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Nice progress!!! Plz continue as you wish...its always a pleasure to read!

Firstly Hi rikz!!😊Its been a week since i visited this forum....coz of the damn net hrs which got over......😡and also coz of my exams.....par main tumhari fic padhne ke liye sab kuch sacrifice kar sakti hoon.....😉Actually....not sab kuch......u know wat not....😉😉

Neways....as Usual.....the part was Rocking!!!!👏...looks like ab fic mein aur serial mein bhi...Ashi's breaking off wid her Boyfriend....😊Plz continue soon....and continue watever u feel likie continuing...though i 4 one wont miss dat costume discussing part much....and its ok wid me if u cut it....but u decide...its ur fic after all!!😛

u can write the way u want...butplz continue

Just superb 👏 .I luv reading your fics.I am eagerly waiting for your next part 😊 .

hey mads!welcum back yaar missed you!

thanx bluey and anvesha[i welcomed you but am so sorry i forgot ur real name! 😭 😭 i am at memory loss nowadays.pls don't mind!]
and thanx.

hi rikzik
gr8888888888888888 fanfic awesum
just cant find words for it
plz continue

sorry rikz i surely dont remember much of this fan fic had to read the last 3 4 parts to make any sense

😆 😆 at memory loss like me???
will post an uodate next time..next time hopefully in the not so distant future 😵

update of the story:
football match.
rods entry.[ashi's boyfriend]
entry of misiphisi[the siamese twins]
announcement of the cheerleading competition.
the auditions r on.first yuvi is not in.
aman vrinda break up and yuvi is replaced in place of aman.
aman is leaving for ludhiana.
kors entry[the choreographer].
ashi and rods have a tiff as he kisses her by trick but they sort it out.
yuvi decided he won't sit and brood for ashi and throws off the ring.
ashi and yuvi become more of friends.
there is the cheerleading competition then.
in the prelim round the group is shocked to see their choreography being performed by the previous group paranoids.
the paranoids captain gets angry seeing the same choreography and comes flaring to demand an explanation from ashi.there they both realise that their choreographer was the same.they r called by the judges and luckily for them such an incident had occurred abt 2 yrs back and so somehow they r pushed in the finals.
ashi and yuvi cum to know that ir was rods who with lati's help had cheated their team by putting kors as their choreographer.the story ahead!

part 20:
vrinda:ashi….next is our turn!my stomach is acting weird!aur laty……..
a:well dun worry abt her.i have seen to it that she won't play ne more tricks.i can assure u that much.she will perform her part in the competition properly……..

raffles:hey ashi.all the best yaar!man I am so excited……and we both r competing rn't we?wow!c'mon lets give each other a goodluck punch………

"CALLING TEAM SPIRITS………CALLING TEAM SPIRITS………"

y:ashi stop jumping!I know they r announcing the results.
A:shut up!yuvi…….we r neck to neck…..raffles team was really good!their choreo was so smart and their sufi mix rap music was very smart……..
R:be ready to loose ashi…………
Y:rods dude!itni overconfidence???well I don't want to say nething……..just wait and watch..neways ur teams name hasn't been announced in the third position has it?does that make u think u will end up in the first slot…….well just a few minutes more….lets enjoy till then!

"ON THE SECOND PLACE………….SPIRITS………."

R:ha ha look I told you ………..says rods with an overconfident look on his face and setting his hair ,ready to gather his price……….

"AND THE FIRST PRICE GOES TO THE EXCELLENT PERFORMANCE AND THE ROCKING MUSIC…AND THE TEAM IS….PPL…WHO IS IT?…….NE GUESS…WELL YES!!!!!THE PARANOIDS"

"yooooooo yaaaaaaaaa"yells raffles…..her joy knew no bounds…….

Hearing this rods face becomes like a rotten tomato……..ashi yuvi just smirk at him and walk off……….the smirk containing wtever they wanted to convey…….rods just couldn't bear it nemore……….he was those kind of guys who made an imaginary macho image in front of everyone……..but when it came to facing things…..they always preffered running away instead of facing them ……….they would even fail to accept the fact that they were wrong………and wearing his proud mask again…he goes towards his team……"cheer up ppl………winning is not everything……the main thing is we participated"[but he spoke those words without understanding the real essence of competition…of team work….probably he never would…cos he is like that….he fell into that category of ppl…….who r glib liars…..more than to the world..to themselves……….]

Y:raffles raffles raffles……….god!I thought u just stole my heart wt is this yaar?u seem to have stolen the hearts of judges too…….

R"wt can I do?[she said smiling]can't help it…stealing hearts……..

Y"[laughs]ok.congrats..u guys really deserved it….u rocked……..ashi….
A:ya yuvi coming!!!!heres our trophy…not the rolling shield but ya….it is ok……..raffles I am really glad for you guys!u were simply superb!congrats on winning the rolling shield!
R:thanx ashi……….k got to go…..meet u guys on the day of the farewell..we got it together rite?I mean all the schools of our locality……we will have a blast.till then bye……and bye yuvi…………
Y:bye[says winking at her].
Ashi was in her room…………..

Ashi stares at the piece of "paper".she had not wanted yuvi to see it that day during their practice………….ha ha ashi…y did u pik up the ring…..u recognized it didn't you?………even when rods was ur boyfriend u wanted yuvi to still look at you…admire you didn't you?…duh uh!bas ye neeche gira tha aur bas maine use utha liya……….aur kuch nahin……duh uh duh uh duh uh…..hamesha tum mujhe ye bolkar chup kar deti ho…her inner voice told her…..kabhi toh meri baat suna karo……..yuvi still loves u ashi….and even you do don't you?….well…pata nahin………….

She hears a knock at the door"ashi"

"yuvi??kya chahiye?

"well ashi…..u remember the promise u had done that you will dance with me on the start of our new friendship?well will u me become my date for the prom nite?well all r paired up…no vacancy available[laughs]………will you please?……….do the honour of ……….

Soch kya rahin hain ashi?han bolo…………yuvi……..mujhe pata nahin……….


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the entire atmosphere is sparked with the enthusiasm of dancers…..all dancing beautifully with grace and storming the dance floor……..
but at the same time……ppl were feeling bad that after this day….they will al be moving in different directions……….towards their own goals……..to mark their own step independently………….

Ashi and yuvi were dancing……they were laughing and giggling……..at some funny nut joke yuvi had cracked…….they both were enjoying themselves……they did not care whether they won the prom queen or prom king title.they were just enjoying themselves……….ashi go ahead….c'mon tell him……….duh uh! She said…….


"PPL PPL PPL……WELL GUESS WT I AM HOLDING?WELL U GUESSED IT RITE…….I HAVE THE CARD WHICH ON OPENING WILL TELL ME THE PROM QUEEN AND PROM KING FOR THE DAY….FOR THE FAREWELL OF THE BATCH OF 2005………AND HERE I OPEN……AND THE PROM KING IS……THE HANDSOME HUNK RODS……….."

"YAAA"yelled rods………..passing a "I had to win this "kinda look to yuvi………and he goes towards the stage…………

"AND THE PROM QUEEN…….OMG………WAIT A SEC……….WE HAVE A TIE…HERE……IT IS MISI PHISI……….THE TWINS!!!"

the expression on rods face immediately changing!gtting a look of terror"noooooooo" he yelled………

misi phisi running and coming…..if not yuvi and sid…..rods hi sahi they both think
"rods!!!!!"they both yell…….

"nooooooo"yells rods………

"AND NOW FOR THE DANCE OF THE EVENING….PRESENTING TO YOU THE PROM KING AND THE PROM QUEENS………………..

the entire audience burst out laughing…the way rods was being flipped inbetween the twins…the site very weird…one guy being tossed between two and that too the twins were stuck by their back…even if he wanted to leave the twins were in no mood to let him go………….

Ashi and yuvi were still dancing………….
"ashi"yuvi softly whispered……..i am too bored dancing….c'mon lets go out……..
"well theek hain par kahan?

…wahin……who lake ke paas remember I took you there that day?"
"ya.that place is beautiful…par kyon?……"

"chalo toh sahi ashi……….."