Dil kya karein???Part 20(last part)Pg 26 - Page 10

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Posted: 19 years ago
#91
hey reshmi first of all luv ya
then second of all awsoem
and third of all plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz jaldi likh
👏
this is for ur fic 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
#92
choo sweet ritz 😛
kal zaroor likhoongi
love you 😛 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
#93
haan i hope soo tu meri bat manegi warna.................... pata nahin kya karungi lekin ..........ha baat nahin karungi

aur haan next part tryu nad make it romantic i no not possible because of the rewaz but still 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
#94
reshmi plssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss cont soon yaar.kal hone mein bohot der baki hain.plz jaldi likhna.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#95
wow reshmi this part was awesumm..i really luved it,...the way ranny being romantic to tia..wow...just luved.it.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Thanks Rimli
pukka kal likhoongi
😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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fantastic yaar 👏

plzzzzzzzzz jaldi conti karna
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Posted: 19 years ago
#98
it's okkkkkk.par kal zaroor likhna.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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PART 12



Ranveer was not able to meet Tia for 2 days .His friends who were always ready to help him had suddenly turned villains of his romantic life .
He was not even able to speak with Tia openly on the phone coz he was always surrounded by them . So he went to his room on the pretext of resting and sneaked out from his window only to find Aashi
standing there---- 😕 😕

Aashi --- Thakur !!!!! yeh kya ho raha hain .Tum rest window se jump karke lete ho kyaa ???
Ranveer --- (finding no excuses) Aashi .....Woh.... … hum to bas …....hum to bas .....…
Aashi --- Ab who sab rehne do ……agar tumhara window –jumping adventure khatam ho gaya ho toh hamare saath shopping chalo .
Ranveer --- (in exasperation) Hamara mann nahi hain ...…Aashi.
Aashi --- (resting her hand on his shoulder ) Mujhe pata hain tumhara mann kaha hain ....( then consoling him) Thakur kal engagement mein toh tum usse miloge hi na ???
Ranveer --- Aashi aap hamari sabse acchhi dost hain . Hum bas aadhe ghante mein Tia se milkar aa jayenge. Please tab tak sab sambhal lijiye
Aashi --- Hmmmm….......Toh thakur tum nahi manoge .....Thik hain ….....Aunty ….......

On seeing her call his mother Ranveer goes back to his room from the window without a delay . 😆 😆


ENGAGEMENT CEREMONY


Ranveer got dressed up before everyone . He was desperate to meet Tia . Those 2 days were like hell for him . Engagement was at Tia's house . On arriving there , Ranveer 's eyes were searching only one
person -..... well of course Tia . Yuvi saw the longingness to see Tia in his eyes and went to him .......


Yuvi --- Ranveeer Bana , Tia aa jayegi , ladkiyon ko ready hone mein time lagta hain , especially Tia Ahuja ko . (and then on seeing Tia ) Arrey .
woh.... dekho woh aa gayi .

On hearing that Ranveer lifted his head up and he was awestruck . Tia was coming down the stairs wearing a glittering red sari , sparking diamond earings , lot of matching bangles , a diamind chain around her neck . Her hair was flowing like silk and she looked amazing and soo vivacious . Not only Ranveer even other boys were staring at her with their mouths open and obviously girls were jealous. On seeing Ranveer her face glowed even more and her eyes sparkled with intense feeling of love. 😳
😳 She came and stood before Ranveer .

Tia --- (whispers) Ranveer aaj tum bohot handsome lag rahe ho 😛 😛

Ranveer was so lost looking at her that he didn't answer anything . Yuvi hit him lightly and he snapped out of his daze

Ranveer --- Tia ….....aap toh hamesha bohot sundar lagti ho , par aaj aap ek pari ki tarah lag rahi ho

Tia was blushing pink on hearing this which made her look even more beautiful . 😳 😳 And Ranveer could not take his eyes off her .ThenSumeet made the announcement and both of them slipped the ring into each other's finger.

After that the party began and Ranveer and Tia was taken to the dance floor by their friends . They both were dancing but was very conscious about the crowd staring at them since they were the center of attraction and also coz their parents were also there. So they both sneaked away to the terrace to spend some private moments . 😉😉

Tia --- Ranveer woh dekho aaj full moon hain
Ranveer --- ( wrapping his arms around her from behind ) Par who hamare chaand se zyada pretty nahi hain

Tia blushes and lowers her eyes . 😳 😳

Ranveer --- ( kneeling down and offering his hand) Tia ....... dance

Tia agrees and Ranveer rests a hand on her slim waist , drawing her closer . She looks at him in the eyes and looses herself in them . While
dancing Ranveer begins nuzzling her neck and Tia closes her eyes in pleasure. After sometime she comes back to her senses and moves away . But he grabs her hand and swirls her round . Tia loses her balance and bumps into Ranveer and they both fall down with Tia on the top . "Ahhhh Ouch " groans Ranveer . Then he opens his eyes and on seeing Tia his pain vanishes . They get lost into each other's eyes . 😳 😳


But they were disturbed by none other than Yuvi who
had come searching for them . 😡 😡

Yuvi --- ( in a teasing tone) Ranveer bana ….. meri information ke mutabik suhagraat shaadi ke baad hoti hain ..engagement ke baad nahi . So guys yeh sab raas –leela chhodo aur mere saath chalo . Neeche sab wait kar rahe hain. 😛 😛

Tia was feeling very embarrazed and she rushed off from there . And Ranveer was thinking why does this always haapen to him only . 😕 😕

Ranveer --- Bana …aapko bhi abhi aana tha
Yuvi --- Bro …..Thank God ki mein aaya ….....(pausing a bit ) ......Imagine agar meri jagah uncle ya aunty aaye hote toh kya hota ????
Ranveer --- Thik hain bana ....….ab yahan se chaliye ….....waise bhi ab yahan rukhne ka koi faida nahi…. 😕 😕

Yuvi smiles and both leave.

Edited by honey_13 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
awesum part 👏
do cont soon.

titli

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