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Posted: 19 years ago
😆 appy........my tests rn't going to end till next may!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
😆
Then I guess we all want you to write more frequently! Coz by the time ur tests get over...we'll all have grand children! 😆

Btw....forgot to tell u in my pvs post.....

I found the cricket/football dialogues cute....& funny!
Now I'm really wondering who this night creature could be! Knowing your fan fic style....it would be some1 we would least predict!
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Posted: 19 years ago
😆 😆 that is the very reason i asked whether someone would carry it forward........
well basically i am getting irritated with my story...
i will never carry on such a huge story again.
short fics r better off .........atleast they don't drag!!
i just want to post my last part...cos i dun know how many of u will be able to take it..........wtever i have planned........well by now u all will neways be used to heart attacks though...... 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
pri..good to read ur writting ..it was good..really...honestly....hmmmm continue writting...
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Posted: 19 years ago

Well as usual Rikz.....AMAZING!!!!!👏👏👏.....

And I dont want to comment on watever has been said abt Yuvi/Raj.....and abt my romance wid him...............

Coz rite now i only hav time to romance wid phyisics,chemistry and biology........😕😆

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Posted: 19 years ago

gr8 going priyanka.......and thanx a lot for informing abt the last part well in advance.....atleast I can keep myself mentally prepared 😉

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Posted: 19 years ago

PART 19:

"oucccchhhhh"yelled rods in pain………and he looked up….seeing ashi……..followed by yuvi……he looked half shocked and half surprised!

Y:dude tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?laty tum yahan?[yuvi queries with a comfused look]

A:yuvi pls kuch der ke liye tumhare mouth ko stitch karlo.mujhe yahan kuch zaroori kaam niptaana hain……….

"chill ashi itna gussa kyon???"asks yuvi…….

"let me explain ashi…..ashi laty wanted to get back on you…so she was trying to fill something against you in my brains.but I faile………."he blabbers looking at ashi's fuming look………

"rods u were the one!wt r u talking????"asks laty………uncomfortable but still trying to defend herself……..

"SHUT UP LATY!!!!!dun worry we will give you a chance to talk before we make U DUMB!!!!"yells ashi in her full voice..her voice echoing and giving a double effect in the calm of the nite……….

"and rods.stop weaving excuses.tell me what is your connection with kors????I heard every bit of ur conversation…so just spit out the truth!"says ashi.

"I love you ashi!!"says rods trying to make an angelic look.

"come to the point kors!"says ashi her eyes flaming and giving "ready to pounce on you kinda look!"

seeing that his game was up………his angelic expression suddenly changes to give a tinch of wickedness……..as if he had suddenly removed the mask that he was wearing…………

"hm……theek hain .suno"he says…….his angelic eyes suddenly captured by a gloom of terror…………….

"I couldn't forget the defeat against the "roaring tigers".roaring tigers against the demolitions…….we had to demolish them..but yuvi………damn him…….his last goal……..changed everything……..i lost for the first time…….i wanted to show yuvi his right place.so when I came to know that he is also participating in the cheerleading competition I decided….that was the rite time…….yuvi's goal had made me!!!!roddy……….the demolisher…..loose[he said grinding his teeth!]"he closed his eyes and clenced his fists and the scene of yuvi in his red sweaty t shirt roaring"yaaaaaaaaa"like a tiger and removing his shirt and flinging it and yelling…….crosses his mind…………he had felt like killing him that time…he had felt so insulted…but for the rite time I will wait…he had said to himself.

"kors???"ashi quizzically asks him keeping a stern face and raising one of her eyebrows……….

"I found out abt kors while reading abt the history of this cheerleading competition. .his job itself was to always copy choreography by entering schools and teach it to other school and make money.two years back he had done the same thing that happened with you guys in a comp before.but that fool had been caught by the judge then and he was smashed black and blue.but he had somehow managed to escape and he was lying low for so many days.he still copied choreography but he didn't teach in competitions.i found abt him and offered him so much money that he couldn't deny my offer.i asked him to enter raffles school first as they were last year runner ups and they were good too.i thought the best way to do that was to repeat history.but ur luck was good that the same judge turned out and he found the occurrence similar to that which had happened abt 2 yrs ago.and both the teams ended in the competition.i had seen laty crying and talking to herself abt how she wanted to kill you because acc to her it was because of you that aman broke up with vrinda and sid …whom she liked a lot…had got an opportunity to date vrinda…….i found my companion for fulfilling the plan and made her make her dad agree to make kors the choreographer.kors did not find any difficulty in finding a place as choreographer in raffles school as the princi there was just wanting a person to guide since the princi had full faith on her girls.but kors by his talk[the princi liked guys with girlish voices!]….moved the princi quite easily.and I made a code with laty so that no one knows abt it…….she called me sweetheart and I called her darling so that our conversation on phone or something doesn't create suspicion………so ashi there is nothing between me and laty…I love you ashi"

"rods.keep loving me sweetheart.can't help it if I am that likeable can I?"she says smiling at him……

"ashi tum iske saath…main toh iski…"ashi stops yuvi's hands……..and she turns……and is on the verge of walking off……….she suddenly turns and gives him a powerful thunderous fistful punch on his face smashing his jaws….the sound echoing and creating a double effect in the nite against the sound of the brushing wind……….

"keep romancing that!!!"she says and looks at laty..she goes towards her and twists her hand and drags her with her..

"ashi wacko mujhe chodho"laty yells……….ashi looks at her…..

"chup chap chalo…..you snitch!"

"ashi"rods yells………."I will give you the answer for this punch[pain still showing in his voice]….in the competition"

ashi stops.[still holding laty in her clutches]

"u don't have ne rite to call it a competition.you fail to understand the feeling and spirit of competition.the main spirit of competition is being sporting.which attitude you have proved you have got in ounces[she says mocking at him]so do wtever you want rods.we will win this competitiona and show you.and here starts the real challenge.you said u felt you have been insulted as you never understood wt it is to be a part of team.u never considered the entire team as one.that is where you r going to lag out.and just watch for that rods!"says ashi keeping her cool…she herself surprised at her reaction…it hadn't hurt her….y……..she did not feel that hurt…all she had felt was anger…..and that too because he had played a mean trick on her team………….she in fact felt nice..she had never been fully happy with rods…that emptiness…….but now……...i told you..said something from inside………duh uh!she said and shut it up!……………

"we will see!"says rods………

"and we will show you"yell ashi and yuvi in unison………………
Edited by nishi - 19 years ago
rikzik thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
😆 arre it got printed in big fonts.hope you all like it!
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Posted: 19 years ago
all readers i want to ask you all something.do you want me to make a part on them discussing costumes and all.or can i cut that part?and directly show the competition?
pls let me know.
i will write accordingly........ 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
as you wisk riks !!!!!!!!!

par aur koi suspense nahi !!

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