epi mat socho,bas yeh fanfic likho,main bahut taras rahein hoon, tia kha surprise dekhne
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Posted: 19 years ago
#24
hi....

sorry ..was out all day...just got back home...missed today's remix too....will post the next part in a really really short while...let me just type it out

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Posted: 19 years ago
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PART - 3


Tia saw Ranveer as he left home to go off to work....and then went to the kitchen....to get working on a small bit of her surprise....she found Kailash Kaka there...

T: Kailash kaka...Tia ko aap ki help chahiye

KK:Ha Tia beti..batoa ..mein kya karu tumhare liye??

T:Woh Kailash kaka..Tia ko cake banana shikhna hai

KK: Tia beti..tumhe cake khana hai.....toh mujhe batao na...mein bana deta hun

T:Nahi Kailash kaka....Tia ko cake khana nahi banana hai

KK: KYA???😕.....(poor Kailash kaka...even he is surprised and shocked by Tia's request)

T:Woh...Kailash kaka...Tia ko Ranveer ke bday ke liye cake banana hai...

KK:Par.....Par Tia beti...tumhe khana banana bhi nahi aata hai

T:Toh ..Toh kya hua Kailash kaka...there is always a first time....Tia sikhna chahti hai...please Tia ki khatir...please shikha dijiye na

Well Kailash kaka has taken care of her since she was a kid...how could he refuse Tia's request now...he reluctantly agrees to teach Tia

Kailash kaka goes through the entire process with her...batter..oven temp, etc (sorry thats all the terminology i know...kitchen is pretty much like mars to me...alien)

KK: Tia beti..tumhe paata chal gaya na..ya mein phir se baata du?

T:Please Kailash kaka...Tia itni stupid nahi hai..Tia totally samajh gayi hai...aaj dekhiye Tia will make the best bday cake for Ranveer😃

KK:Paata nahi aaj kya hone wala hai😕

KK:Thik hai Tia beti...par agar tumhe zaroorat pade toh yeh cooking ka book dekh lena

T: Ok! Kailash kaka

KK: Accha Tia..mein tumhari madat karta hun..cake banane mein??

T:Nahi Kailash kaka...Tia yeh saabh kuch khud aapne haathon se karna chahti hai..

KK: Tia beti...par main toh sirf madat....

T:Nahi Kailash kaka...Aap baas papa ke waaha chale jayiye..waaha pe bhi toh saari preparations karni hai..party ki....please aap waaha jayiye

KK: Par mein tumhe yaha akele chod ke kaisa ja sakto hoon??

KK:Paata nahi yaha Tia beti ko akele choda toh kya hoga😕

T: Kaka aap bhikul worry maat ki jiye..Tia hai na...Tia saab manage kar legi...aap baas zaldi papa ke waaha jayiye

Tia is not one to give up when she gets something in her mind..so Kailash kaka gives in and goes over to Sumeet's place

Tia in the meantime is busy in the kitchen...and after a lot lot lot of hardwork...she manages to get the mixture ready and puts it in the oven ...and waits for the cake to be ready

T:Oh God!! Tia is totally tired now...cake banana kitna difficult hai...aab Tia ke paas make-up karke ready hone ki bhi energy nahi hai...par Ranveer ki liye Tia kuch bhi kar sakti hai

While saying this....Tia remembers the first time she TRIED cooking for Ranveer....it was right after they got back from their honermoon😳.............Tia has been so excited about cooking for Ranveer then......................................................

Edited by lamina - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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lamina its awesome.i really liked it.now od only knows how ranveer is gonna eat it😕

Edited by tia_mehra - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hi....

just posted part 3 above

will write the next bit in the morning...want to be totally awake when i write it...dont want to mess it up

in meantime.... please let me know what u think of the story so far

Edited by lamina - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#28
its framing gr8 lamina.keep going 👏 👏
so u know how cake is made eh!do u make them?and is it worth eating? 😉 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#29
rikz..i dont know how to make cakes or cook......but i can give it a try for u though...r u ready to eat it... in case it turns out to be more like stone cake 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#30

good going lamina......plz continue......and priyanka in case u accept lamina's offer my best wishes r with u 😆 😆

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