Untouched (a fanfic) Last Part -- Pg 55 - Page 9

AWESOME PART I LOVE IT 👏 PRI KA 2 BURGERS 😛 ,SID KA 😕 😕 😕 CONFUSED 'XPRESSION,YUVI'S-ASHI'S FIGHT , VARUN KA RANVEER KO TEASE KARNA 😆 😆 ,AUR RANVEER AUR TIA KI FEELINGS 😳 JUST TOO GOOD

My name is not that common and I only know one other person that's name is Salina. Well I don't think it counts coz I was named after her 😆

hey honey its like watching remix all over again 👏 gr8 going u seem 2 know all the characters very well 😃 and u write very well 😊 😊

pls do continue i just finished reading all the 8 parts today 😳 and i must tell u i have even read yr earlier fan fic 😊 😊
but dint comment 😭 sry abt dat 😭

im really srry for replyins so late

but i must say dat dis part was awesum. 👏

loved it

puhleese...(i hope i got that rig.ht) honey.... do write more dilogues between sid yuvi and tia....sid trying to gain tias attention..itssssss ofunny i am enjoying it a lot

i hope you dont mind my request.... and do cosider it

awesome part honey 👏 s**ry for replying soo late...

akansha welcome to rf...by the way naam mein kya rakha...hai mera naam aditi hai,aur wohh bhi kon saa jo sabbb se common naam hai...u see meri class mein 3-3 aditi hai aur toh aur mere nick nameke naam ki bhi ek ladki hai,so u can imagine how confused i am when ever teacher calls ne1 of us

Originally posted by: angelgirl16

lolll!!!!!!!! hehe!!all the best to u 😃

did u wished me...?

plzz cont soon reshmi(I finallgot ur name)

Salina

PART 6

Ranveer was strolling in the garden since it was a free lecture . He was lost thinking about the girl he met yesterday , thinking about her smile , her style of talking in third person , her innocent and sweet remarks . He found everything about her quite different ---quite appealing . He was wondering how could he think about someone so deeply whom he had just met yesterday ??? How could a girl influence him to think only about her when he hardly knew her ??? 😳

He was trying to find answers to these questions when he saw her in front of him sitting on the garden bench with a bugged expresiion on her face 😕. At first he thought he was dreaming and turned to leave , but his legs stopped moving when she called him in her extra – sweet voice --------" RANVEER" 😳. He realized she was actually there , his heart started beating fast while turning to face her . And when she smiled on seeing him , he thought to himself -------- " Kash ye poori duniya tham jaye aur hum sirf Tia ko smile karte hue dekhte rahe " 😳

Tia --- Ranveer tumne Tia ko dekha tha na ……..phir Tia se mile bagair kyun jaa rahe the ??? 😕

Ranveer --- ( now how could he say that he thought he was dreaming about her so he came up with an excuse ) Wo …wo..Tia aap pareshan lag rahi thi na …isliye humne socha ki aapko disturb na kare 😉

Tia --- How sweet … 😛

Ranveer --- (a bit hesitating ) Tia …agar aap bura na mane toh kya hum aapki pareshani ki wajah jaan sakte hain ??? 😉

Tia --- Ab toh class aur room mein Tia ki pareshani ki wajah ek hi hain..wo..wo..red punk ..Aashi . Usne Tia ki life miserable bana di hain 🤢

Ranveer --- Aashi !!! Kyon Aashi ne kya kiya??? 😕

Tia --- Ranveer …aaj Tia ka class mein fist day tha .Tia kitne interest se lecture attend kar rahi thi . Tia ne ek friend bhi bana liya tha --- Meher . Aur phir ..phir …uss Aashi ne aakar Tia ka pura day spoil kar diya 😡

Ranveer --- hume bataye unhone kya kiya ??? 😕

Tia --- Wo Ranveer Tia aur Meher baat kar rahe the ----------


NOW THE FLASHBACK



Meher --- Babes I am so happy ki hum friends ban gaye , hum dono ki pasand kitni ek jaisi hain (then looking at Aashi) warna pura saal mujhe akele aise flunkees ke saath deal karna padta. 😆


Tia --- Ya…she is so tacky -------- her hair , her dressing style , uska walking style everything is so LS 😉

Meher --- Mujhe toh yakeen nahi hota ki wo Sonia Ray ki beti hain 😕

Tia --- You mean ..filmstar Sonia Ray ki ( Meher nods) Oh Tia's God poor Sonia Ray , wo iss punk se kaise deal karti hogi ??? I mean Sonia Ray is a rose --- so beautiful aur jab bhi wo kuch pehenti hain wo style statement ban jaata hain. 😕

Meher --- (interrupting in between) Tia …log sahi kehte hain gulab ke saath kaante bhi aate hain …. 😉



Both Tia and Meher burst out laughing ………… 😆😆


Then Mrs Khanna their English Literature teacher enters the class . Her Grammar is horrible , God only knows how she got those degrees with such terrible Grammar 🤢😕


Mrs Khanna --- Good Morning children 😃

Aashi --- ( in her mind ------" children , hey bhaggu ye ab bhi hume bacchhe samajthi hain " then getting up) Maam we are adults ….not children…so please treat us like an adult 😉

Mrs Khanna --- No matter how many you grow you will always be children for me ( Aashi gave a false smile at this ) Okay let's leave all that , today was your first day so today I don't teach you anything . I knew someone of you , but I saw lot of new faces so new faces please give me your introduction . Ohhh..before that first I'am giving my the introduction ---- I was Mrs Trupti Khanna …as you everbody knows ur Literature teacher . And I have 2 beautiful sons -both are boys (then pointing to Yuvi and Sid ) like both you . 😆😆

Yuvi --- (in his mind - Gosh …ye kya bol rahi hain . agar 2 sons hain to wo boys hi honge na ----- then showing a false smile ) Thank you Mam , you are so kind …Kyun Sid (he said hitting Sid lightly) 😆

Sid --- (who was lost thinking about something else came to his senses totally blank ) Ya…Ya….Right ….(then whispering to Yuvi) Waise tumne mujhse kis barein mein poocha ???😕 😆

Yuvi --- Rehne do Sid , tum abhi apne senses mein nahi ho …. 😕

Sid--- NO Bro ….apne senses mein toh mein abhi aaya hoon . You know Yuvi mera life ki sabse badi confusion clear ho gayi hain -maine decide kar liya hain ki mujhe future mein kya banna hain ----ab mein teacher hi banoonga . Waise bhi most of the chicks ko apne teacher pe crush hota hain . 😆😉

Yuvi --- (trying to control his laughter) Dude …Right decision…..agar ye English Literature ki teacher ban sakti hain …toh tum bhi zaroor ban sakte ho 😆😆

Tia --- Meher yeh English Teacher hi hain na …???? ya koi student prank karne ke liye teacher ke disguise mein aayi hain 😕

Meher --- No Tia …yeh teacher hi hain ….Oh God she is a torture . Aaj kuch sikha nahi rahi phir bhi itna bore ho raha hain …toh padhana start karegi toh kya hoga . 😕🤢

Tia --- Oh Tia's God ..ab English mein pass hone ke liye Tia ko extra classes lagani hogi 😕

Aashi who was totally bored decides to do something. She had noticed Tia applying lipstick before Mam entered the class . And when Mam entered , her lipstick slipped from her hand all of a sudden which she didn't notice out of the tension . Aashi got the lipstick . After the introduction section Mrs Khanna who was sitting on a chair felt asleep. Now every student felt free , they were all chatting with each other criticing Mrs Khanna . Even Tia was busy chatting with Meher . And Aashi came into action . Tia saw Aashi standing near Mrs Khanna but she didn't suspect anything and continued with her gossip . Aashi after accomplishing her task put the lipstick back in Tia's bag and Tia didn't notice that either .


Later when Mrs Khanna got up and turned , the whole class burst into laughter . At first Mrs Khanna couldn't comprehend anything then she realized that something is stuck on on her back . She removed the paper on her back somehow and to her shock she found this written on the paper ---- " I AM A DONKEY . I DON'T DESERVE TO BE A TEACHER " 😆😆. Mrs. Khanna got furious . 😡


Mrs Khanna --- Who done this ??? Tell me 😡


The class was quite now . Mrs Khanna noticed that it was written with a lipstick and not with pen . 😕

Mrs Khanna --- Who get lipstick in the class ??? 😡

A girl in the class pointed to Tia . Tia was totally blank and shocked . . Then she remembered Aashi standing beside the teacher .


Tia --- Maam Tia didn't do anything . It's Aashi ---I saw her standing beside you . 😭

Aashi --- (getting up ) Maam I don't apply lipstick , everyone in the class knows that . Why don't you check her bag ??? 😉


Mrs Khanna found the lipstick in Tia's bag . She didn't pay attention to what Tia said and asked her to leave the class . Tia left the class in tears. 😭😭


END OF FLASHBACK


Ranveer --- (starts laughing ) Ye Aashi bhi na …. 😆

Tia--- Aaj Tia ke saath itni badi tragedy hui . Uss punk ke wajah se Tia ko first day pe hi class se nikala gaya aur tum has rahe ho Ranveer 😕😡

Ranveer --- (realizing he should not have laughed) Sorry ..Tia…Hum to bas yuhi 😕

Tia --- Rehne do Ranveer …tum bhi baaki sab ki tarah ho …tum bhi Tia ka mazak uda rahe ho 😭

Ranveer --- (now feeling guilty) Tia aisi koi baat nahi ….Aashi aisa sabke saath karti hain . Mere saath bhi kiya tha . Par wo dil se bohot acchhi hain , agar aap unse dosti kar le toh wo apne doston ke liye kuch bhi kar sakti hain. Unse acchha dost aapko is duniya mein kahi nahi milega … 😛

Tia --- Aise friends tumhe hi mubaraq ho . Tia jitna uss punk se door rahegi utna Tia ke health ke liye acchha hain. Tia usse ek second ke liye bhi bear hi nahi karr sakti 😕

Ranveer --- Thik hain Tia …Ab aap iske barein mein sochkar khud ko hurt mat kijiye . Waise kal aap Freshers Ball mein aa rahi hain na ??? 😛

Tia --- Sure …why not ??? 😛

Ranveer --- (a bit hesitating ) Tia kal kya aap hamare saath party mein chalengi 😃

Tia --- Wo..wo…. Ranveer ..sorry …kash tumne pehle poocha hota …lekin ab Tia Sid ko commit kar chuki hain 😭

Ranveer --- ( in his mind --- Yeh Sid bhi kissi ladki ko nahi chhodte , kam se kam Tia ko toh chhod diya hota and then looking at Tia ) Koi baat nahi Tia . 😭

Tia --- (smiling ) Agar tumhare paas koi date nahi toh tum Pri ke saath jaa sakte ho 😊

Ranveer --- (sadly but not letting Tia notice that ) Thanks Tia … 😊😭

After Tia left Ranveer felt so sad --- actually miserable . He thought " Agar Sid ne Tia ke saath kuch aisa –waisa kiya toh . Tia kitni nazuk hain wo yeh sab kaise handle kar payegi , humein unhe Sid se protect karna hoga "

What Ranveer didn't know that it was not Sid from whom Tia needs protection ------ it was Ranveer from whom she needs to stay away to remain UNTOUCHED BY LOVE.