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omg omg..it was beautiful!!!!!i luv it iluv it.plzzzzzz continue asap.i luved d 7th part.it was so wellwritten n d 8th part was lovly 2.now ashi's gonna c uv right?i luv u.......for writting this awesome fic 👏

mind blowin......this is awesum...u rock!!!!!pls pls pls pls pls continue asap!!!

awesome yaar......i read both the parts.....and i must say.......they are truely truely.....rocking...... 👏

how do u write sooooo well....... 😳

must be some magic......isn't it????????????.... 😊

hey,where r u yaar? 😃 pls cont soon.cant wait 😳

awesum fic
ur fic is having everything:
from love to hatred
from comedy to tragedy
from joy to sorrows
n everything....................
but to explain every reaction is a superb act
u write really very well yaar

w8ing 4 ur next part

luv
sonam

PART 9

she stood there listenin 2 his music..
watchin the wind curl her loving fingers thru his curly hair.....
he looked up...a disdainful look on his face
"wat dyu want wacko?"he asked with cold irritation written on the lines of his face....
a chill crept into her heart at the sound of his tone..
she shook her head mutely nt trustin herself 2 speak..
she felt like kickin her self...this was what d anvesha banerjee ray had come 2...
cryin like a school girl fer sum boy....whu din even remember when he kissed whom
she walked away feelin like a fool...sure he thot so 2...
but she din care wat he thot...did she...
but how cud she tell her stupid heart tht he was nt wrth it..tht he din think she was worth it...
"dun cry"she told her eyes in a small voice..
as she ran her fingers thru her silken hair...she felt sumthin missin..
then she realised with a shock tht the one earring she had worn ever since tht one night was missing...
she spotted a shadow on the ground...
she turnd back slowly...he stood motionless ...
in the palm of his hand...a silver sumthing glittered innocently..
"why dint u tell me"he whispered...
"u wudnt hv blived it"tears of relief on her cheeks...
he hugged her tight....not wanting 2 let go..
she sobbed as the pain..the happiness....nd the disbelief overwhemed her...


"dude...i need ur help..theres this party and-"
"mayb later sid..im busy"yuvi winked...
a grinning ashi shifted to a more comfortable position in his arms..
he waited till they turned a deserted corner..
he pushed her aginst a wall..nd began kissing her...
she kissed bak just as passionately
she was nt one of those blushing girls whu refused a kiss while desperately wanting one...
she knew wat she wanted ...nd now dat she had it..she wanted 2 enojy it..
a sudden thot crossed her mind..
she reluctantly pushed away yuvi
"yuvii...hun...wat abt meher?"
"who meher?"he asked tryin 2 kiss her agin...
she giggled as the kisses on her neck tickled her...
"meher...ur GIRL FRND"
"ohh her...dun wry..ill send her an sms.."
"thts rude"
"ill send a smiley wid it"
she cudnt help laughing..she punched him jokingly
a bell rang loudly...causing yuvi 2 curse all bells into oblivion...
"lets skip dis class babes....go bak 2 d shed..nd u know.."
"i wish v cud..but-"
"ok den...lets go..but i get 2 sit wid u..nd mebbe v can get naughty in class"
"maybe"
he placed an arm around her waist....nd dey walked 2 class..

yipee!!!d storys nt adhoori kahani nemore lub ju loads sid for bringin em together 😳 but dis line
"dun cry"she told her eyes in a small voice
really made me cry 😭 its so expressing 😭 but yuvi saved da day how cud he see his preety lady cry 😳 dats my fav part till now lub juu 😳 d last part bout meher 😆 😆 😆
but temme how du u noe ashi soo welll
u go into d skin of ashi nd d results r soo beutiful
i loved dis part too
she was nt one of those blushing girls whu refused a kiss while desperately wanting one...
she knew wat she wanted ...nd now dat she had it..she wanted 2 enojy it..


in all dis part gets 10 to d power of umm infinity frm ten 😃 it just rocked like u urs a rockstar for me 👏

hey sindhu it was nice as usual!!!actually more than nice fantastic......i've possibly used all the vocab i know so 4give me 😆 😉

waitin waitin.......4 more

Awesome Sindhu 👏 You really are one of the best writers in the forum, this part was sooooooooo romantic 😳 Plz continue soon.

it is awesome 👏 soooooooooooo romantic 😳 nd soooooooooooo well-written 😃 😃 pls cont soon