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Posted: 19 years ago
hey honey_13( i m really sorry i donno ur name) 😛 😛 😛

actually ashi didnt cry. it was tia who cried out
n ashi cried after reading tia's letter coz she was hurt.................. 😭 😭
n ya for ur second question:
actually i had to start my fic so i wanted a story
n the best idea which came into my mind was this only 😳 😳 😳

so hope my answers r satisfying . n i m sorry if i really didnt give u the 'worth it' answers 😳 😳 😳

luv
sonam 😳 😳
Edited by sonam1509 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
n ya guys now i m writing a small part
hope u all like it
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Posted: 19 years ago

part-10

this day ashi, yuvi n asmi shared the best moments of their lives

asmi slept in the car wen they were returning back

yuvi- ashi, my baby is looking so cute na

ashi- ya ya she is

yuvi- ashi i have a plan

ashi- wat plan MR. Dev???????

yuvi- tonight i feel like taking MRS. Dev out with me to a romantic place................

ashi- but she is not ready so plz move to our house only plzzzzzzzzz

yuvi- okay

but yuvi stoppped the car in front of sonia's house

ashi- yuvi tum mumma ka ghar pe kyun ja rahe ho???????

yuvi- meri jaan tumhe jald hi pata chal jayega

yuvi took asmi n left her on sonia's house

ashi was still waiting in the car '

yuvi- hey ashi i m back

ashi- tell me where is my shona???????

yuvi- aapki shona aapki mumma ke paas hai

ashi- wattttttt???????? yuvi tumhara yehi plan tha kya????

yuvi- smart gal............ jaldi samajh aa gaya

ashi looked at him in anger but then she smiled coz she knew that yuvi is like that only...........

ashi- ok fine . toh batao kahaan ja rahe hain hum ???????

yuvi- jaha aap chahe..............

ashi n yuvi after decicing a place went to a beautiful beach

that beach looked damn pretty at night n was a romantic place for a romantic couple to go..........................

yuvi- ashi here is that place about which i was talking

ashi- not bad . so shall we move out of our car???????????

yuvi n ashi moved to that beach hand -in -hand

yuvi gently kissed on ashi's hand

ashi- yuvi yeh kya kar rahe ho???????

yuvi stood up n held her from her waist n just pulled her in his arms . he kissed on her neck moving up to her chin n then finally to her lips .

yuvi just looked at her face n kissed on ashi's face

ashi slightly moved . yuvi left her

ashi ran away blushing n yuvi running behind her

ashi n yuvi both after running for sumtime fell on the floor with ashi on yuvi

then they were lost in each other's love

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guys this part has ended n i know this part was long enough to satisfy u all😆

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Posted: 19 years ago
plz comment plzzzzzzzzzzzz
n ya after 2-3 parts my fic will end
so just reply for this part plzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 19 years ago
really nice Sonam Mumma 👏

continue soon

Luv - Divz Dotty
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Posted: 19 years ago
granny!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! its awsoem just loved it
i just cant wait to no what are the couples gona do on the beach all alone
and haan btw dont even think of ending it warna i will kill u
and haan plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont it fast 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
ya sonam..rits is right plzzzzzz dont end ur fic..or else i will also kill u.and it was awesum plzzzzz cont soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
granny,i am so s***y 4 replying sooo late,pls pls 4give me nd yeah,the part was sooooooooooooooo romantic 👏
pls post the next part asap.
luv-gullu 😳 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
Mumma, plzzzzz dont end the fanfic pleejj 😳 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: divya_92

Mumma, plzzzzz dont end the fanfic pleejj 😳 😳

yeah granny,plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz😳😃

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