Ha mujhe pyaar hai...last part ,pg16

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Divya

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Posted: 18 years ago

#31

Hey Adi,

Im really S***y,*holding ears* .. i didnt hv a track on most of the fics on RF.. since i returned frm my trip..n then i had my eggjams,

anyways i read all the parts frm pg 80 of ur previous topic

they were fantablous 👏

continue soon

Divsie 😳 😳

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ADITI

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Posted: 18 years ago

#32

Divsie dear its ok no need to say sorry for that...
come on set ur ears free now

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aashni

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Posted: 18 years ago

#33

arey adu plzz jaldi se next aprt likh desperate 2 know abt ittttt

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shilpa

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Posted: 18 years ago

#34

adi continue soon yaar we are still waiting 😡

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ADITI

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Posted: 18 years ago

#35

Ohh am soo s**ry for making u all guys wait for long bas abhi next part likne baith jaati hun aaj ya kal mein post bhi kar dungi...plz bachi samajh kar maaf kar doh

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sayantika

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Posted: 18 years ago

#36

hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm 😡 okay,kal tak time mila tujhe ja...bacche samajh ke baksh diya 😉 😉 😉 par mind it,till tom 😡 or else 😡

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ADITI

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Posted: 18 years ago

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Originally posted by: sayanti_ashiuv
hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm 😡 okay,kal tak time mila tujhe ja...bacche samajh ke baksh diya 😉 😉 😉 par mind it,till tom 😡 or else 😡

till tomorrow i dont want u to wait am posting the next part now

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ADITI

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Posted: 18 years ago

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Part-5
Uv <thinking>:Wacko aaj kuch jyaada hi bhaav kha rahi hai...par joh bhi ho aaj
aur bas abhi main usse apni feelings ke baare mein bataa dunga parr usse main
pub ke baahar kaise bulaau
just than he looks to some gals nd than goes to them
Aashi was pretending as if she's really avoiding Uv but her eyes were set on
Uv only thinking when is he gonna come up to her
Uv purpously goes near the gals standing just close to Aashi
Aashi seeing Uv coming to tht direction only felt tht Uv is coming to her to say
sorry,so she looked in the other direction
Uv too pretends tht he's not at all interested in talking to Aashi nd goes directly
near to the gals nd starts flirting with them just to show tht to Aashi
Aashi dint liked tht at all so with a sad nd popat expression with her lips
closed tighty showing her anger....she starts going out of the pub
Uv with a wicked smile was happy for his work being done
Uv <himself>: abb wacko yeh pub se pehle baahar jaaye i think mujhe pehle baahar chale
jaana chahiye
He quickly rushes out the pub from the other gate so tht Aashi doesn't sees him
Aashi with the same expression on her face nd the extreme sadness inside
her after seeing Uv flirting with tose girls...she steps out of the pub
Aashi : woh psycho khud koh samajh ta kya hai...mai usse iske liye kabhi maaf
nahi karungi
she goes in the parking area so tht she could shed those tears which came
into her eyes after seeing Uv with other girl
she came into the area ...with her hands folded...
as soon as she comes there...she sees Uv sitting on his car there
Uv : kya hua wacko???
seeing Uv a tear rolled down her eye but she quickly turned her face nd wiped them
off soo that Uv doesn't sees them
she started going back in the opposite direction but suddenly feels a stop
she turned back to see...
Uv was standing infront of her holding her hand...
Aashi<rudely>: phsycho mera haath chodo, i dont want to talk to u
Uv<leaving her hand>:chor diya...but first say u forgived me
Aashi : forgive u for what?
Uv : come on Aashi abb toh pretend karna chodo...am sorry for what i did rt now
Aashi was about to say when,Uv continued
Uv : Aashi aisa maine tumhe baahar bulaane ke liye kiya tha
Aashi was confussed to hear tht answer from Uv...Uv continued
Uv : Aashi mujhe tumhe kuch kehna hai shaayad yeh mujhe bohot pehle tumhe bataa dena chahiye thha par
mujhe khud yeh abhi-abhi realize hua hai...tht-tht
before Uv could say Aashi's cell rings
the ring distracts the moment...
Aashi as such dint wanted to take the phone but after seeing the name she picks it up...
Aashi : hello!!!
Sahil : Hey Aashi dear many many many happy returns of the day
Aashi : thanks Sahil...
Uv after knowing tht it's Sahil...feels like getting inside the phone nd beating up Sahil but how
ever he controls his anger...
Aashi<to Sahil> : ha Uv bhi mere saath hi hai...
Aashi<to Uv,handovering her cell>: lo Sahil koh tum se baat karni hai
Uv with an artificial smile on his face takes the phone...
Sahil : hey dude whats up...?did u wished Aashi?
Uv : bas karne hi ja raha thha ki tumhara phone aa gaya
Sahil : oh am sorry for tht...aur tumne Aashi koh bataaya ki nahi tum usse pyaar karte ho
Uv was shocked to hear tht
Uv<confussed>: tumhe kaise ???
Sahil : am an detective...ok ok,tht surely means tht u really luv Aashi...maine toh aise hi tumse
pooch liya thha...acha i wont waste ne more time of urs tum jaldi se Aashi koh apne dil ka haal
bataa doh...
Uv<with a big smile,nd blushing a li'll> : ya dude
Sahil cuts the phone
Uv now goes near to Aashi with the seriousness on his face to bring tht moment again when he abt to
confess his feelings
Uv : wacko main tumse kehna chahta thha ki...main tumse...
now he looks into Aashi's eyes which were looking at him.....
Uv : Aashi " I LOVE U "

Edited by aditisilawat - 18 years ago

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ADITI

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Posted: 18 years ago

#39

Part-5 Posted...
hope u all like it

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Divya

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Posted: 18 years ago

#40

oh gawd!!!!!how sweet 👏

it really feels gud when sum1 proposes you on ur b'day 😳 😳 or probably confesses his/her feelings 😳 😳

continue soon

waitin to knw wht Ashi says 😳 😳 😉

Divz

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