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Originally posted by: mads

Good one rikz👏....but plz plz plz.......dont make my yuvi suffer so much!!😉😉

ur yuvi eh!well i will see u in the bakra post tomorrow........that's all i will say😉

i wanted to ask u guys something.the plot that i am planning will make the story quite big......is it allrite..or do u guys want to have a happy ending this soon?or wait and have fun with the twists?let me know...

twists !!!!
kaisa twist !!!
kyaa twist !!!
kise twist !
kitne twists !!!

riks plzzzz yuvi aur ashi ko alag mat rakho !!!!

nishi so many questions together 😆.....well priyanka I don't mind the twists.....as long as u get them 2gether in the end......and I surely have that much faith in u 😉

nice going so far...liked that vrinda has come to her sense n is acting strong...ashi...trying to climg down the pipes...so like her...and yuvi catching her huh..liked the bit abt ENT...and hope ashi wakes u soon...when she cant even say i love u to roddy...that should be the warning signal right....but then again...this is so like ashi...i mean thats what she is doing right now...so the characther or ashi well captured...ditto with yuvi too....

is this good enough review of ur work...hope u dont need to complain now 😉 😆

😆 😆 😆 lamina.wt can i say!i can just laugh.and nishi i dunno how to answer so many questions. 😉 for that u got to wait and read darling. 😆

PART -9:
……..pure love being a consciousness…………not being a gross entity…….is realizable only through a supra sensorial eternal mechanism…………….which is sort of a revelation……a restoration of eternal happiness………………but as Shakespeare rightly said…."THE COURSE OF TRUE LOVE NEVER DID RUN SMOOTH"…….both of them experiencing kaleidoscope of emotions…….running through their hearts………not being able to reveal it……….


"ashi ………..I still love you…..but I won't bother u anymore…….i will always keep loving you……..you were my first love and will always be……..i try being away from u……..but can't help getting a glance of ur smiling,naughty face….that spark in your eyes whenever u play a prank….that infectious smile of ur's……..that contagious madness of ur's……one second I feel I hate you the most..the next second I realize that this hate springs from the fact that I love you……..so much…….i know ashi love does not claim possession…….but gives freedom………whenever u r in front of me….he thought closing his eyes…….his hands running through his hair………….his lips shivering from the chill of the nite………..whenever u r in front of me…..i atleast want to spark a fight so that I can atleast hear u throwing back words at me..i have never said this to u though..i love fighting with you…..it makes me feel more close to u……..the very fact that u r near me…..makes me happy……… but y r u doing this to me?…I know I have lost the trust u had in me.i know u don't trust me nemore……..but……but …………I just can't bear seeing u with some other guy…….ashi…pls understand me……….how I wish I could find u back in my arms….kidding and teasing me….feeling me……..i feel I can lift the earth in my little finger when I am with you………..i waqn't to feel ur presence around me….ur spirit entwining mine…..i know you have found someone..but…but…….i hope against hope……pls…come back to me……life is so black and white without you……I want you to paint my life with ur mere presence ……………he thought.pondering over his mixed emotions that were surfing out.looking at the darkness covering the sky outside….camouflaging his feelings…….

…staring at the sky….not able to find any stars……the darkness outside seeping inside her heart….hey bhaggu!!!rods aisa kaise kar saktha hain?……..lekhin……main yuvi ko bhool kyon nahi paa rahi hoon?……y do all those days I spent with him keep coming back in my memories………that day during the football match…even though rods was playing……y did I think abt yuvi?……….y do I always want to spark a fight with him?y do I want to just irritate him for nothing?…..y do I still get angry if I get to know some girl is behind him?…y do I still react to his actions?……….eventhough I want to ignore it………inspite of the fact that he has hurt me…..y do I still feel I have feelings for him?..i know I have to forget him……ashi you r going out of focus..c'mon..now how will u deal with rods..did I overreact?…..well no I don't think so……..he may be my bf……..but he doesn't have any right to do wt he did…..it was quite a mean trick to kiss me………….hey bhaggu!!mere life ko hi itna complicated kyon banaya……isse acha toh mein burmuda triangle mein goom ho jaaon……par…..yuvi…..

………the dark forest of the inner spirit of both of them was murky in places..but buried in it's soil were the seeds of their true love………ashi had to realize that……
"IT WAS TRUE LOVE THAT WAS BINDING HER TO HIM…………
LIKE A DIAMOND………IT BREAKS THE HAMMER THAT STRIKES IT…."

I have no words to describe how good it is......but acc to me this was the best part in the entire fic until now......I loved it 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

I am really running out of words to describe........
rizkik you really write beautifully just expressed their feelings so well

wow !!!!

for once i thought i was reading my english drama book !!
truely riks this part is really good !!