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Posted: 19 years ago
"angels...tia pe kaunsa lipstick accha lag raha hai??"asked tia tryin all the colours in the spectrum
"tia tum jo bhi lagaogi stunning lagogi"replied pri
"haan..har saal ki tarah back 2 coll party main tia aur uske angels ko sab se best dikhna hai"
generaly by this time ashi wud hv been booking a bed for herself in d insane asylum..coz listenin 2 soo much converstaion over a single shade of shockin pink wud hv killed the xisting neurons in her brain..
but 2 day was nt like other days.....she was lost in her own world...
tia nd her angels clustered curiously as if they were seein an alien...
"how tacky....is punk ne toh ek hi earring hi pehna hai"
ashi looked up in surprise...she fingered her ear 2 find one earring missing...
she blushed as she thot of d onli place were it cud b....in the hands of her ....
tia nd her angels left d room leaving behind a strong trail of perfume nd a dreamy ashi..
m.p nd vrinda barged in..
"ashi madam is waitin fer her personal invi or wat??"
"cmon ashi..however much maurya sucks....bak 2 coll partys r gr88"
they pushed ashi 2 change her dress....
she was in there so long..tht they started wondering if she was changin a dress or making one
finally she came out..nd their jaws dropped..she looked just plain stunning
her shoulder length red hair was left in waves tht highlited the blush on her cheeks...
her dress was the colour of sea foam.....light frills tht floated around her ...she looked like an angel descended frm heaven...
"tia is soo gonna get a heart attack wen she ses u"said m.p grinning with anticipation
little did she know tht ashi had dressed up nt fer tia ..but sumone special..coz she knew whoever he was he had 2 b a student of maurya nd he wud b in the party...
mebbe the fates wud re connect them...



"Since I kissed his loving lips of wine
The thing that bothers me is that I like it fine
Hey hey set me free
Stupid Cupid stop picking on me"


ashi felt as if mandy moore was singing abt her....
as she walked in ...even the loud music could nt drown out the gasps as she entered...
xclamations of pain followed as ppl pinched themselves 2 find out if it was a dream...
"ohh tias godd..help tia..tia is fainting..oxygen oxygen"
ashi pouted in dissaproval ..nd the whole rooms eyes were on her lips the colour of blood....
onli one person reamined unaffected.....
he streched lookin at his watch with a glass of wine in his hands....he wished he could go back 2 his room nd play his guitar...music tht brought images of angels nd rain..
the party went on all nite
ashi danced with growin dissapointmemt as she realised none of the boys she had danced with was the one she was lukin fer
it was d creak of dawn by the time everyone stumbled back to their rooms...
ashi..unable 2 contain her tears...walked outside....
it was then she heard the haunting strains of the guitar...........accompanied by a coarse but strong voice singing...


Edited by hellraiser - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey sindhu

yaar itne achhe writing skills kahaan se aaye ????????? 😆

its just simply outstanding yaar.............

plz continue soon..........
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Posted: 19 years ago
yeah ive m,ade d record first comment on everypart 😃 komal cudnt u hab waited 😭😡
hey bhaggu uv gonna sing 😳
about comments well i always say d smae things but but now im running out of vocab just like tia went a few parts ago 😆 😉
ive already told u dat u top my top 5 list of authurs even leaving behinf jkr 😳 coz nobody can write as ashita said romatic as well as sad nd hilarios parts as well as u do u just simply rock 😳 😳 😳
Edited by uvcraziestfan - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww


its mind blowin
awsem
bestest
what ro say
it just rockzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 19 years ago
its brilliant as usual....... u r a master in tia-ashi lines.....their thoughts r interpreted so dam well 😆 😃

jus post quickly dear...cant wait
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Posted: 19 years ago
awesome sindhu 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏.....I am falling short of vocab too.....so all I will say is plz continue soon 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
Awesome part as usual Sindhu 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
Hey awesome part sindhu! 👏

I loved it completely! continue soon!
Eloquent thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
Hey awesome part sindhu! 👏

I loved it completely! continue soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
sid i hav no words to tell u how much i loved the last three parts n im very sorry 4 posting this late..... the part b4 this was the best .....n i relly want to tell u how much i loved it bt im nt being able to figure out the appropriate words to express ...... its such an awesome fic.....each n every part is so awesomely written ......thers everything tht i'v always wanted to see in the show......this fic is the best!!! 👏 👏 👏

cont soon..... 🤗


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