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Posted: 18 years ago
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heya smritidi,awesomeeeeee fic,plz cont fast.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hi dear we all r waiting for ur next part plzzzzz cont sooooon 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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SIMI darling........
kripaya aap next part post karney ka kst karengei .....
seriously SIMi...
kal its V-day..
and upar sey your fic will be icing on cake re...
pleeejjj post kar nah !!!!!! 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey loved ur fic plz cont soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#15
hey guys m soo soo sorry for d detail yaar
am realy tied up wid college so daats why couldnt post but since its vday and i wanna contribute smethng so am definately gonna post by tomoro so a bit more wait plzzz
and thaank you all soooooooo much for motivating me and appreciating my fic
i wanna write even better now
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: smritisashi

hey guys m soo soo sorry for d detail yaar
am realy tied up wid college so daats why couldnt post but since its vday and i wanna contribute smethng so am definately gonna post by tomoro so a bit more wait plzzz
and thaank you all soooooooo much for motivating me and appreciating my fic
i wanna write even better now


hey SIMI....
seriously...
dying for the next part re.... 😳 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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okk hee it is 😊😊



THREE

Ashi was sitting…compltly exhausted by d party…somebody came over to her and said, "ashi I want to introduce u and uv to someone"….he took her to where uv was standing and den brought some people with him…"ashi uv I want u to meet d gorgeous diva and a living legend…Sonya Ray….I am sure u guys must have seen dozens of her movies….and this is her family…..Mr Sumeet Ahuja…the business tycoon…and their princess Tia….isn't she as beautiful as her mommy….and of course this is Ranveer…Tia's Prince Charming"….ashi did not knw what to say she just stood dere frozen….uv said a formal hello but he was more concerned abt ashi….her pain and anger was reflected in his eyes…and he put a protective arm around her……dat person moved away and ashi uv were left alone wid dem….nobody spoke a word…there was an awkward silence in which everyone present tried to think of an excuse to get away.

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Finally tia said…"mumma chaliye tia is hungry and as it is we dnt hav much time to waste…." Sonia looked relieved at the excuse.

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sonya:..ya shona even I m very hungry, sumeet jaan lets go and hav dinner…and dey all walked away….leaving ashi alone wid all d pain and regret of d past ten years….a photographer came over and asked Sonya for a pic….she said she wanted a pic wid her family and specialy wid her daughter…..d photographer commented what a perfect family….u and ur daughter complement each other so well maam god has given u d perfect daughter…..who reflects ur beauty…….ashi cld hear no more…her eyes were full of tears of pain and anger….and uv cldnt bear d site of her….he took her inside and held her close……ashi sweety its ok….we dnt need neone in our life….as long as we r together deres no space for neone….tears trickled from her eyes….and he wiped dem gently and tried to erase all her pain from his love….

she said bitterly….d perfect daughter…haaa….d perfect family….and me…me….i guess I was too imperfect for her….my so called "mumma" is standing rt dere…



uv: sheesh sweety its ok u cant loose ur self like dis for people who dnt care for u…listen to me wacko u r very very very imp for all of us…dose smiles u see in dese faces na dey r all bcoz of u jaan……she walked away from him, kicking a stone in her path angrily….uv came to her but she said…uv plz plz leave me alone….

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uv was hurt…he wanted to hold her to be wid her to wipe off all her pain he wanted to caress her to kiss away all those tears which she wouldn't let herself show…he said…ashi dnt shun me out plzz ….she ran to him and hugged him hard….she took his hand and brought it to her lips and said uv I dnt knw what I m feeling my entire childhood is zooming in front of my eyes…Just give me some time alone. I need to gather my thoughts…plz psycho she said ……he understood her need of space and left after hugging her hard…daat one hug told her daat cme what may her uv wld always be dere wid her…all she needed to do was to reach out and call his name…..den she heard someone giggling. She turned to see her mom dancing happily wid Sumeet….oblivious to d rest of d world….Tia and Ranveer had stopped their own dance and where watching the older couple dance.

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Ashi's face scrunched up in fury, her fists balled-up.

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"Well…well…well look who's waltzing away as though they're fifteen," she said bitterly.

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How could she just dance away…enjoying herself…and not even acknowledge ashi's presence. Her mind in turmoil…blinded by rage, Ashi walked off from the scene before her….



HOPE U GUYS LIKE IT 😃

Edited by smritisashi - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey bahggggguuuuuuuu SIMIIIIII
I LOVE YOU !!!!!!!!!!!!!
I reallyy love you ............
must say yarrrrrrrrrrrrr
a perfect fan fic ....
this is a true example of perfect fan fic.....
fabulous...........
simply ossuuummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
I loved it from the depth of my heart.......
the way you've expressed ...
I can imagine the entire scene yarrr......
complete scene in front of my eyes.....
this is the very first emmotional fan fic....
that touched my heart..
I mean each and every word of my post dear.....
fabulous work.......
hattsss off to you.......
salutation for you........... 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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HEY ALL I SPECIALLY WAANT TO THANK HARSHU FOR BEING MY EDITOR IN CHEIF.....had she not given me d editted version which appears way better daan my write up full of spelling mistakes and no formating.....u all wldnt hav enjoyed reading my emtional saga 😛 😛 .....so harshu ji thaank you soo much and people i wld be a bit irreguler coz harshu has her boards..... and i realy cant do d superb formating she does for...... so plz plz wait and dnt forget dis fic till den 😛
Edited by smritisashi - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hi dear I think ur fic is just great everything is there everything means everything I cant xpain u my feelings in words but I like it very much 👏 Plzzzzz cont soooooooon I am very egar to know what next?

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