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Posted: 19 years ago

HI ALL OF U SORRY 4 LATE .EXAM IS NOT GOOD ITS GR8 MAIN 2ND AYI HOON SIRF 2 MARKS KE LIYE 😭😭😭 I AM VERY HAPPY PAAS TOU HOGAI😆😆😆

THANX FOR ALL COMMENTS

PART---18

FLASH BACK

Its 3 months ago In Sisodia house

its also full moon ni8 In R & T's room RANVEER is working in his laptop on d bed he is very bussy : Tia is standing at d window and looking d moon she look at Ranveer den turn around look at sky 'n' close her eyes she saw a beutiful garden full of flower and sky is look blue like in pic (as usual)dere is a cottege also and a girl who wear white skirts and white tops she ran towards d house and stop look back her face is not clear den she open her eyes

Tia think-(dis is her imazination or just a dream she not know) yeh kya tha Tia jagte hua dream dekhna lagi (she laugh 2 heself) and look at Ranveer who is bussy in files.

Tia - (in a very sweet voice) Ranveer ...

Ranveer -( not look at Tia but Responce) haan Tia ....

Tia - Ranveer... kya tum ne kabhi soucha hai ki moon itni khubsurat kyun lag ta ha..

Ranveer -( in a naughty Smile😆😆) Nahi Tia hume tou Chand ne kabhi apna raaz nahi bataya ,ager apko unhone batya hai tou app hi bata dijiye

Tia - (Look at Ranveer who is still bussy looking in d files) Kyunki moon ki paas stars hote haa aur wou bhut hi lucky bhi ha 😃😃

Ranveer - I am also lucky dat ur wth me , BTW kya Chand ne app ko kuch kaha?????

Tia - kya ?????????

Ranveer -Yehi ki app chand se bhi zyaada khubusrat haa

Tia - Very funny

Ranveer - hum yeha chand...

Tia - you...( she look at Ranveer 😡😡) Ranveer baas bhi karo kitna kaam kerte hoo tum yeh kaam office maan kyun nahi kerte

Ranveer - Tia.. humne iss project(Aashi is also working in dis project) ke liye bhut hi mehanet kya hai aur kal iska presentation haa hume yeh project har halat maan cahi yeh

Tia comes close to him , and she also feel very bad😭 in her heart becoz Ranveer not paying such attention towards her,affter dere marrriage dey not spend much time Ranveer have lots of work to do and last week he go to U.S.A befor dat he go to London 4 a week (totaly 14 days) for d bussiness and Ranveer is bussy in 3 to 4 project and now a another project Tia feel very bad but she not express her feelings becoz she know hwo d project is important 4 him and she not want b a obstacel in his sucess ( she make a smile on her face)

Tia - Ranveer yeha project Sirf tumhe hi milega , aur tum tou hamesha sa hi best hoo , Tia bhi tou ha tumhare shaath so relax.

Ranveer - Ab pata chala why its says dat in every sucessfull man dere is a woman😆😉( if any mistake den don't mind)

Tia - Ranveer.....

den rain started ( as u all know about rain )Tia got out to balcony Ranveer look at Tia and also he goes affter Tia d song KABHI NEEM NEEM(YUVA)played dey both dance & Ranveer take tia in his arm slowely ley down in bed fast kiss in her forehead and den lip dis is a another shuhagraat😆😆😆

In morning when Tia open her eyes she search 4 Ranveer he is not in room ,she got up and sit dere and thought about d ni8

Ranveer comes wth Tea give to Tia

Ranveer - Gud morning Tia

Tia -(take d tea ) gud morning ( in a sweet voice and suddenly she asked )usa Ranveer time kya hua haa

Ranveer -( in nughty mood ) 9 baje ne main sirf 45 min baki haa

Tia - Ranveer....😡😡

Ranny-(smile) 8.15

Tia - what??????? 8.15 Tia ko mama ke shaath mandir jana tha puja ke liye tum bhi na Ranveer Tia ko jaga ya kyun nahi ( she take d towel and rush 2 bath room when Ranveer caught her hand

Tia - Ranveer kya ker rahi ho chdo Tia ko use bhi late ho rahi hay

Ranveer -late ho nahi rahi haa ho chuki haa

Tia - kya matlab hai !!!!!!!!😕😕

Ranveer - maa mandir jaa chiki haan

Tia - kya.. Tia ke wager 😭

Ranveer - nahi maa ko panditji ke pass kuch kam tha isilye wou chale gaye hum app ko mandir main chod denge

Tia - nahi Ranveer Tia chali jayegi aur ase bhi tumhe office bhi tou jana hai

Ranveer - hum app ko akele chod ker nahi jayenge aur use bhi ager app jara jaldi kerenge tou hum breakfast bhi shaath ker shakte haan

Tia -( Tia give a sweet smile to him) ok Tia abhi ready ho ke ati ha

Dey both go to mandir. affter d puja dey both and Shudha(Ranveer's Mom) have dere breakfast and

Ranveer drops them at hom Shudha Went Out

Tia - Ranveer Best of luck (den she quickly give a kiss in his lip )

Ranveer - Thanx Tia ab yeh project ham hi milegi 😛😛😉

Ranveer goes to office & Tia back to hom

In d evening Summet , Soniya , Aashi & Uv and all dere friends are comes becoz Ranveer & Aashi crack d deal dey got d project

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Posted: 19 years ago
Awesome part
Very Romantic 😳 😳 😳
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Ab jaldi se suspense break karna , I am eagerly waiting 😉

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Posted: 19 years ago
Yipee Iam the 1st to reply 😉 😛


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Posted: 19 years ago

😭 HI ONLY 1 REPLAY 😭😭 I KNOW MY FAN- FIC IS NOT AS GOOD AS OTHER😭😭 U JUST READ MY FAN- FIC I AM GOING TO END D FIC VERY SOON 😭 PLZ GIVE D COMMENT 😭😭

HERE IS NEXT PART HOPE U LIKE IT

PART-19

In d evening Summet , Soniya , Aashi & Uv and all dere friends are comes becoz Ranveer & Aashi crack d deal dey got d project Every one congratulate them. they all make fun .masti as they do. when party is over all they started chating . sabse bada bat tha ki Mehar aur Sid ki Shaddi 2 din ke baad hai . Summet comes there

Sum-( towards Aashi & Ranveer ) Kya ho raha hai jara mujhe bhi batao (he smile at them as no one speak a single word look at Aashi & Ranveer ) I know dat yeh project sirf tum hi milega And by d way Sid congrats sa my opinion about Marriasge T SHAADI MAT KARO BARBAD HO JAO GE( he just make fun wth SID: d phon rings and he goes way )

Sid - guys ab tou mujhe sach much der lag raha hai

AA- daaar kyun rahi ho hamara Ranveer ko dekh lo itni badi afat ke shaath raha rahi haa kya wou daar rahi hai Tou phir .......

Ranveer -( Ranveer is in funny mood so) Nahi Aashi humto Tia ke shaathbhut hi kam waqt bitate haan isilye bach jate haan paar pata isiliye chal jata hai jara Mehare ke bare main souchiye wou to lawer haan haar baat pa apna law istmal kerenge Sid bana tab app kya kareng......

Sid - Mehear mare shaath asa nahi karega ager tum logo na mujhe jyada derane kaha tou main shaadi cancel ker dunga

Every body - NO

AA- are hum tou mazak ker rahe tha

Mehear - Sid ager tum ne iss baar shaddi nahi kya tou main tumhe jail bheje dungi kam sa kam 14 SAAL KE LIYE

EVERY ONE LAUGH EXCEPT BICHARA SID

den Ranveer change d topic and says

Ranveer - hume to yehakin hi nahi ho raha hai ki yeh hume milla hai

AA- Thakur relax tumhara sapana tha yeh project aur tumne is hasil ker chuke ab kya ????????

Ranveer - nahi Aashi humara sapana abhi tak pure nahi haa humara sapana hai ki main apni compani ko top maan deakh na chati hoon

At dat time Tia enter wth soniya

Tia - Don't worry Ranveer tumhara sapna jarur pura hoga ager nahi hua tou Tia karegi

AA- NAHIIIIII Ranveer.... tumhe apna sapna pura kerna ke liye jo help chahe le lo lakin Plz hume ase barbad mat kara

Tia - What u mean ki Tia Bussiness nahi ker shakti???

AA- rahene doo hume barbad bahi hona ha

Soniya - oh.. both of u plz shut up Ranveer tum kal aarahi ho na..

Ranveer - (give a smile) yes MAMA hum aa rahe haan.... per khaha ????
Soni- yeh lo Tia maine tumhe pahela hi kaha tha ki yeh Mr. Rajasthan tumhare liye thick nahi ha per tum meri baat kaha sun te hoo

Tia -MAMA.. ( look at Ranvee) Kal hum dono mama ke ghar ja rahe haa

Ranveer - oh ok.... Huma jarur ayenga akhit hamare saas na hume bukaya hai

AA- oh no yani ki kal mujhe Tia ko jhelna padega

Tia - Mama

Soniya - AASHI

aafter dere chat dey all leave

Tia - Maa app medicine

Shu - Tia ... beta kal app ko ghar jana haina app jake so jaye yeh

Tia - ji maa

Tia goes to bad room where

Tia - Ranveer tum soyeh nahi

Ranveer - Tia hum app ke uger kabhi sote haan kya aur use bhi jab app jaag rahe hoo tou hame neend kese ayegi

AASHI - TIA TUM UHAAN KYA KER RAHI HOO

TIA - TURN AROUND

FLASH BACK OVER

RANVEER WORD ARE REPITED IN HER EARS ABD D TEARS COME ONCE AGAIN

AASHI - TIA CHOLO BED PA AO AUR ASE BHI TUMHE ARAM KI JARURAT HAI

TIA NOT SAY A SINGLE WORD AAASHI TAKE HER TO BED AND SHE GO TO SLEEP D AASHI SIT TO HER AND SHE ALSO FALL ASLEEP

NEXT MORNING

Tia slowly open her eyes Aashi is talking wth doctor

AAs- thanx doc...

she look at Tia

AA- Tia congratulation tum ab ghar ja shakte hoo tum ready ho maine Mom ko phon ker diya ha bas kych farmality ha mai puri karke ati hoon

Tia noods her head and get ready

Aashi take Tia to her house where Summet and Soniya waiting for them

Summ- Soniya main janti hoon tumhare uper kya bit rahi ha lekin hume Tia ki dakhbhal karni haa wou yehaan hai taki use pal pal Ranveer ki yaad na aye uhaan rahega tou ghut ghut ke maar jayega tum jante hoo

Soniya - main uski yeh halat nahi deakh shakti

Shu- apko khud ko sambhal na hoga baran app usa kase sambhalne

at that time dey reach at hom they both enter home Sumeet - kase hoo beta

Tia give a smile and just noode her headas she said "she is fine"

when she enter d house she Remmeber dat day when Soniya called them...

FLASH BACK

TIA - RANVEER TUMHARI UJHESE HUM LATE HOGAYE

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
rocking parts aisurya 👏
plz cont soon.

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Posted: 19 years ago
nd temme why do u always think that ur fic is not gud?
it's really rocking.

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Posted: 19 years ago
Hey how could u say that no one is reading 😡

I hv read eacha nd every part .

And this part was also awesome as usual . 👏

And I can't bear the suspense anymore . I am tired of thiking what happened to Ranveer

So plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
ur fic definately rocks n even i too hv read all parts.don't end this fic so soon. 👏 pls cont soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
Hi plzzzzzzz cont soooooooon 😊

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