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wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.awesum part rushi. 👏 and so romantic also. 😳 😳
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wow rushi..amazing part..this part just rocked..plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon..aur who is that hadi..
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hey rushi cont soon puh-leeseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.
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👏👏awesome part...enjoyed it thoughrly
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hi, i regret not reading your fic earlier....i read all of it now.......very well written esp convo between tia and ranvir is awesome .. very well done...not at all boring in fact very very interesting....looking forward to your next pt....
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Posted: 19 years ago
the next part
our lov birds were busy romancing and then kawab mein hadi ki entry..........
ranveer's dad-yeh kya ho raha hai[he is alive in my fic]

actually i have never mentioned about him in my fic so i thought y not intoduce him now

ranveer-data aap
tia-oh tia's god uncle
ranveer-data aap kab aaye dubai se
rany's dad-hum abhi aaye hai beta

he was in dubai u know jyada paise kamane ke chakkar mein he left his family and went there

tia-namaste uncle
ranny's dad-namaste beta kaise ho tum
tia-tia thik hai uncle aap kaise hai
ranny's dad-hum bhi thik hai hamara yah gawar aap ko jyada tang to nahi karta
tia-[when tia heard gawar she felt low]
ranny' dad-[understanding how tia felt]beta hum sab jante hai apko bura mane ki koi zarurat nahi hai ranveer hai hi aisa
ranveer-[now feeling embaressed]kya dat aap bhi
tia-haan uncle ranveer aisa nahi hai vo bahut acha hai
ranny's dad-acha[teasing him]
ranveer-data aap ki trip kaise thi
ranny's dad-bahut accha ab yeh sab chodo tum dono enjoy karo hum jake summet banna ke pass bethte hai thik hai
ranveer-thik hai
tia-ok uncle bye
ranny's dad-bye beta

then he goes to summet and suman.........

suman-mil aaye bacho se
ranny's dad-haan mil aaye dono ek saath bahut acche lag rahe hai
summet-haan sach mein suresh sahab
[his name was suresh]
suresh-to summet banna kya socha apne in dono ke bare mein
summet-ji mujhe to lagta hai ki jitni jaldi ho sake in dono ki shaadi kar deni chahiye aap kya sochte ho
suman-haan bhaisahab ab hum jald se jald tia ko aoni bahut banana chahte hai
suresh-haan sach mein vo bahut achi hai aur bahut sundar bhi
sumet-to phir thik hai hum kal ki tariq te kal lenge kyu ashi aur yuvi tum log kya kehte ho

but ashi and yuvi were not there they were in the garden busy romancing

suman-bhai sahab abhi hame unhe disturb nahi karna chahiye
summet-haan bhabhi aap thik kehti hai
suresh-to phir te raha hum kal ki panditji ko bulake shaadi ki tariq teh kar lete hai

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