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REMIX after 5 years {paanch saal baad)all MAURYA girls & guys in saal main badal gaye hai per dey r all till friend . REMIX band ab ek papular band ho gaye hai like other band . sabhi ne apni apni proffesional life choise kar liye aur dey r perfact in there job sirf sid ko chod ke

YUV RAJ DEV (UV)- His dad Yeshwant dev is dead.he is a famous rock star . inside dis he also owner of 5 resturant.wou apni mom ke saath rehati hai

SIDHARTH

(sid)- Sid event organiser ban gaya aur bad kismati se uski bussiness top pe aa gaya wou abhu bi REMIX band ki maneger hay .

NAKUL-

NAKUL ab ek actor ban gaye hai ek famous actor .(likeAB)

RANVEER SISSODIA

-Ranveer ne apni khud ka bussiness sure kia . know he is a young rich bussibess man usne kafi devlop kar liy ha .ab wou apni behen BASUDHA(jo ab MAURYA HAIGH ki student hai ) maa ke saath rehati ha

VARUN

- varun is a doctor . usne vrinda se shaadi kar li hai VRINDA is also a doctor

PRIYANKA

(PRI)-Pri ek actess hai .Tia ke help se wou kush zaayad slim ho gaye .ab wou ek famous actress hai (like-RANI) finali use uski hero mil gaye non other den NAKUL (filmy jodi)

MEHAR-

mehar ek lawer hai kafi popular bhi . bhut case jit chuki hai . wou sid ke saath rehati ha .Haan usne sid se shaadi nahi ki per ab kar ne wali ha

history main pehili baar INDIAaur PAKISHTAN ke bich yudh na hoke milap ho gaye .matlab kisi serious problem aa kar MR SUMMET AHUJA na SONIYA RAY se shaadi kar li Tia aur AASHI na is Shaadi ko maan bhi li per unki MHABHARTH khabi khatam nahi hu abhi jab wou dono milte hai kuch na kuch hota hi rehata hai - per thodi alag type ke ja jung chidta hai tou Tia soniya ek taraf aur aashi summet ek taraf haote hain per dey live happyli

ANVESHA RAY AHUJA

(aashi)--- sound extra tacky any ways after dat marriage aashi join with SUMMET to help him in his bussiness stangr li she become more sucessfull den her father

TIA AHUJA-

(Princess)-as every one knows she become a more popular fashion designer. sab se badi baat hai ki Tia in sabse jyaada famous hai

RANVEER -TIA, aur YUVI-AASHI ne ek saath sagaye ki per kisine shaadi nahi ki .

AT AHUJA HOUSE

Aashi discuss about her new project with summet when Soniya enter to call them 4 dinnner

Soniya- tum dono ko sunai nahi deta kya ma kab se chila rahi hoon

AASHI- ofcourse...mama hume sunaye deta hi per apko suna hume jaruure nahi sanjha

SUMMET- (look at aashi ) ase nahi kehte!

SONIYA-cholo dinner lag gaye ha khan kha lo barna

before she could finish her line aashi said

AA-barna ap hamara sar kha lenge right

soniya -maama main vegeterian hoon ! sar nahi khati

they all laugh at com out to dinner table whre kailash prpare d dinner

kk-madam kahan laga di ha ur kuch

soniya -nahi ab aap jaa ye aur dinner kar lijiye

the all sit soniya call shouted to call tia

soniya-TIAAAAAAAAA cam babe dinner is ready

Tia just com in stair phon pe apni P.A ke uper chilati hue

TIA- tia ne tumhe nokri pe kyun rakaha agar kisi donkey ko rakhta to wou bhi asani se sara kam kar leta tia ko kuch bhi nahi suna hai sari problem kal tak shot out ho jaani chaaye barna tumhe tia fair kar degi samjha gaye

den she cam and sit

soniya- checklet itni ghusha mat karo barna tumhari face pe..

again aashi said

AA-face se sari make up melt ho jaye gi aur thumhara asli chera samne ajaegi

Tia -just shut up u punk... mama aashi se kho ki chup ho jaye tia pehelse hi irrited ha agar aur zaada isne tia ko irreterd kya tou achanai hoga....

soniya -(look at aaashi) chup cah beth kar khana nahi kha skti (den at tia) apni kam ki tennsion kahne ki table tak mat loa ye baat kitni baar main bol chuki hoon

TIA-soory mama.

Summet-Tia aashi main is weekend main ek plan ki hai hope ke tum dono bussy nahi hoge

TIA-IS WEEKEND PER!!!

AASHI-dad apko to pata ha na meri problem kya ha?

Summet-i know u tumhari proble kya ha .lekin kam ke saath family ko tou dekhna chahiye.

Soniya--maama koi excuse nahi chalega. kya jab hum apni kam karte the tum dono ke saath time spend nahi karte thi?. ek tou ye ha TIA kabhi bhi ghar main kya india main nahi hota hai aur tum maama humesha apni bussiness main bussy hota pata main kitni loonly feel karta hoon

den she just make her facelike she is crying

TIA- its ok mama is pura weekend aashi aur tia sirf aap dono ke saath spend karnge

AASHI- mum mujhe ye aap ki purani tricks ke bare pata ha to relax jab timbet na bol di ha tu hum sab eh saath is weekend spend karenge

They finish there dinner

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Posted: 19 years ago
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hi guys i am knewly writting fan fics if any mistaken den don't mind i posted d next part how is it plz replay

PART- 2

TIA's room

aashi-helloow koi ha!! timobo timbet chiklet hellooooooow

then she enter to room & see tia sit near d window & deeply thinging she is very upset

yae baat tou sach ha ki in dono ka kabhi banti nahi per wou ek dushre kuch bhi nahi chupate they love bina kahe ek dushre ki dil ki baat samajh jaate haan AA- oh tum yahn hoo kya kare rahe hoo!!! tare gin rahe hoo !

TIA-plz tia bhut upset ha!!

AA-kyun??????

TIA-oh..oh tia apni kam ko le kar up set ha

aashi look at tia

AA-sirf kam ko le kar aur koi baat nahi ha

TIA-nahi aur koi baat nahi ha

AA-TIA main mum nahi hoon mujhese tum kuch nahi chupasakte comon tell me

tia sit in window and said

TIA-anvesha tumhe tou pata ha na tia aur ranveer ke baare main .

AA- timbet,mujhe kya dad ,mom , infact pure duniya ko pata ha .

TIA -oh anvesha phele pure baat to sun lo phir apni silly comments dena

AA-ok -shooot (wth a bigsmile)

TIA-Tia last two month se ranveer se nahi mili ha nahi hi phon pe baat ki ranveer bhut hi ghuse main ha tia ne ranveer se promise kya tha ki india anke baad tia fast week sirf sirf uske saath spend karegi per abb

AA- per ab sab gadbad ho gaye!wase tum kya krna chati ho? tumahri ujhse mujhe bhi haan kehena pada barna meri is weeknd us psycho ke saath fix tha hum ne bhi kafi time se ek dusre nahi mile

TIA -Tia yeh souch rahe hai agar ranveer ke saath nahi gaye pata nahi kya hoga aur TIA mama paap ko bhi upset kar sakti

den they both thing what to do and suuddenly they look at each other

AA-Timbet kya tumbhi wohi souch rahi ho jo main souch rah hoon

TIA -tia ko tou pata nahi tum kya souch rahi ho per tia na souch li ha

AA-kya?

den tia told her idea & its same idia dats com 2 aashi mind

dono niche agaye jhana soniya aur summet dono baath kar plan bana rahe the

Soniya-kya hu tum dono itni jaaldi main kyun ho kya hua?

Summet-sab thik tou ha na ??

soniya - kuch tou kho? kya hua

AA- agar ap dono hume kuch khenki mika denga tou hum jaroor kahenge

TIA -mama, papa hum dono ne iss weeknd ki plan ki ha. agar app bura na mane tou hum..

Summet-Tia khao kya khena cha ti ho

AA-my cool dad hum dono ne iss plan main thodi si change kya haa.

Soniya-Simentih matlab summet main hospital phon kar ke room book kar leti hoon

AA-muuuuuuuum hamari plan tou sunle

Soniya-sunawo

Tia -anvesha tum rehene do Tia kheti ha papa (tia told what they want to do) papa hum yeh chate hain

kya aap ko manjur hai nahi tou koi baat nahi tia ok wth it

Summet- excelent hum ne bhi kuch asa hi soucha tha jaoo aur apni plan ko sucess full banao

AA- wou to thik hai per

Soniya-don't worru phone hum karlenge tum dono jao aur unhe batao

Tia -mama papa thamx al lott tia is so haapy

AA-(talk like TIA style) anvsha bhi happy ha

they all laugh tia & aashi gone way 4m there to call ranveer &uv

RANVEER HOUSE

RANVEER is bussy doing somthing in his laptot his mom enter

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hi thanx 4 replay here d next part

PAR-3

RANVEER HOUSE

RANVEER is bussy doing somthing in his laptot when his mom enter

Shudha-(ranveer mother ) ranveer khana dhanda ho raha hai ajo ,yeh ha ek jise bhok nahi lagti aur ek wou hai jis ki bhok kabhi mit ti hi nahi

ranveer look at his mom stangly

Ranv-kun???? Basu

shu-haan basu aur koun ho sakta hai .

ranv-wou kab aye?

shu-syaam ko agye thi

ranv-app ne hume kyun baataye nahi

shu-aylo app ghar main kab hote haan.

Ranv-sorry chaley unse hume kuch baat karni hai

shu -chaliye

they both com to dying table where BASU is waiting

BASU- hay bhagban . bhai app ka room ase khon sa country main ha jo anne main app ko pure 3 minutes aur 45 second lag gaya

Shu- BASUUUU

Ranv-Basu hum app se bhut naraz hain apne hum iss baar ek baar bhi phon kyun nahi ki???

Basu-oo ohh hmmm haan exam exam tha na islye

Rnv -exam tha ????

Basu-haan surprise test app ko to pata ha na

Rnv-haan hume pata hai itni tension lene ki jarurat nahi hai

At dat time phone rang ranveer goes 2 pick up d phon but

BASU-bhai app khana khye na hum dekhe te haan

Rann-ok

Basu-hellow,

it is AMLAN SETH yes yes he is brother of SHYLLA seth

Amla-hi r u missing me!!!!!!

BAsu-uuuuuuuuuuu r u mad hum ne mana kya tha na phon na karne ko??????

AM-pata hai main tou sirf tumhe yaad dilane ke liye phone kya tha

BA- hume sub yaad hai ghar main bhai haa ab hum phon rakhte haan bye

AM-ok bye

Basu plan is to spend her weekend wit her new friend Amlan

basu com to dinner table

SHU- khon tha

BASU-wou hamare dost thi

then ranveer cell ring

Ranveer-ab khon hai

and its non other then tia

Ranveer- hi Tia

Tia-ranveer Tia ne tumhe disturb tou nahi kya na

RAN- Nahi Tia bilkul hi nahi abhi hum app ki hi bare main souch rahe tha

Tia-dekha tum ne Tia ke bare main soucha aur Tia ne tumhe phone kya

Ranv-wou tou thik ha kahin app ne plan main koi change tou nahi ki

Tia- haan Ranveer isily Tia ne tumhe phon kya haa plz naraz mat hoona phele Tia ki pure baat tou sun lo pher tum jo khoge Tia ko manjur hoga

den she told d plan. THE plan is dey all going 2 aashi's new farm house by there car which takes all most5 to6 hours & dey will party, fun, masti, not only dey r going but the whole gang(sid, nakul,mhere, pri,vrinda,varun,and our rock star UV)

sabhi a rahe haan

Tia- ranveer Tia hope ki tum bura nahi manoge TIA bhi kya kar shakti haa papa ko na bhi tou nahi kehe sakti sorry ranveer

Ranveer-its ok TIA hume tou bhot khus hain ki aap ne ye plan ki hum sirf app ke sath kuch waqt bitana chate haan ,hume tou bhot acha lag raha ki ab hum sab saath saath honge

Tia- thanx ranveer

Ranveer- wase TIA AASHI kasi haan

TIA- ANVSHA..........

before she finish her line anvesha enter

she is very very very angry😡

AA-psyco,looser ediot,dino,

TIA -Ranveer ab tumhe pata chal gaya hoga ki wou kesi haa

Ranveer-(he laugh &say😆 ) bilkul lag ta hai ab kisi ki shyamat aye ha

Tia -ranveer tia tumhe baad main phon karti haa

Ranv-ok Tia

den tia hang out d phon look at aashi

Tia- mama yeh papa

AA-what??????//

Tia -mama yeh papa ne kisne tum se panga li hai

AA-shot up timbo agar mama yeh papa kuch kehete tou main unke uper chilati yehan kyun ati thodisi tou brain use karo

Tia-ohhhhhhh Tia samjh gaye wou khien wou UUVV

AA- psycho khud ko kya samjhta haa

Tia - yani ki wou uv ha .anvesha kya hua ha

AA- what meri koi galti nahi haa??

TIA - annvesha baat kya hua ha ye to kaho

AA- thik haa mairi galti haa wou jab usne mujhe bulaya tha tab main ja nahi saki aur us phone ker ke maana bhi nahi ker saki iska matlab thodi ye hai ki wou meri phone hi na pick up kare dad ki mobile se bhi try kya per usne kat dia ab maion use kase baat karungi

Tia- relax anvesha take a long breath &.......

AA- timbo main abhi yoga karne ki mood main nahi hoon agar help ker sakti hoo tou karo

Tia -kya kya!!!! kya kha tumne Tia ko sunyi nahi diya ANVESH RAY, TIA AHUJA se help mang rahe haa

AA- comon timbet ab itni bhi hypper hone jarrurat nahi ha Can u help me

TIA- ofcourse tum ne tia se help mangi hai aur tum to tia sis ho isliye Tia help karegi

den Tia call UV (Tia hamesha UV ko call karti rehati haan her din tou nahi per hapte main ek baar jarrur karti haa )

YUVI-hi TIA kasi hoo, khan hoo, kab inadi aa rahi hoo bhut din ke baad phon kya ,sab kuch thik tou ha na ?????

Tia look at aashi give d signal dat uv pick up her phone

Tia- UV tum itni sare sabaal ek saath mat pucho ek ke baad ek puch lene wase tia is fine per koi aur haa jo buri halat main ha

UV-koun????

TIA-Anvesh aur koun

UV- tim india maa ho aur mujhe bataye nai

TIA- UV tia baas do din phele aye haa aur tia ne kuch plan banya haa

UV- cool babes shut main bhi tou janu kya plan hai

TIA- wou thumhe anvesha bataye ga and plz use bina baat kya phon mat rakhna plz TIA ke liye plz uv ek baar use baat ker lo

UV- all right is baar sirf thumhare liya barana

TIA- ok ok ok lo use baat ker lo

THEN they both chat andshut out der problem

AA-tou tum kal aa arhi hoo

UV- yeh babes mainaa rahi hoon

tia is standing near to aashi look at her

TIA-hellow tia yeh ek ghantse ghadi hai kya uski phone misakti hai plz urgent hai

Aa-ok bye UV

Uv-bye aashi i miss u

den TIA call all there friends & aashi call the manger sab kuch sahi tarha se prepar kar ne ke liye

Tia -TIA ne sab ko phon ker diya ab

AA- maine bhi sari preparetion kar diya

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wow kool part 👏 👏 👏

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