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Posted: 20 years ago

priyanka no yuvi in the team 😭 😭.....and stop saying that no one is reading ur fic......all of us r reading it.......although u r treating yuvi so badly in it

anyways cheer up priyanka......ur fic is too good 👏 👏 👏 👏

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Posted: 20 years ago
ashita ..u have recovered for ur heartattack now 😉.....uv is not here currently coz he is stuck in the bakra bakri post 😆 😆 ...wahan se niklega toh yahan aayega na 😉



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Posted: 20 years ago

Originally posted by: lamina

ashita ..u have recovered for ur heartattack now 😉.....uv is not here currently coz he is stuck in the bakra bakri post 😆 😆 ...wahan se niklega toh yahan aayega na 😉



😆 😆 priyanka fails to understand one thing that when I get a heart attack it is yuvi who suffers from it.....kyunki uska dil mere paas hai.....aur mera uske paas 😳 😳
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Posted: 20 years ago
well i was seriously angry today seeing so less replies............and as for the views aparna...i just see the replies and not the views...i don't have some special tantrik power by which i get to know that who r the hidden viewers allrite?in fact if i see more viewers and no comments then i feel"is my fic getting all the more boring?"can't help it u see human tendency....
and no mads..it's got nothing to do with ur siggy.it's just ur misunderstanding.......i am so sorry if u thought that i stopped my fic because of u.....
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Posted: 20 years ago
and ashita first of all for wtever comments u have written 😆 😆 can't stop my laughter amidst my anger.......and ashita.....this is not the bakra post darling and that applies to u too la 😉 mina.
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Posted: 20 years ago
well guys i really thought my fic "thoughts" was getting boring...............well i dunno y?but neways seeing there r ppl reading i am posting my next part...... 😛

PART-7
it is around 11'0 clock in the nite……….

Ashi:what!! U actually broke up with aman!vrinde u actually had the guts to do that?I am impressed………but vrinde is that wt u really want?
V:ashi.maine soch samajhkar hi yeh faisla liya hain.seriously I understood I won't be happy just sacrificing and thinking always abt others…I should think abt myself sometimes too……well I just tried wt u generally do……..follow ur heart……..

Ashi gave her a wink and a friendly hug…………
V:ajeeb toh yeh baat hain ki I am feeling like I am out of cage and not as if I have ended a relationship……strange isn't it?

I never felt like that when I ended the relationship …………….she thought…………
Ashi….ashi…………..
A:haan bolo………
Mp:rods ka call aaya……jaise tumne kahan maine usse bola ki tum shed mein ho..but y didn't u want to talk to him?he seemed quite frustrated………..
A:let him get frustrated for sometime……..i am going to give him a surprise…….k mp and vrinda neways I am sneaking out of the window…….i tried in the morning climbing down the pipe…so will be going that way……so just cover up.k bye…

Mp:ashi.r u nut?u r going to climb down the pipes!no ways….i am not going to allow u do that…..

A:chill mp.i told u I already tried it in the morning..well just take care abt the prefects…..they shouldn't come to know abt my absence…..c'mon guys help me now..rods will flare up otherwise………

Mp:afraid of him eh!

A:duh uh!mp…….u know how much he likes me…..[blushes].it's just that I want to make the surprise grand for him…..i will tell u abt it after I come back…….

She climbs down the pipe and heads towards the shed…she bumps………

A:duh uh!tum idhar kya kar rahe ho?you dodo……

Yuvi:shut up u wacko..tumse matlab…….

A:well!nothing it was just that misi and phisi were searching for you and where is sid?…..for him too…….

Y:very funny.waise tumne pipe climbing kab seekha?

A:you wacko jab main tumhe dat……..

Y:mujhe kya?

A:kuch nahi.waise I don't wan't to waste my words on u..waise bhi go to ur sweetheart misi.she will neways be waiting for u…….

Y:well…..yahan kisi ki jalne ki booh aa rahi hain……

A:hey bhaggu!pata nahin aapne is looser ko earth mein kyon bheja?earth ka sabse bada bhoj…

Y:really eh!u red head……well neways I don't want to argue with u.i just wanted to tell you kal shed mein band practice hain at 8'0' clock.so be there.and don't forget to get the lyrics….

A:k.now goodbye!

Y:waise meri bhi koi shauk nahi hain tumhari mooh lagne ki……get it wacko….

A:well ENT specialist ko bhulaaon? I said GOOD BYE!

Y:hmph!!!
He walks off……..he turns and looks at her heading towards the shed……….

Part8…….


Blink.blink..ashi checks the msg on her mobile………….
"ashi where the hell r u?waiting for u in the shed.luv roddy……."

A:duh uh!main yahan hoon…..

R:well time mila kya apne bf se milne ke liye?

A:well sweetheart.seems like that doesn't it?waise appontment kab liya tha aapne anvesha banerjee ray se milne ke liye?

Smiles….not able to withstand her sense of humour and charm………

R:well…did u forget something today?y r there candles here?

A:well I thought..i will ask u for a date today….and thoda dancing ho jaaye……

R:well darling y not?……..

He holds ashi and swings her away from him and towards him….ashi fully in control of his powerful arms……

R:I love u ashi……..

Whenever he said that she found it very tough to reply…she didn't know y………she just smiled back at him…as if making him realize that she was approving………..

A:well roddy pls stop the music…………[he stops it}
A:happy b'day rods……she said and went to place a peck on his cheek…when he suddenly turned his face ……….so that his lips touched hers……….

Someone watching from behind couldn't bear to see nemore…….yuvi left……….

A:wt the heck!!she said pushing him behind…….
R:wt happened?it was just our first kiss sweetheart……

A:I am sorry roddy but that was no kiss…hoe could u so suddenly turn ur face?……I never meant to give u a smooch!!!

R:y r u overreacting sweetheart?well if u felt bad I am sorry allrite…….

A:that's not the point roddy…a kiss should automatically happen…u just can't do such a thing..it's kinda forceful……I didn't expect u to behave like this……..GOODBYE AND GOOD NITE!

………….saying this ashi stormed outside……………….


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Posted: 20 years ago
gud one priyanka 👏 but u know what i like reading na 😃
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Posted: 20 years ago
Good one rikz👏....but plz plz plz.......dont make my yuvi suffer so much!!😉😉
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Posted: 20 years ago

well priyanka the last part was damn good.....finally I can see some hope for yuvi.....although I am sure u won't let it last for too long

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Posted: 20 years ago

Originally posted by: anvesha rulz

well priyanka the last part was damn good.....finally I can see some hope for yuvi.....although I am sure u won't let it last for too long

😆how much faith u have in me!!!i am impressed.😉

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