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Posted: 20 years ago
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Simply marvelous, spectacular,amazing, splendid..........and the list goes on... 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏.........the words u used were awesome........and now I am being greedy and requesting u that u plz write some more whenever u have time........coz u r wonderful at it 😛

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Posted: 20 years ago
#22
dat was simply tooo gud 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
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thanx guys..and ashitha i will quench ur greed as soon as i quench the thirst of my dried brains......
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Posted: 20 years ago
#24
Wow Priyanka....I was at the edge of my seat, holding my breath to find out who this fan fic was about.
It's one of the most beautiful I've read. I could easily picturize the scene!!!
Really really really amazing work! 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
#25
great work 👏
now i will have to write much better romantic stories
keep up the good work
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Posted: 20 years ago
#26
gr8 gr8 gr8 work,it's like reading some book
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Posted: 20 years ago
#27
god!! u were great,fantastic,fantabulous,awesome,........
my heart just skipped a beat........ 👏 👏 👏
plzzzzz write another short and sweet fanfic on ashi and yuvi........... 😃
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Posted: 20 years ago
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HUMANS WE CALL OURSELVES........
[my thought-hatred]
the sound of someone crying filled the calm atmosphere of trees.........it was all green around.the blue sky above with the sun smiling more willingly..the birds in v-formation heading as if they had an important message to deliver.....the message of freedom.of liberty and love...love they say is the oxygen of the soul.....
but how could the girl weeping here understand...she is weeping out of her own deeds.hate is a prolonged form of suicide.
this even spiders like us understand.but a human to whom god has given the ability to think and speak fail to understand.man acc to we creatures is the only animal to whom the torture and death of his fellow creatures is amusing in itself.this girl's hatred is like burning her own house in order to drive a rat.y so much hatred when it is easier to love?when will she understand the language of love?i just wish now that someone somewhere in this world would do a brain and heart purification for this girl by using the essence of life and its ultimate goal which we call .......LOVE.so much that her heart made of stone should get scratched and relieved of all the hard things that she has accumulated in her years and just pour liquid and vapourised love into her heart and brain.......
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Posted: 20 years ago
#29
ok guys now i want to know how will u deal with a person with so much filth built inside her?
guess who it is ...though i am sure u will.
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Posted: 20 years ago
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well!these were my thoughts.i know i am a mere spider.but dont u want to know wt happened ahead?then pls read............
the deafening sound of tears was suddenly vanquished by a sweet sound..it seemed like the birds singing,at the same time like the water lashing..it was like the nature's creations had suddenly got back their lost life...but the sound stopped and a sweet melodious voice filled the air......singing...
"BEYOND THE VALE OF TEARS;
THERE IS LIFE ABOVE;
UNMEASURED BY THE FLIGHT OF YEARS;
AND ALL THAT LIFE IS LOVE."
she stopped weeping...the music so melodious that it could make a deaf man to hear.......then wt was this mere human?she looked in the direction of the sound.....she got up.her body stiff owing to the continuous moaning and her dress covered with dried leaves,twigs and other filth.the music was so melodious that it drew her towards the source like a magnet.....

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