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english drama book !!😆 😆 nishi.......

ne ways thanx a lot guys.was just trying to write something different from conversations........and even i can't bear seeing yuvi ashi apart for a long time can i? 😉 ..but neways....."there is no gain without pain." 😉

i liked this part...yuvi ashi expressing their love n confussion...well written 👏

Hi Priyanka....read the last two parts together.
The ashi-yuvi dialogues were really funny and cool in part 8.
Part 9....honestly gal, it took me a while to understand the 1st three lines......that was some deep stuff!
I thoroughy enjoyed this part. Engrossing...

And plz.....dont worry about the fan fic being too long. Plz dont cut it short for fear of no readers! the more the twists and turns....the merier!!!
I will always read yours....thodi der se hi sahi!
Lovely fan fic and lookin forward to the next part! Plz do let us know when you might post it.
I'm a littlt busy these days and unable to read all topics. But I look fwd to your fanfic & will log on accordingly!

aparna first of all kimi is damn sweet! 😳
and thanx a lot........will surely let u know.

Wat can i say Rikz!!!!You Are Just The Best!!!!👏....And believe me......this was the best part in ur entire fic....except of corse....the par abt red dat u had written in the beginning.....nothing can beat dat....but stilll this was damn good....now u r giving me competition even in writing fic.......😉I'm getting a complex now😆....ok...lets make a deal....you write fics better than me....I assure you dat u'll get all the readers...I give you dat chance....but give my yuvi back to me.....now choose...😉😉😉

shut up wacko.no deal can take yuvi off me allrite 😉 so u agree that yuvi is mine don't u? 😳 and as for complex darling to be franc i get that sometimes too looking at ur different line of thinking. 😉 😉 well as for readers u can have them no probs..now i will post them whether readers or no reders cos i can't leave the story hanging in the air can i? 😉 and i seriously feel there r better writers than me..........

PART 10

"yuvi...utho..yuvi dude..get up! man!"said sid shaking him..but yuvi didn't move an inch..sid gave him a kick...but yuvi still snoring loudly......


ggrrrr...aaaatorrrr.....grrrr...aatoor........

sid:sorry ashi seems like he is in no mood to get up today...pata nahi raat ko kab aake soya.....

a:hey bhaggu!!look at him snoring..ek tiger bhi itne zor se chilatha nahi hoga..look at him fully cuddled up in his bedsheet...[she looks at him sweetly for a moment]..sid usse pls uthao...waqrna mein mis.....

sid:ashi that's the 100th time ur telling me this since u came allrite.c'mon u r seeing na i am also trying to wake him up allright?..aur mujhe phir se woh cartoons misi phisi ke baare mein yaad mat dhilaana...

a:duh uh!ek cartoon doosre cartoons ke baare mein baaat kar raha hain....bohut perfect lagoge tum dono.oops.i mean teeno...and u should be happy don't they come in the two in one offer?ek lo toh doosra free.imagine u dancing with them[laughs] 😆

sid:very funny.lekhin ab iska kya kare?

ashi:mujhe bohot pyaas lagi hain sid pls fridge se ek bottle paani lekhe aana..........

sid:mujhe kya tumhare.....

a:misi....

sid:i said i am going allright!!!

sid gets the bottle .......a devilish smile spreads over ashi's face..........and her lips go cross with a smirk in her face....

a"sid pls pull the bedsheet out......
s:par ashi that's wt we r trying to...stop !!!no!!!...

SPLASH!!!

y:oh!!!who the hell!!wt the heck!!!

a:[smirk]good morning yuvi.....

y:you wacko!!r u nuts?subah subah.acho..wt the hell is wrong with u?cold water.i mean .....achoo..u ...achoooo

a:ho gaya?aur kuch bolna hain kya?..tum aise kumbakaran jaise sleep karoge toh bas yahi tarreka tha tumhe uthaane ka.....waise subah subah tum jaisi ugly duckling woh bhi grr....grrr.snore karte huey ko dekhne ke liye mera bhi koi shauk nahi hain......

y:allrite then.door wahan par hain!GET LOST...achhooo

a:chill!

y:acho.aisi cold water daala kaafi nahi hain kya?i am chilling.....acho......
a:[not able to control her giggles]..ye lo tissue...aur waise bhi i want to talk something important to you..that's y i came.......

y:shoot......sid get me a towel pls.
s:cool dude...waise accha bed bath tha.bed tea bed coffee.......now bed bath.kool......
yuvi gives him an angry glance.......
sid leaves giving him a wink and pointing at ashi......

well yuvi.the cheerleading comp has a new team now.and u r in the team.i just wanted to oinform u that.....aman is leaving and going to ludhiana.probably ...forever...

sid drops the towel he is holding in his hand.....
s:what!!wow!!!! ashi ....subah subah thanx for the good news.....aman....woh lambu..ludhiana....

y:shut up! sid....tumhe kya lagtha hain ashi?mein koi chewing gum hoon?jab chahe mooh par daal diya aur jab chahe phek diya?.achoooo

a:ye lo ek aur tissue.[holding a tissue box in her hand]

a:look yuvi...among guys u r the one who is the best right now allright.and i know how u wanted to be a part of it.........look we had shortlisted u amongst all the others...it was either u or ranveer.....and we felt ranveer was better...but now since aman is leaving....it got to be you......

y:no ways!!

a:c'mon yuvi.don't make things difficult for me..be a sport.....


yuvi looks at her angrily.but their eyes meet and his anger seems to be lost in the ocean of her eyes.......they both keep looking ..lost in each others eyes..............

s:aacchoo.......[purposely]
both of them come back to their senses.....
a:duh uh! toh phir tum auditions ke liye aaye hi kyon?

s:woh baat ye hain ashi......

y:shut up sid!

a:look i am not used to pleading allright i am asking u for the last time.....

s:waise aman.....

a:shut up sid!or else i will call misiphis..........

sid shuts up his mouth immediately and gives his general idiotic but sweet look.........

a:or r u afraid?"papa kya bolenge agar mujhe cheerleading karte huey dekh liya toh?yashwant dev ka beta aur cheerleading....kabhi nahi.....blah blah blah!"

y:stop it allright........ok.tell me..when and where is the practice?

ashi smiled.raising one of her eyebrows..and giving"there i have won one more trophy"kinda look.......

gr8 aman bana ko ludhiana mein hi rakhna use wapas lane ki koi zaroorat nahi hain

lagta hain rikz hum fan fic writers hi ek doosre ke bare mein likh rahe hain
all the others seem to have fallen to sleep

Nice.....really happy that Aman will be packed off to ludhiana!

Good for Sid....I'm very happy that now Vrinda will be single again!!!

As for yuvi....usse toh coldarin ki zaroorat hogi....so sad 😭.
Why is it that Yuvi is always so tongue tied when it comes to repliying to Ashi & her smart comments.
Looking forward to the cheerleading part....I'm sure it'll be funny, though I'm unable at this moment to picturize Yuvi & Ranveer doing all those acrobatic things!!!

what say should we put them in shorts or something for the cheerleading
that would be funny