unexpected life-t$r fanfic.part 34.pg 98. - Page 14

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Posted: 19 years ago
hey disha ,u noe wat ,ur storyline jus rockz! 👍🏼

dis part was jus superb👏
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u noe ,i cant handle such suspence if its related to tia ranveer.....

so now ,as all say ,plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz conti soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
Disha plz plz cont fast.this part was 👏 and bit emotional too 😭 😭 😭 .
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Posted: 19 years ago
disha babes plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont fast.

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Posted: 19 years ago
disha where r u yaar?plssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss cont soon naa.
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Posted: 19 years ago

PART 11.

RANVEER HAD HOLD TIA TIGHT..HE WAS TRYING TO EXPLAIN HER BUT ASHI CAME THERE...

AS SOON AS RANNY SAW ASHI HE LEFT TIA..

ASHI-TIA..WOH..(NOT KNOWING WHAT TO SAY)...HAAN..WOH DISHA TUMHE BULA RAHI HAI...

TIA-YA ASHI..CUMING DNT WORRY..

ASHI GOES DOWN...

RANNY IS LEFT THERE AS IF THE WORLD IS NOT AROUND HIM.HE WAS BROKEN BITTERLY...

TIA WENT DOWN..

RANNY THINKING-KYUN...KYUN AAP(LUKING UP)..KYUN AAP HAMHRE SAATH AISE KAR RAHEN HAI..BHAGWAN..AKHIR HUMNE KYA BIGADA HAI AAPKA..HUM TIA AUR DISHA KE BINA NAHI REH SAKTE..NAHI REH SAKTE(CRYING BITTERLY).

RANNY ALSO WENT DOWN...HE SAW DISHA PLAYINH WITH HER FRIENDS..HW SEWWT,CUTE SHE WAS LUKING.HER FACE WAS JUST LIKE HIM...INNOCENT😉.

UV CAME TO RANNY..HE SAW HIM SAD..

UV-BRO..DNT WORRY SAB THIK HO JAYEGA..

RANNY-KUCH THIK NAHI HOGA BANA..HUMNE TIA KO KHO DIYA HAI.HAMESHA HAMESHA KE LIYE...

UV-RANNY I KNOW TUM BAHUT HURT HO..PAR MAIN TUMHE EK AUR CHEEEZE BATANA CHATA HOON..JISSE TUMAHRI PARON TALI ZAMEEN KHISAK JAYEGI..

RANNY WITH A WORRIED EXPRESSION-KYA BANA..KYA WOH BAAT TIA SE HAI..

UV-HAAN..BRO..MAINE AUR ASHI NE DECIDE KIYA HAI..KI TIA KI SHADI KAR LEIN...

RANNY WAS LEFT SHAKEN-ONLY ONE WORD WAS CUMING IN HIS MI9ND...'TIA KI SHADI KAR LEIN..'.

RANNY-BANA..AAP YE...AAP JAANTE HAIN KI TIA HAMAHRI LIFE HAI...PHIR BHI AAP..

UV-MAIN JAANTA HOON RANNY..TUM YE BAAT SUNKAR AUR HURT HUVE REHENGE..PAR MAIN TIA AUR DISHA KO IS HALAT MAIN NAHI DEKH SAKTA..TUM JAANTE NAHI HO RANNY..TIA SAARA DIN GUTGUT KAR JEETI HAI..AUR DISHA...MAIN USSE WHOLE LIFE WITHOUT FATHER NAHI DEKH SAKTA..

TUM YAHI SOCHTE HOO NAA..KI MAIN AISE KYUN KAH RAHA HOON..KYUNKI..TIA TUMHE APNE LIFE MAIN WAPAS NAHI AANE DEGI..

RANNY-DEGI BANA?TIA APNE LIFE MAIN HUME WAPAS JARROOR LENGI..UNHE HUME WAPAS LENA HI PADEGA..(WIPING HIS TERAS)..

HE PROCEEDED TOWARDS TIA AND..................

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Posted: 19 years ago
part 11.posted..tell me hw it was..i know it was a bit boring but still do comment.
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Posted: 19 years ago
wow.me d 1st one 2 reply.
btw d part is not at all boring.
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Posted: 19 years ago
assomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee work
i just loved u i cany belive it u rot ethe lasy part on my request
im just soooooooooooooooooooooooooo happy and this part was realy awsoeme plzzzzzzzzzzzzz jaldi cont karna
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Posted: 19 years ago
thank u so much krits and rimli..
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey dishu sistah sisters main thank you kahaan se a gaya 😉

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