a fanfic frm remixgang.net

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i would like 2 post at -r fanfic frm remixgang.net by bhumi dutta. it is a very goos story but a sad nd short 1.

can i do dat? as in post sum1 else's fic?

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Posted: 19 years ago
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i am interested to read that story, no matters its short or not...pls post the story...
acc.. to me u aren't doing any wrong thing,infact u were honest that the story u want to post is written by someone else...
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Posted: 19 years ago
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well okay since none of the mods v replied i am posting the fic here.

kaisa yeh pyaar hai????????????

chap 1 {LOVE IS BLIND.................}

t's been four years since tia,ranveer,yuvi,ashi have left maurya.Tia is in UK and hasn't met ranveer since the past four years...........but she's coming back to india and it's supposed to be a surprise for everyone.

the day for departure finally arrives..tia is coming back to her love..ranveer...the whole flight all she can think of is ranveer and all the beautiful moments they spent.

back in india ranveer is now a very famous singer,and is still madly in love with tia.Ranveer is in a cafe with ashi and yuvi when he sees tia coming....at first he thinks he's dreaming but then he realises dat his dream has finally come true...he's with the love of his life again.
they both are very happy and are unable to control their emotions....when ashi comes in and says "hey bhaggu!!ab tum dono bas yahin khade rahoge kya??"
"nahi ashi hum sab mr.ahuja ke paas chalte hain..humein unse kuch baat karni hai,ab hum tia se door nahi reh sakte."
"woah dude!!!!!matlab you're gonna marry tia??"
"haan banna"
"kool!!phir toh tum love ka ek perfect example ban jaaoge"
then ashi starts teasing tia.."timbo main tumhe tia bulaaoon ya phir bhabhi ji???" tia smiles shyly and hugs ranveer.
"chaliye baana ab hum chalte hain"
"theek hai dude..let's go"
tia-ranveer are on ranveer's bike and ashi-yuvi are on yuvi's bike.They all are veryyy happy and excited....and ashi and yuvi are singing love is in the air........

but all of them are unaware of god's will................ranveer and tia had no idea that this day instead of being their happiest day would turn their lives into a living hell........................................................ ....................................
Edited by ranv_rules - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thnxx aditi . here's the second part.

chap 2 {BLACK.........}

tia and ranveer are very happy and excited!! ranveer has just turned to ask tia something when suddenly a truck comes from the other side and.....BAM!!!!!!! all tia manages to say is.."ranveer side mein lo!!!"

The next thing tia sees is the neat hospital room in which she has been admitted..she's happy to see the relieved smile on her papa's face..."tia..princess main kitna worried thaa..agar tumhe kuch ho jaata toh ...toh main kya karta??"
but tia is paying no attention to her papa's word's.......the horrid memories of the accident swimming across her mind all she can think of his..ranveer."papa..ranveer kaisa hai??woh kahan hai??tia ko uss se milna hai!!"
"haan tia woh side wale room mein hai..challo main tumhe le jaata hoon.."
tia is tensed to see everyone weeping...she goes up to pri and said.."pri..babe...tia ko batao na...kya hua???r..ranveer theek toh hai na??babe tum kuch bol kyun nahi rahi ho???batao na ranveer ko kya hua hai babe??"
"tia..woh...r..ranveer.woh usse.."
"pri puhleez bolo naa!!kya hua hai??" says tia having an eerie feeling that something dreadful has happened...!!!
"timbo..ranveer has lost his eyesight.." "what??oh puhleez u punk..tum..tum tia pe prank play kar rahi ho na??huh??bolo??"
"nahi tia..ashi theek keh rahi hai...ranveer is now blind" "yuvi..tum yeh kya keh rahe ho....aisa kaise ho sakta hai???" then vrinda comes up and says"tia...apne aap ko sambhalo..yuvi-ashi theek keh rahein hain...ranveer ab dekh nahi sakta...he's blind tia....."
"nooo,noo babe aisa kaise ho sakta hai..nooo...nooo"
just then tia hears the very familiar voice....ranveer's voice..."tia...tia hum dekh nahi sakte toh kya hua....humein iss baat ki khushi hai ki aap hamare saath hain...humein apni aankhein kho jaane ka koi gam nahi tia...hum aapse bahut pyaar karte hain..aur aapse shaadi karna chahte hain...boliye tia aap humse shaadi kareingee???" tia is just staring blankly at him..tears rolling down her cheeks....."tia kuch toh kahiye...aap humse shaadi kareingee na??"
"r...ranveer..woh...tia tumse.....tumse shaadi...woh.........
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CHAP 3 {IS DIS LUV??????????}

everyone is shocked and confused to hear tia say.....NO."Ranveer woh tia tumse...tumse..shaadi nahi kar sakti.." saying this she just runs quickly out of the room..out of the hospital....while her tears are running uncontrollably.....

meanwhile in ranveer's room.......
"banna woh..woh humaare saath aisa kaise kar sakti hain..banna hum unke bina nahi jee sakte..nahi jee sakte" says ranveer crying out loud..the only picture in his mind being that of...tia.."par ranveer tum..tum tia ki wajah se apni life spoil nahi kar sakte...u have to move on..pata nahi uss timbo ne aisa kyun kiya..ranveer i think tumhe usse bata dena chahiye ki.." "nahi ashi...aap sab humse vaada kijiye ki jab tak hum zinda hain..iss baat ka tia ko pata nahi chalna chahiye..plz ashi" "theek hai thakur agar tum kehte ho toh hum usse nahi batayenge but tum bhi humse promise karo ki tum apni life ruin nahi karoge.." "yaa bro ashi theek keh rahi hai.. u have to move on.." "shayad aap log theek hi keh rahe hain banna.." says ranveer with a sigh..

two monhs have passed..tia is sitting by the window in her room and thinking...was she right to do so..??should she go back to ranveer..??when the phone rings...and tia picks it up and is dumbstruck on hearing the terrible news....which makes her heart ache...reviving the somewhat lost bruises..........
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chap 4 {LOVE KE LIYE KUCH BHI KAREGA}

tia:hello
ashi:hey timbo..main bas yeh batana chahti thi ki...thakur's no more....tum chaho toh uski death ceremony mein aa sakti ho..kal..11:30am..hope tum atleast yeh toh kar hi sakti ho...
tia:w..wat did u say..r..ranveer is..no..no more??yeh..yeh kaise ho gaya..??
ashi:ab rone se kya faayda..he has commited suicide tia..tumhaari wajah se...usne tumhaare liye ek letter choda hai..agar tumhaare paas yahan aane ka time ho toh woh letter mujhse le lena..bye.

tia is feeling very guilty.."oh tia's god..yeh ..yeh kya ho gaya.Tia ne model ban-ne ke chakkar mein..ranveer ki life le li..??no...no..this can't happen..no" she is crying still holding the phone in her hands...when she hears someone coming..it's pri.."tia..babe kya hua...why r u crying..??" "pri.."
tia hugs pri and starts weeping.."pri ranveer ...that that camel..he commited suicide.." "kyaa...p..par tia tum..tum toh aaj uss se sorry bolne wali thi na..?" "haan babe..par..par tia ko kya pata tha..ki..ki..yeh sab..nooo..pri babe..puhleez tum tia ko thodi der akele chod sakti ho..?" "theek hai tia...take care..bye" "bye angel"
tia holds the teddy bear given by ranveer and just hugs it and cries and cries....
then she thinks of the letter..."aisa kya ho sakta hai..jo tia ko nahi pata...tia must go and find out..."

meanwhile at ranveer's house...
"maa..maa..bhaiya ke doston ka phone aaya tha...woh..woh" "arey vasu..kya hua...aap ro kyun rahi hain..ranveer theek toh hai na..??" "maa...maa bhaiya ki maut ho gayi hai...hume mumbai jaana hoga..."
"kya...nahi..pehle apke daata...aur ab....ab..ranveer..."
vasu and ranveer's mom take the first train to mumbai and reach ashi's house..where ranveer's body has been kept.....
vrinda takes vasu inside and varun takes mrs.sisodia to ranveer....."yeh..yeh aapko kya ho gaya....??hum jaante hain..aap bas so rahe hain...uthiye na..beta hume aur vasu ko aapki zarrorat hai.." "aunty sambhaliye apne aap ko...chaliye ab aap thoda aaram kar lijiye..yuvi tum zara aunty ko upar le jao.."
says ashi remeberinng the secret...the letter..about which only she knew...and..the sacrifice.....tears running continuosly..but she didn't bother to wipe them..she was too confused..thinking..that why did tia do this..maybe this wouldn't have happened if..if tia knew....the truth....................................................... .....................................
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CHAP 5 {THE SACRIFICE}

tia hadn't slept all night.......wondering why did this happen..??what could be there in the letter..??why did she do this......??but she knew the answer very well it was....love...he loved her and that's why he was dead........
the time was 11:30...ashi knew tia will definitely come....she was waiting for tia...so that she could tell her...everything......when she saw someone hiding behind a tree...."whose there.??kaun hai..??" as ashi got closer she could hear someone sobbing.....it was tia."Tia tum yahan hide kyun kar rahi ho..??" "a..ashi..tia ki ek mistake ki wajah se ranveer's dead...tia aunty ko face kaise karegi...??" "tia..yeh toh tumhe pehle sochna chahiye tha...aur aunty toh tumhe forgive kar chuki hain..." ashi takes out the letter from her pocket....."yeh lo par isse padhne se pehle meri baat suno.....tumne ranveer ko no isliye kaha na coz he was blind..??well....abhi tum jin aankhon se yeh letter padne jaa rahi ho na..yeh..yeh tumhaari nahi hain.." saying this ashi leaves....but tia is very confused "what did she mean by this..is it possible..that....oh no....noooooo"
she quickly opens the letter...and reads with a heavy heart..
"dear tia..
hum jaante hain ki aapne aisa kyun kiyaa..aur hum aapki feelings samajh sakte hain..tia..hum aapse bahut pyaar karte hain..aur aapke bina nahi reh sakte isliye hum jaa rahe hain..par jab bhi aapko hamari zaroorat hogi aap humein hamesha apne paas payeingee..humein bas aapse ek last favour chahiye...aap humaare liye plz dukhi na hon..hum aapki aankhon mein aansoo nahi dekh sakte..aur haan humaari tia aur humaari aankhein...dono ka dhyan rakhiye...
love u forever
ranveer"
tia understood everything....he had sacrificed his own eyes for her....it was not ranveer who was blind..it was tia.."oh tia's god yeh kya ho gaya..??tia ranveer ko blind samajhti thi..but blind toh woh khudh thi....aankhein hone ke bavjood tia blind thi jo ranveer ki feelings nahi samajh paayi....."
everything was repeating itself in tia's mind..his smile..his..letter.....his eyes...she felt guilty...she felt dizzy....when she was distracted by a voice...someone calling her name..a faint voice................it was her student.....ravi....it had been 4 years since ranveer died....she had left her modeling and had come to sanganer..to fulfill ranveer's dream of making a school......and she was a teacher..she lived with his family...remebering him everyday....she looked at her reflection in the mirror...and saw the warm..chocolate brown eyes..lovingly looking at her.....his letter was true...he was there with her...forever....
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Posted: 19 years ago
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the story is soo emotional ranv_rules...thanks for posting the story...
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey sagarika,i hv read this story b4 in remixgang 😃 ,neway,thanx 4 posting 😃 😃 ,the story is awesooome nd yeah,very emotional too.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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ur wlcum guys. i was just going thru the story wheni thought dat dis story deserves more attention nd posted it here.

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