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wow awesome pt.. esp romantic scenes between tia and ranvir

varun teasing ranvir.. its like watching remix.. wonderful.. keep up the good work

hey very nice part i wish i could rite like u but anyways cool part 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

PART 23




Next day it was Sunday . Tia was spending time with her family and Ranveer was at Maurya . Both were terribly missing each other . They wanted to spend time with each other , to get to know each other , to feel each other and most of all to love each other . Ranveer called Tia but couldn't speak for long since Sonia never left Tia's side . Like Ranveer even Sonia wanted to spend time with Tia, to know her and to give her all the love that she has been craving for since her mother left her . Sonia made Tia feel so comfortable that she told her about the affection that she has started feeling for Ranveer . Sonia understood her point and also gave her some advice regarding relationships 😊 .




On Monday also both Ranveer and Tia couldn't meet each other because of lectures , extras – lectures , extra – curricular activities and aso on . When Tia was free Ranveer wasn't and vice – versa . But they wanted to meet each other so desperately that they decided to take risk and meet during night time in the garden 😉 .




After dinner when everyone was about to sleep , Ranveer was getting ready ---




Varun --- Ranveer itni raat ko kaha ja rahe ho ???

Ranveer --- Wo bana ....hum to bas ....yuhi..walk par jaa rahe the ...... 😉

Yuvi --- (suspiciously) Itna ready hoke 😉

Ranveer --- Haan ......kyun ready hoke jaana mana hain kya ??? 😕

Yuvi --- Ranveer bana mein soch raha tha ki mein bhi tumhare saath chalta hoon .......walk par chalne se acchii neend aati hain …… 😉 😆

Ranveer --- (almost screamed ) Nahi ...... aap hamare saath nahi chal sakte 🤢

Yuvi --- Kyun Ranveer bana ......??? 😉

Ranveer --- Wo ........wo ... 😕

Yuvi --- Ranveer bana itna stammer kyun kar rahe ho ..........seedha –seedha keh kyun nahi dete ki tum Tia se milne jaa rahe ho 😉



Ranveer blushes at Yuvi's comment 😳



Varun --- Look who's blushing 😉

Yuvi --- Bro ......kahi hum sapna toh nahi dekh rahe .........Ranveer and blushing ..........yeh kaise ho gaya ...........??? 😉

Ranveer --- Ab aap dono bas bhi kijiye 😡

Yuvi --- Ab tum chori – chupe Tia se milne jaoge toh hum tumhe chhodenge thudi na ..........kyun Sid??? 😉



Sid was sitting quietly at one corner with Devdas kinda expression 😕




Yuvi --- Sid ....bro......kya hua ..?? Tum kucch bol kyun nahi rahe ho ??? 😕

Sid --- Ek toh Ranveer ne uss ladki ko pataya jispe meri eyes thi aur tum sab usko support karr rahe ho . Meri kissi ko phikar bhi nahi ….. 😭 😆

Yuvi --- Sid .....come on ......Maurya mein girls ki koi shortage nahi hain . Tia nahi toh koi aur sahi . Waise Meher ke barein mein tumhara kya khayal hain ??? 😉

Sid --- (with sparkling eyes full of excitement ) Meher ....she is hot man .... 😳 (then sadly ) but Tia jitni nahi 😭 . Tia iss college ki sabse hot girl hain 😭

Ranveer --- (in a jealous tone) Sid .....ab band bhi kijiye .Hum nahi chahte ki aap tia ke barein mein kuch aisa –waisa soche ... ..after all wo hamari girlfriend hain ....... 😡

Yuvi and Varun ---- Acchha .......toh finally tum maan hi gaye ....... 😉

Ranveer --- Haan hum agree karte hain .....fine .....aur yeh sirf Sid pe hi lagoo nahi hota, yeh aap dono pe bhi lagoo hota hain …hum nahi chahte ki Tia ke barein mein koi bhi kuch galat soche .... 😆

Yuvi --- Ranveer bro ..yeh tumhe kya hua .....you are turning very possessive .....guys ab toh Tia se baat karne se pehle humein check karna hoga ki aas – paas ke environment mein kahi Ranveer toh nahi hain .... 😉 😆

Sid --- ( now realizing that he would get into trouble if he spoke more about Tia , after all Ranveer is a boxing champion ) Ranveer ..bro ..ab mein Tia ki taraf aankh uthakar nahi dekhoonga . Mere life ki safety ke liye Meher hi theek hain 😕 .

Ranveer --- Yehi aapke liye acchha hoga . Ab hum jaa rahe hain (then halting and turning around) aur haan .....Humein yeh kehne mein koi hesitation nahi hain ki hum Tia se milne jaa rahe hain aur hum unse bohot bohot pyaar karte hain , apne jaan se bhi zyada … 😳 .

Yuvi --- Varun ..........ab Ranveer bhi gutsy banta jaa raha hain .. 😉




On the other hand Tia tried to sneak out from her room unnoticed but she was caught by none other than Aashi




Aashi --- Timbo behna .....Thakur se milne jaa rahi ho na ...??? 😉

Tia --- Haan ....kyun .....kya Tia ko apne boyfriend se milne ke liye tumhari permission leni hogi ???

Aashi --- My dear Timbo kuch days pehle tum Thakur ka face bhi nahi dekhna chahti thi ....aur ab usse milne ke liye itni adventurous ho gayi ho ki tumhe principal , guards kissi ka bhi darr nahi raha ... 😉

Tia --- Look Aashi Tia ko tumhe explanation dene ki koi zaroorat nahi hain …understood ....so Tia jaa rahi hain .....bye........ 😡

Aashi --- (with concern in her voice) Timbo .....be careful........agar Mr Dixit ne pakad liya toh Thakur ko kuch nahi hoga kyunki wo unka favourite student hain lekin tum zaroor expel ho jaogi .... 😊

Tia --- ( glad that Aashi is concerned for her 😊 ) Thanks ....Tia ke liye care karne ke liye 😊

Aashi --- Hey Timbo come out of your dreams .....mujhe tumhari koi phikar nahi hain ...mujhe toh Thakur ki phikar hain ....Bechaara Thakur .....agar tum expel ho gayi toh uska kya hoga ..... 😉

Tia --- ( knowing that Aashi is lying , she is only concerned about her ) But still .... 😊 thanks for your concern Aashi ..... 😊



Saying this she left happy that she got as sister like Aashi . Inspite of the differences she knew that they both loved and cared for each other a lot . A strong bond was slowly developing between them 😊 .

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Originally posted by: honey_13

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guys plz comment .
if u r not liking my fic plz tell me .

hey reshmi.... whatever gave you this impression....

your fic is absolute winner... its rocking

i loved each and every word in it...

i loved ranvirs possessive ness tia and ranvirs proclamation of their love...evry thing about this pt is just perfect... its got humor... its emtional....it has every thing that one needs ..

Originally posted by: aparna_1988

i loved ranvirs possessive ness tia and ranvirs proclamation of their love...evry thing about this pt is just perfect... its got humor... its emtional....it has every thing that one needs ..

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thanx for loving my fic so much aparna 😉

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