tia and ranveer

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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey ppl i hope u like it ,so here it goes

tia-oh tias god hum sab ko school je bahar nikal diya gaya hai ab hum kya karenge

ranveer-tia tension mat lijiye sab thik ho jayega.

ashi-hey bhaggu ye jumbo bhi na usne hame school se expel hi kar diya.

yuvi-agar dad ko pata chal gaya to he will kill me ab mein kya karunga,mera music khatam ho jayega dad mujhe politician bana denge

ashi-yuvi tention mat lo sab thik ho jayega.

tia-pappa oh tias god vo tia se bahut gusa ho jayenge.

ranveer-haan vo to hai par ab hame sanganer jana hoga

tia-ashi-yuvi=kya? kya tum pagal ho gaye ho

tia-ranveer tum aise nahi jaa sakte hum sab ko tumhari zaroot hai aur tia ko bhi.puhleez mat jao na

ashi-haan takhur timbo thik ke rahi hai.aur shayad hum ab remix par aur zyada dhyan de sakte hai

now wait for the next part pls write your comments

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Posted: 19 years ago
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😳 pls cont soon,its really rocking.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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ok so ppl my name is rushi and here is goes

yuvi-what?ashi have u gone mad remix phir se pehle hi hum hum expel ho gaye hai aur tum phir se band shuru karne ki baat kar rahi ho 😡

ashi=duh-uh yuvi tum itne darpok kyu ho.tum hamesha pappa's boy hi rahoge

ranveer-ashi yuvi just stop it for now pehle hum sab mushkil mein hai aur tum log.

tia-haan ashi tia thinks hum sabko abhi ghar jaana chahiye.
and just then sumeet ahuja comes

tia-pappa aap yaha.

sumeet ahuja-tia tumhe school se expel kar diya gaya hai.right or wrong.

ranveer-sir vo [but before he could complete]

sumeet ahuja-ranveer tum abhi kuch mat bolo tia mein tumse kuch puch raha hu.

tia-[getting scared]haa..haa..haan papa

just then sonia ray comes and come near sumeet.

sumeet ahuja-aap janti hai in logo ko school se expel kar diya gaya aur vo bhi us band ke vajah se

so here it ends
pls write your comments and i hope u like it
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Posted: 19 years ago
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its too good..but plzzzz write longer parts...plzzzz.
so that we can enjoy reading it..
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hey Rushi,

welcome to RF/IF

im Divya

ur fanfic relly rox 😳

continue soon 😳

Divya
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hi rushi this is nikki
welcome to rf
its really nice
cont soon 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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welcome Rushi. and ur fic is really good. continue soon..............
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Posted: 19 years ago
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I lub it...please cont. soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey thanx ppl so here it goes
sonia ray-u think will she take all this seriouslyna..u kukreja i know ke hamare bacche expel ho gaye hai lekin they stil have a option ,un ke pass unkoa remix hai.aur vaise bhi mein to mamum ke maurya se bahar nikalte hi mein use fame world mein dalna chahti thi
sumeet ahuja-what?aap kaisi maa hai jo apni beti ke school se nikalne jane par bhi serious nahi hai.
ashi-but uncle mama thik hi keh rahi hai na we all still have a option.hum log apne pairon pe khud khade ho sakte hai.
sumeet ahuja-stop it anvesha mein apni beti ko ek famous fashion designer bana chata hu.meine use band mein rehne ki permission isliye di thi taki vo apni life abhi enjoy kare aur bad mein apni padai kare.nut now no more masti.,ab tia ko sirf padna padega.
tia-but pappa aap tia ki baat to suniye
summet ahuja-tia tum chu raho tum america jaa rahi ho apna course karne aur ranveer tum kaha ja rehe ho.
ranveer-[with a very sad face]sir hum..hum.. vapas sanganer ja rehe hai.
tia-ranveer tum ja rahe ho,par kyu ranveer kya tumhe tia acchi nahi lagti 😭 .
ranveer-[aiso crying]nahi tia aisi baat nahi hai hum apse apni jaan se bhi jyada pyar karte hai.lekin hamari sanganer mein bhi bahut sari zimedariya hai,hume unhe pura karna hai aur humne hamari maa se bhi vada kiya tha hum unke pass maurya khatam ho te ki aajayenge.
tia-aur jo vada tumne tia se kiya what about that u dehati tumne tia ko kya samja hai.
ranveer-i am sry tia par hume jana hoga aur vaisi bhi aap america jaa hi rahi hai na aur haan tia hum ek din zaroor milenge.
and ranveer goes to sanganer

sumeet takes tia with him leaving ashi,sonia and yuvi

ashi is back to her house with sonia

par bechara yuvi who doesnt know how to face his dad after all this
he is in a great mess.but some how he reaches home.

precap-yuvi stepping in his house and his dad about to smash his face
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey guya i know this was short but as the story goes on it will also grow big and yes there is lots and lots to come so pls write your comments 😉

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