WAITING FOR THE END....One Shot..... - Page 2

Originally posted by: vanu

ohhhhh it is very very very ......beautifully written....u really touched our souls...... 👏

awww vanuu thanx so much for the comment ma glad u liked dis one and i too feel dis is the best thing i hav ever written thaanx again😃😃

Originally posted by: tukz_REmix

brrrrrrrrrrrrriiiiiiiiiiiiiilllllllllllliiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaannnnnnnnnnnnnnnnttttttttttttt.....i dont really have ne gud wrd 4 u ...... 👏

😃😃😃thaanx thaanx thaanx tukz am soo glaad u liked it u made my day

Originally posted by: divya_92

Its f-a-n-t-a-s-t-i-c- 👏 u've left me speechless 😳

awesome oneshot 👏

Keep up da Gud Work 😃

Divzie 😳 😳

oh my goood am i dreaming or wat divzy the grt has read and even replied to my fic hey bhaggu i guess i need a pinch to confirm its not a sapna of mine😛thaanx sooo much divzyy to hav taken time of ur extra bujiee schedule and hav read dis one now i knw its really good coz u read and above all replied tooooo😲😲😲and btw why doesnt my YM shows u online ever now RF ki Mate Vrindeshwari😉thaanx for the comment divzyyyy🤗

Originally posted by: rakhi_uv

i dunno wat to say.....i really dnt knw.....feeling horrible imagining the situation......bt u hav written it soo soo soo well smriti!! i had also luved the one shot earlier u had written abt ashi-soniya n so much do i luv this too.....the way u hav described their relationship simply too gd ! esp this para touched me the most

But did she ever realized that this lady was much more than just her mom? She was an individual with her own identity but all Ashi had done was shrink her to just the label of being her mother and the poor soul bore it with pride and honor coz for her that was the best acknowledgement ever.

how true n aptly u've put it 👏 👏 👏 indeed soniya inspite of being such a huge star took most pride in being *ashis mom* 😳

awesum smriti 👏 👏 👏


p.s.now next one shot better not b a sad one ok 😳

aaaah i guess everybodys kind off bored wid my sad boring ragas.....harshus nt interested in reading shellz said why do u always write sad and nw u say dnt write nemore sad ones😔guess its an indication for me to retire...no more saddy ones fmr my pen frm nw on😔..and am sowie for hav written dis on mothers day..but had a reason and am glaad i wrote it.....

neways raakhs am soo sooo soo happyy that u liked dis one raakhs and above all u UNDERSTOOD dis one🤣🤣🤣{kidding😉}i knew u wld like it coz u had loved the other one i wrote for sonya ashi too😃love yaa loads for dis one raakhs🤗umade me smile ear to ear😃

omg....omg....omg....omg....omg....omg....omg....omg....omg. ...omg....

omg....omg....omg....omg....omg....omg....omg....omg....omg. ...omg....

omg....omg....omg....omg....omg....omg....omg....omg....omg. ...omg...... gosh SMRITI SINGHVI , I   ; LOVE YOU !!!!!! I always say that your fics are the best ever, I love each and every one shot and fic you rite, and haan, finally congrats you broke your record of TAMANNA👏, and this piece of cake which you have shaed with all of us, I salute you for this SIMI, honestly, wish you were here, I would have hugged you dolly🤗.....

now I start with my real reply for this ONE SHOT, which is the best ONE SHOT for me now👏, I know the particular state when you wrote this, and believe me, after reading it, I could imagine at which places would you have trickled down a tear man 😭 the two things that can make me emmotional are AASHI emmotional scenes and your fics and one shots, WAITING FOR THE END 😭 when I read the title I was taken a back, that what is this gurl upto man... I started redaing it, line by line, sentence by sentence and then landed upto the PARAGRAPHS, hey bhagggguuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu......believe it or not, I was into the sheet, with wide open mouth and tearing eyes😭 , goshhh..... I cannot express man, this one shot literally made my SOUL SHIVER with gooses all over the body, I am not exagerating, but just FOUR WORDS..... YOU MADE ME MAD....M.............A......................D.......MAD !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!👏😳

But before moving on today, Ashi has to do the mammoth task of laying her mother down. That mother who was chirpy and bubbling with jolly laughters' just a day back, was now just one or two hours away from taking her final plunge into the mysteries of mortality.

I read this para, and was gone with the wind at one squash, I concluded what the further story would be, but the way you expressed each and every line, and the power at each and every statement, I cannot tell you what was my state at it 😭😭😭 I was laughing and crying simultaneouly, and felt really really proud bout you👏👏👏

She was her mom, Anvesha Banergee Ray's mom, how would anyone dare say that she was going and would never come back to give her a huggy or to bear her tantrums

exactly, SHE is SONIA RAY, ANVESHA BANERJEE RAY's mum, strength, weakness, power, support, life everything, and she is AASHI, in short SONIA's WORLD or rather UNIVERSE, a lump was formed in my throat😭😭😭 and then I was not able to read ahead 😭😭😭

Her mom would never ever leave till shes assured that her daughter is fine and there is not a tear droplet sticking her beautiful eyes 😭

THIS WAS THE VERY SENTENCE THAT MADE ME BURST OUT MAN.....😭

And so she like a good daughter, indebted to her every inch of skin, stopped crying, coz she knew that if there was a way to hold her mother back from even the god of death was her tears. Her mom would never ever leave till shes assured that her daughter is fine and there is not a tear droplet sticking her beautiful eyes and hence she waited and gave her daughter her own sweet time to fight with her tears and till then she fought with her last breaths

AASHI's love for SONIA and SONIA's love for AASHI cannot be expressed by ne1 in the world, both are just what they are, the best MOMMY DOTTY in the world, who can enuf for themselves, AASHI state at this point of time was crystal clear in my mind, and SONIA's struggle to make her daughter smile even though she is gonna go so far from her😭😭

So now all ashi did was prepare her mother's farewell. She had herself decorated the case in which she would rest…she filled it with yellow lilies and scented it with her moms favorite aroma and made sure that its air was not too hot as her mom's skin would crack in heat. She dressed her mother in her favorite attire…a crystal white saree. which she had brought for her from her first pay cheque, her diamond necklace which so smelled like her and her priced ring which her father had given her on her sixteenth birthday, ashi wanted to keep the necklace with herself but she knew her mom would feel incomplete without it.

with this,You reminded me of someone who was well is very close to my heart, but not near to me ne more😭, someone who was my support at every point of time, loosing her was the most painful thing that happened to me ever in my life,😭 I can imagine the gorgeous charizmatic beautiful SONIA RAY I that very attire, the must have been looking no less than a GREEK GODDESS😭

They exchanged their final smiles and now there was nothing left to be done or said as they both knew that their belief in each other was immortal and they would always be there even after life itself. Ashi held her hands and rested her head on her mom's pillow, listening to her painful breaths and waiting for the time when the room would be silent siphoning the arrival of end.

The last para took me to a mile man....IT was so....I lack words for this one😭

I don't say I wish this scene was there in REMIX, never ever😭..... but I can very well imagine, how would PRIYA DI and SONIA KAPOOR would have perform it👏

OUTSTANDING WORK SIMI 👏

LOVE YOU A LOTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT.....🤗🤗🤗

Originally posted by: smritisashi

awww vanuu thanx so much for the comment ma glad u liked dis one and i too feel dis is the best thing i hav ever written thaanx again😃😃

😃😃😃thaanx thaanx thaanx tukz am soo glaad u liked it u made my day

oh my goood am i dreaming or wat divzy the grt has read and even replied to my fic hey bhaggu i guess i need a pinch to confirm its not a sapna of mine😛 *pinch* *pinch* *pinch* r u out of ur dreams now? 😆thaanx sooo much divzyy to hav taken time of ur extra bujiee schedule and hav read dis one now i knw its really good coz u read and above all replied tooooo🤣 and btw why doesnt my YM shows u online ever now yeeeeee it doesent 🤣 RF ki Mate Vrindeshwari😉 datzzzzzz it, im not givin u ny vidz [[-(] n for the one last time im not RF ki maate vrindeshwari [>:P]thaanx for the comment divzyyyy🤗 ur most welcome 🤗but u arent gettin ny vidz *devil smile*

well I forgot to write a P.S int eh above post, so here I go....

thanks a lot for dedicating this rocking or rather extra rocking ONE SHOT to me........I am reallllyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy gladdddddd........

and now...😆

dare you thanked me bout nething buddhi !!!!!!!😡