why does it happen in luv - Page 2

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Posted: 19 years ago
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too good. continue soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#12
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz sonam plzzzzzz post fast ant wait 4 the next part
if u dont na i will..............not talk to you (sorry culd not get annything better?) 😉

tia
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Posted: 19 years ago
#13
awesum fic sonam 👏 plz continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thanx a lot guys
n ya my fic is about the lives of both the couple
so i m posting the 2nd part:

part 2

ranveer is in canada having a very big n beautiful bunglow in which he keeps many photoframes
those photoframes contain pics of ira n their son rudra

ranveer plans to take his son to india
india-the land of culture n love
india-where every person thinks about others

india - mera des mera watan
ranveer was saying all this to rudra

he plans to go to mumbai first coz there he met her true love tia ahuja
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ashi-yuvi...........
yuviiiiiiii..........
where r u ????????
yuvi comes from behind n holds her from her waist
ashi-MR.Yuvraj Dev may i plz know aap kahhan the????
yuvi-ya sure plz ask
ashi-yuviiiii..........
yuvi-alrite alrite
tia ka phone tha usse baat kar raha tha
ashi-watttttt????????????
she turns back
ashi-yuvi tia ne call kiya n tumne mujhe phone hi nahi diya????
i said u that kabhi bhi uska phone aaye toh let me talk first but no tum sirf apni chalate ho...........
u r so selfish . tum meri baat kabhi nahi sunoge na

yuvi was hearing all this n was luking deep into herr eyes n then he started smiling.
ashi- hey kya hua??
why r u laughing ?????
tum kisi ki respect nahi karte
nahi merin nahi time ki........
yuvi-hold on ashi
enuf now
sweethrt woh tia itni hurrily baat kar rahi thi ki as i was just cuming to give u the phone she disconnected.........

ashi felt very sorry coz she did very wrong wid yuvi
ashi-oh no !
yuvi i m so sorry
i didnt knew that it wasnt ur mistake n still i shouted so badly on u
i m sorry ............
yuvi- its ok but sirf sorry se kaam nahi chalega alrite?
ashi- then wat do u want??
yuvi-u r intelligent enuf to understand it.......
ashi understood n as she was just going to kiss him
a crying voice came
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she was rite there on the bed sleeping so beautifully
just like a sleeping beauty or shud i say just like ashi.........................
but suddenly that pretty sleeping beauty started crying
his parents came running to her to see wat has happened...........
* * * * * * * * * * * *
ashi was really worried but yuvi wasnt
yuvi tok her daughter in his hands n took her to their kitchen garden
it is beautifully covered with green grass all over wid dew drops on it
it seemed more pretty in early morning............
her crying started faintin g away n atlast her smile found its destination; her lips n her face.....
she started laughing so sweetly that her laugh filled their house wid joy n happiness


hope this part was long enuf .
comments r required plzzzzzzzzzzzzz


luv
sonam
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Posted: 19 years ago
#15
it was sooooo cuteeee
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Posted: 19 years ago
#16
Awesome fic... i loved it.... plz do continue... me and every1 waitin...
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Posted: 19 years ago
#17
awesome fic....plzzz contyinue.......asap 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#18
ur fic is really very sweet yaar just read the entire fic now
it's very very godd continue soon na plzzzzzzzzz
Edited by SINDHU586 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#19
thanx
thank u sooooooooooooo much 4 liking my fic
i nvr knew that my first fic will get soooooooooooo many replies 😆

by da way guys i m working on my next part n i will post it as soon as i complete it
plzzzzzzzzz dont mind ha 😊

luv
sonam
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Posted: 19 years ago
#20
hey wait a sec
i havent got ne reply from dia n krits ...........
guys is my fic that bad ki mujhe mere bacche reply hi nahin karenge????? 😡 😡 😡

sorry dia n kriti
now ur mommy will not disturb u for nething


byeeeeeeeeee 😕

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