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ADITI

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Posted: 18 years ago

Frnds i was thinking that my first fic najane kab pyaar ho gaya{nkphg} has already crossed pg 100 soo why not i start posting the parts in the new topic...

it can be interpreted as an new fic if u want...

here the fic starts with the situation that finally Uv has realised his feelings for Aashi after a long time nd now he wants to confess Aashi abt his love...

if want to read from the start than here is the link of it...

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/remix/316986/najane-kab-pyaar-ho-gaya-pg-103-pt-71

Edited by aditisilawat - 18 years ago

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Posted: 18 years ago

okk starting from the part when Uv realised tht he loves Aashi more than himself...

Part-1
All{sid,vrinda,meher,varun,tia,ranveer,Aashi,Uv nd rest of their frnd} decides to go pub tonight...the same very day Uv's mother Suman calls him...
both shares some talk nd Uv decides something after talking to his mom...
Uv : mai yeh baat kaise bhul sakta hun
Just than Ranveer enters his room
Uv<happily nd more exited> : acha hua Ranveer tum aa gaye mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai
Ranveer : bana baat kya hai...aap itne excited kyu dikh rahe hai?aur waise humme bhi aap se kuch poochna hai...pehle ap humme bataaiye phir hum apko bataayenge
Uv : nahi dude pehle tum poocho tumhe kya poochna hai phir main tumhe bataaunga...
Ranveer : wohh bana actually humme aap se kuch poochna nahin hai, humme aap se shikayat hai...
Uv : complain from me...for what? maine kya kiya?
Ranveer : bana humm aapke dost hai na...phir apne humse yeh baat kyu chupayi ki ap aur Aashi ek doosre koh pasand karte hai
Uv<shyly nd li'll blushing>: wohh actually Ranveer mujhe khud abhi-abhi realise hua hai ki mai Aashi koh like karta hun...
Ranveer : jhoot mat boliye bana humme pata hai yeh baat aap Aashi se pehle keh chuke hai aur aap dono yeh baat disclose karna nahin chahte...
Uv : no dude i swear maine iss baat koh Aashi ke saamne confess bhi nahin kiya hai aur<tenced,affraid> na hi mujhe pata hai wohh mere baare mein kya sochti hai...
aur tumhe kaise laga main aur Aashi ek doosre koh like karte hai...jabki mujhe khud abhi mom koh apni feelings share karne ke baad pata chala ki i love that wacko madly...
Ranveer : bana iska matlab hai aapne abhi tak apni feeling Aashi koh nahi bataayi...aur humme laga ap aur Aashi pehle se hi ek doosre koh date kar rahe hai
Uv : ya dude...but now i am really tenced...i dont know wohh wacko mere baare mein kya sochti hai
Ranveer : bana aap ghabraiye mat...hummne unki aankhon mein bhi apke liye pyaar dekha hai...
Uv : dude tumne bhi toh Tia se apni feelings confess ki thhi...tabb tumhe bhi aisa darr lag raha thha?
Ranveer : thoda sa darr toh laga thha parr phir humne Tia koh apni feelings ke baare mein bata diya...aur tabhi humme pata chala ki Tia bhi humse pyaar karti hai...hum bhi ap hi tarah apni feelings koh pehchaan nahi paaye phir ek din humme yakin ho gaya ki Tia hi hummari zindagi hai
Uv : maine pehle jaanne ki koshish ki thhi ki main kyu Aashi ki taraf itna attract hota hun but maine unn feelings koh infactuation ka naam de diya thha but aaj mujhe pata chal raha hai how madly i am in love with Aashi...
he shares with Ranveer each and every moment he shared with Aashi what he felt about her...and all...
Ranveer : agar bana apko kuch samajh nahin aa raha thha toh apne yeh kissi aur ke saath share ki hoti?
Sid<who was standing at the door nd listening to there convo>: right Ranveer...<to Uv>maine tumse kitni baar yeh baat poochne ki koshish ki par tumne mujhe kabhi kuch nahi bataaya...
Uv : ummm woh dude mujhe bhi...<he pause>
Sid<in angry tonne> : mujhe pata hai ki tumhe bhi yeh abhi pata chala hai, parr tum mujhse yeh share toh kar sakte thhe na?
Ranveer : bana ap dono iss baat par baad mein jhagar lena pehle Uv bana aap apni feelings Aashi koh bata toh dijiye...
Uv : oh ha...i had a gr8 plan...actually i want ur both help in that...
Sid,Ranveer both were confussed...
Ranveer : hum dono apki iss mein kya help kar sakte hai yeh baat toh apko hi Aashi koh bataana padega
Uv : i know dude...nd i had decided the time nd date when i am going to tell it to Aashi...
he tells his plan to Ranveer nd Sid...
Sid : gr8 plan dude!!!
Ranveer : bana aap aage ki planning kijiye humm baki sab koh bata ke aate hai...
Uv : no bro abhi nahin...
Ranveer : arre humm yeh baat batane nahi jaa rahe hai humm toh sabkoh yeh inform karne ja rahe hai ki...
Sid : ki..we wont go pub today...we'll go tomorrow...

Edited by aditisilawat - 18 years ago

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ADITI

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Posted: 18 years ago

Part-2
Sid nd Ranveer goes nd informs all their frnds abt the change in programme...
Aashi wants to know the reason why its being done...so she goes to ask to Uv...she knocks at his door...
Uv goes nd opens the door...this time when he sees Aashi a different feeling was rolling inside his whole body...
Aashi : duhh huh Uv yahi khare rahoge ki andar bhi aane dogge...?
Uv : ummm ha Aashi aao na
Aashi : wohh psycho tumhe pata hai kya humara pub jaane ka programm aaj ki wajah kal kyu hua...
Uv was now really scared fearing what to say to Aashi...he first think to confess his feelings infront of Aashi but than he thinks that he should say tomorrow on the special day itself...
Aashi : kya hua Uv...bataao na tumhe pata hai kya?
Uv : ummm..Aashi wohh...main...
Aashi : itna hesitate kyu kar rahe ho? dhang se bataao na
no idea was coming in Uv's mind...this was the first time ever happened...
just than behind Ranveer comes...
Uv shows a sigh of relief nd than prompts to Ranveer by doing action to save him...
Ranveer understands the situation ...
Ranveer : arre Aashi aap yahaan hai humm aap koh kab se dhoond rahe thhe...
Aashi : kyu???
Ranveer :ummm wohhh humme apki todi si help chahiye...
Aashi : meri help ,kisliye?
Ranveer :aap chaliye toh sahi humm aap koh sabb bataate hai
Ranveer some how manage to take Aashi out of the room...
Uv {noding his head}: thanks
Ranveer : ne time bana...par aap jaldi se aage ki planing kariye...humm Aashi koh koi kaam mein uljhaye rakhte hai
Uv sits down to think how he's gonna propose Aashi...
he didnt gets ne thing...so he gives a call to his mom again...
Uv: mom mujhe bilkul samajh nahi aa raha hai main Aashi koh kaise kahoon???
Suman : beta tum toh aise tension le rahe ho jaise ki tumhe koi exam dene jaana hai...waise ha yeh tumhare pyaar ki exam hi toh hai...
Uv : mom plz stop teasing me...accha maine ek plan banaaya hai...
he starts telling his plan...
Suman : beta party tak toh thikk hai par aise koi kissi toh dil ki baat bataata hai kya?sunno tum pehle Aashi ke liye beautiful sa gift kharido...
Uv : yes mom i think u r right maine sooch liya hai main Aashi koh kya doonga... parr wohh kharidne ke liye toh mujhe Maurya ke bahaar jaana parega...
Suman : usme kya hai beta...tumhara toh weekend chal raha hai na...
Uv : ohh ha mom
Suman : beta...but tum dhaan rakhna iss baare mein Aashi koh kuch pata nahin chale nahin toh tumhara surprise pura kharab ho jaayega...
Uv : ok mom...
he cuts the phone nd starts to go towards his car to go nd buy a gift for Aashi...
There Aashi searched for Uv nd gets to know that he's gone out...
she gives a ring on Uv's cell to know where he's gone nd does the same several time but...
Aashi : pata nahin psycho koh kya hogaya hai...wohh mera phone bhi nahin uttha raha?
a day passed nd the very day comes for which Uv was impatiently waiting for...but still night didn't came till yet...
Uv : yeh raat kab hogi???

Edited by aditisilawat - 18 years ago

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ADITI

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Posted: 18 years ago

i hope u all would like it nd yesh if its boring nd not good so plz dont hesitste nd tell me freely i wont mind at all...i'll try to improve myself.
the one who r reading my fic from the begining would be thinking why i reposted this two parts...i did so to make it as my new concept of the story.

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Posted: 18 years ago

Part-3
The time finally comes...
In maurya all were set to go to the pub.
Aashi : Thakur meri icha nahin ho rahi tum sab jaao
actually she says this becoz she didnt wanted to go there without Uv... both Ranveer nd Sid saw each other with an wicked smile on their face
Ranveer : thik hai Aashi ap ki jaisi marzi...
Sid<purpously> : dude, Uv koh maine bass abhi call kiya thha...wohh shayad already wahaan pohonch gaya hoga,tum sab se bol do jaldi kare wohh wahaan hum sab ka wait kar raha hoga...
Aashi : wohh psycho wahi pohonch raha hai???
Ranveer : ha Aashi...par ap phikar mat kijiye humm unhe bata denge apki icha nahin thi isliye ap nahi aayi...
Aashi<quickly>: yeh kehne ki koi zaroorat nahin hai am coming with u all
Sid<with an naughty expression> : but Aashi abhi-abhi toh tum? Aashi : ha tabb mujhe yeh nahin pata thha ki Uv tumhare call ka reply kar raha hai... main uss psycho koh kal se try kar rahin hun par wohh mera phone utta hi nahin raha hai...now when i knew tht he's not taking only my call than i want an answer from him for which i had to with u all...
Ranveer : ok Aashi ap jaldi se tayaar ho jaaiye humm aur Sid bana baki sab koh dekh kar aate hai...
Aashi goes to change
Ranveer : abb toh humme yakeen ho gaya hai ki Aashi bhi Uv bana koh chahti hai
Sid : hmmm but it has to be confessed infornt Of Uv...
Ranveer : arre ha Uv bana se toh humm unke aage ke plaan ke baare mein poochna hi bhul gaye...Sid bana ap sabb koh pub jaane ke liye gather hone ke liye boliye tab tak hum Uv bana se baat kar lete hai...
Sid : ok...but Uv dude se baat karne ke baad mujhe bataana usne aage kya plan karke rakha hai...
Ranveer calls Uv...
Uv : acha hua Ranveer tumne mujhe call kiya main abhi tumhe hi call karne wala thha...
Ranveer : bana wahaan sab tyaariya kaisi hai
Uv : ummm yahaan maine pub ke manager se kal hi baat karke sabb tyaariya kar li thhi...i just hope all goes well as we had planned
Uv tells Ranveer abt his further plannings nd the suprise...
Ranveer : ha bana sabb thikk hi hoga...aur Aashi koh unke liye surprise party
achi lagegi...
Uv : acha abhi wacko kya kar rahi hai?
Ranveer : wohh pub mein jaane ke liye tyaar hone gayi hai...pehle wohh aane ke
liye mana kar rahin thi
Uv<shocked>: kya???
Ranveer : ghabraiye mat bana wohh aane ke liye maan gayi hai...waise abhi humne aur Sid
bana ne unse...
Ranveer tells the whole thing...
Uv : iska matlab wacko aaj bhi mujhse pub mein sirf jhagarne aa rahi hai...
Ranveer : aisa nahin hai bana wohh toh sirf unne ek excuse diya thha pub mein aane ke liye...wohh aap se milna jo chahti hai aur pehle wohh shayad isliye mana kar rahi hongi kyuki unhe laga hoga aap pub nahin jaa rahe...bana humme yakin ho gaya hai wohh bhi aapse utna hi pyaar karti hai jitna aap unse karte hai... Uv : karti hai toh phir usne abhi tak mujhe kyu nahin bataaya?
Ranveer :shayad isliye bana kyunki apne abhi tak unhe apne dil ka haal nahin bataaya...
Uv : acha abb mere leg pull karna band karo aur jaldi se Aashi ke saath yahaan aa jaao
Ranveer : aa jayenge bana ap Aashi se milne ke liye intne impatient kyu ho rahe hai?
Uv : Ranveer?????!!!!!?????
Ranveer : acha bana humm abhi apki Aashi ke saath wahaan pohonch rahe hai...
He cuts the phone...nd goes to Sid...

Edited by aditisilawat - 18 years ago

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Posted: 18 years ago

nice part aditi continue soon. waiting for the moment yuvi confess his feelings to ashi 😳 . i liked the way ranveer and sid were teasing ashi 👏

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Posted: 18 years ago

its reeli gud plz continue soooon

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Posted: 18 years ago

Rocking Adi!! Lekin tumne naam kyun change kardiya fic ka. Chal who cares. Continue toh kiya. Naam se kya hota hai? Right? 😉 Anyway, ab eik achhi bachhi ban ke jaldiiii se continue karo. UNDERSTAND???!!! 😡 😡

.... You better understand! 😆 Jaldi continue!!!

luv,
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