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Soumya Sen

@Mrs.Brett Lee

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Posted: 19 years ago

#61

Omg how romantic. He praised me while I was performing Right Here Right now 😳 . Hehe mommy great fan fiction 👏 👏 😳 . It was really very very cute. U r really good at it. Thanks for pairing me with Abhishek but u gabe my other hubbies Sid and Eijoo to others 😭 😭 but after writing such a romantic fiction I thanku with all my heart 😛

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shanrox

@shanrox

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Posted: 19 years ago

#62

so now they will have to fulfill our wishes right!!ok my wish,can uplz make a siggy for me of ashi.saying ashi rocks!!

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@ashiandyuvirock

Voyager

Posted: 19 years ago

#63

Thaanchew Mommy[>:D<} 😳 Im elated to be paired up with Sid 😳 😛

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hellraiser

@hellraiser

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Posted: 19 years ago

#64

howw sweet.... 😳 😳
nd dat 2 suchhhh a bigg fic..i cud nvr hv written so much even if i sit fer one whole year 2 write 😕 😕
u gt my talent of writing fics nanand ji 😳 😳 😳
id fic was relly cutee 😃 😃

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shelly

@uvcraziestfan

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Posted: 19 years ago

#65

one more place dat i can remind myself of...was a place in madhya pradesh where stayed d young shivali....oops...shelly....she didnt like herself bein called dat....wen for d first time she saw him he had not liked him but then slowly she started likin him....n wanted to meet him.....n she met uv....with d help of her maasi wen she went to mumbai...n there they met uv n shelly for d first time face to face....shelly had luvd him but uv after spendin a whole day with her considard dat she cud b a gud frnd of his.....n this started of with frndship....they started meetin again n again n very often....n then one evening wen they were havin coffee in barista...uv just popped up d question to leave shelly startled....n asked her "wud u like to b my date for today n tomm. n forever..."...there shelly's dream had come true n uv n shelly were datin each other......

hey bhaggu dis was d sweetest thing in d whole ifc 😳 coz it was bout me 😆 n uv 😳 thanks prii
i also read d whole fic n it was very nicely written imaginativ en cute 😳

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hellraiser

@hellraiser

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Posted: 19 years ago

#66

na ya..u hv 2 fulfill all our wishes..
so mine iss.....
win this comp fer ur bahbhi 🤗 🤗

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25165

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Posted: 19 years ago

#67

mads danced around her room…she was never soo happy ever b4 in her life…she had just received a mail from..raj singh arora..mads said sogtly under her breath…
ding dong..the computer sang..she rushed to it… half expecting it to be raj…she frowned and smiled…it was tia…hmmm…hi tia..mads typed on yahoo messenger…she leaned back to c wat tia wud say…may be tia wud rant abt her fics…or raj… B-O-R-I-N-G mads thot…she narrowed her eyes raj was hers …she knew tia loved him too…but still raj was hers…if onli tia wud understand…..then…
hey mads—lets do a voice chat naah..please..i wanna hear ur voice..please please please….
mads smiled..yeh tia bhi naah…sometimes she is sooo childish..
unwillingly she got up from the chair and started looking for the mic….she knew tia wud not leave her alone until and unless she heard her voice…as she got her mic out.. from underneath the books of medicine her hand hit against a picture…she took it out..and stared at her…the buzzes tia kept on givin cudnot break this reverie…r
she fondly run her hands thru the picture..Rajeev…hmm…she had loved him but some how wen she came to know he was dating aamna …her heart broke…she knew she cud not match upto aamna…wat she never knew that her heart…the thing dat really mattered was much more beautiful than amna….y just amna…mads was one of the very few ppl who had a beautiful heart……..

aparna sat in her car………she was comin back from her college…she touched the rose some senior had given her…she picked up the rose …how she wished someone else gave it to her…driverji gari rokiye zara…mein abhi aati hoon..she got down from the car…she crossed glass pane and suddenly checked herself in the mirror…she usually never did that but now a days even wen she went out to buy bread from the opposite grocery shop she made sure she looked pretty..and she always did …just incase she met …….
.her reflection satisfied her …..
bhai saab ek aapy fizz dena…

shweta wiped the make up from her face….she watched as raj and priya playfully fought with each other..out of no where karan came and started to wet them with a water hose….she smiled ruefully….some where down the line she had lost her youth…she knew she looked young yet still…her success and fame had given her everything …but…happiness…sometimes she did not know where her marriage went wrong…she thot she wud say bye before leavin the sets but she did not..they wud not miss her…after all they were not really close to her….they were frnds but the warmth priya , raj and karan shared …shweta did not..maybe she never let ne one into her world so that no one cud hurt her….

Shriya combed her hair quickly…she had to get ready to watch rdb for the 20th time….no the movie cudnot bore her….everytime she saw it..she fell in love..with sid..onve again…

Mani got off the plane …..here she was in mexico….she was never so happy in her life… she had got into the college she wanted to get into…she smiled..yes..mexico..the name reminded her of someone else….stupid mani…she thot to her self…Christopher uckerman cant be waitin for her here rite?!! She smiled….hmm he was sooooooo sweet…

It was late…..eijaz rushed to his care…shootin for kya hoga nimmo ka was tuff..his eyes were red from wearin those grrn contacts thru out the day….great!! eijaz snorted that's all that was left….to happen..he had left his car inside and locked the door!now wat??all the ppl on the sets had left too…

Avani put her books away …she got up and dressed….fightin with her mom gave her a headache…but she felt so claustrophobic sittin in her house day in and day out….and after her boards …wen she was supposed to have fun she was stuck in raipur…….how she wished she cud go to mumbai but then she cud not really run away…she ran her hand thru her lovely lustrous hair and ran out of the house….

Tada tada tada tada tada-- aparna sang as she mixed the flour with water ..it was raining outside and her parents had gone out..she was making rotis for herself……she wanted to do something different….something she had neva done b4…..she wanted to take a break from studies and yes daydreams of arjun…so she decided to cook….nothing great…just a roti and rajma…but well it was eventful..she opened the tap a bit too fast so the whole water gushed back and wet her…then she put 12 tablespoons of flour to make one roti and two glasses o water…something was wrong with the mixture aparna thot…but wat??was the mixture a bit too soggy??naah..
Aparna wiped her dirty hands on her dress ,,then pushed a lock of hair back…a bit of flour stuck to her hair..but it was ok…she wud soon have a bath…it was raining outside heavily..wen the door bell rang…

Sid looked out his car…fame was so fickle..some how in the battle for fame he had lost his frnds…wat was left were competitors ….there was noone who loved him really..truly madly deeply..

Shweta looked ahead of her….her head was achin..she was focused …she had to buy the groceries and then go home…she had a bad day..kinda like those days wen nothing was rite….the over enthusiastic salegirl handed her ..her packet…as shweta walked on ..suddenly the packet tore and all her groceries fell…that was it..the last straw…the worst possible ending to a bad day…she cud not go on…she just stood and stared at the fallen stuff….suddenly a guy came out of nowhere and
Started picking up it up….he got everything together…he had a bag in his hand ..he emptied the books from it and put the groceries in the bag…he got up and smiled at shweta…here u go..offering the bag to her..this wont tear for sure…he added with a smile…he had lovely brown eyes, a soft smile,a lil dimple on his left cheek…he was cute but it was his eyes that touched shweta..there was respect in his eyes..love she had seen…desire too..but respect ?? no this was the first time…he looked at her and smiled again..r u ok?? He asked with a certain innocence… with a certain care…and shweta cud no longer take it..she broke down in front of the boy….hey hey ..y r u cryin ..did I say something wrong???no …shweta mumbled…I am ok…
The boy led shweta by her hand and made her sit down on a bench..he took out his hanky and offered it ….. there be a good girl and blow your nose ..yes that's the way..now stop cryin…ya that's the spirit..shweta looked up…it was years since someone had actually pampered and baby talked her like this….she smiled at him…
Thanx…she muffled…
I am veonal..he said holdin his hand out..
Hey were nt u the guy who wrote that letter for me on IF ??
Veo blushed ya..i was him..as in that was me..i mean I wrote the letter..
Shweta I don't know y u r cryin but I want u to know that ur tears hurt me a lot…shweta as I little I know abt u…I feel this weird respect for u ..for ur strength…had I been shweta gulati..i wud nt have been able to take in wat u have been thru…I don't care whether u r 30 or not..all I care abt is dat u r a woman in the true sense..and I admire that….i care abt u …as in the prsn u r…not wat other ppl say…u r beautiful both inside and outside…and I respect u…
Shweta looked up and gave her first true smile in years…wat this 19 year old boy had said touched her heart..
U know veo no one ever said stuff like this to me…I was feelin like a loser today and u really made me sure of myself..u made feel good abt myself…I don't know wat to say ..thank u seems so less…u made me smile today..no one earlier ever did…
Veo gave a lil smile….ur smile was enuff …
Will u com with me to my house?? I wud love to get to know u better…veo smiled..his wish had come true..he did not want to marry shweta..he wanted her happy and she was now…he wanted her to smile once just for once…he wanted her to think abt him just once..and today that had happened…
No shweta …. U don't need to know me better…know me as a prsn who made u smile…..i don't want u to know me just remember me…
Sayin that veo left.his eyes full of love and his heart overflowin with happiness.he had finally got his wish…

Aprna stared it was Him…sidhanth stood out in the rain…looking at the girl in front…she was pretty but it was that I-don't –care attitude abt her …the fact that she did not care she was looking pretty or not…can I come in /???its raining..
yes yes..aparna struggled to get the words out…
he walked in…u r really into appy fizz r nt u??pointing at the crates of empty appy fizz bottles..
u wont one???
Umm okay..
As aparna went to get the appy fizz she looked at herself in the mirror…ewww there was flour all over ..she looked yucks…aparna grabbed a bottle went to sidhanth and handed it over..wishin that the earth wud open up nd swallow her…
Hey that's my fave song…sidhanth said…
Aparna looked up..it was her fave too..in fact she was waitin for that song to come as the mp3 played on….
Will u dance??
Me????
No I was askin the cushion…sry just kiddin…
He led aparna by her hand and slowly they started dancing…
Aparna looked into sindhant's eyes and she saw love and a woman ..not a perfect woman but a beautiful woman…she saw herself…looking prettier than ever..covered with flour…
Tell u wat lets go for a bike ride tomaorrow and den a movie day after tomorroe..then dinner the next day ..then lunch after that ..and ya then…will u go with me??
Aparna blushed..i am aparna..and I wud love it…

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh..
Mani screamed she was lost in her day dreams..she did not c the car comin from the other side….then suddenly a strong hand grabbed her from behind ….and pushed fell and cut herself but she was safe…
Cant u c..??the boy asked
My new dress…my brand new dress…huh!!! My leg omg its bleeding..
Ok..chill..let me take u home..
Mani looked up….it was chris ukerman…
She was stunned…
R u ok??chris asked really curious,…
I am lost…r u real??
Omg she has lost it..i shud not have pushed her..
Chris pickd her up and slowly carried her to his car..
He drove her to his house and tended to her wounds..he cudnot take his eyes off her face..there was a certain innocence whice thses days girls lacked…r u ok now…
I am fine..
R u new here??
Yes I am ..i just arrived
Great ..i ll show u around…frnds??
She shook his hands…frnds ya…I am mani..
I am chris…
Wanna have dinner tonite wimmi??
Mani just blushed but her eyes told chris everything..and with her at the very moment chris fell in love…

Do u need help?parul asked…
Yes..eijaz replied..
I need to get home..
Ok I ll drive u home……
Parul was shocked with her good luck….
She loved this guy and….he was here finally..
She drove him home..
Will u come in??
Ok…parul said softly
The room was in a mess…
Parul hated messes..
She started cleaning it up..eijaz kept refusuin but…she kept cleanin…his rooms..his refrigirator..his kitchen..3 hrs later parul finished and she sat down….
U done??
Ya..how can u live in such a mess..it was like eewwee nad yes I made food for u so lets eat..
Wen did u make food??
Wen I was cleanin…
Wat???eijaz was confused and smitten completely with the goddess in front of him …. He had no clue neone cud be sooo multitasking…
Well..i am eijaz u r??
Parul..
Awesome..u rock
Thanx!
Ummm can I have ur no. please??I want to keep in contact with u…forever…eijaz whispered
And parul happily smiled..her love story was coming ot life..

Avani stared at the famaliar face in front of her..it was ……it was karan…wat r u doin in raipur??
Karan was taken aback …nothing much…I was born here…
Oh..i am avani and I am huge fan of yours…
Really???
Ya..i love ur smile ..sometimes I feel u smile just for me..sometimes wen u cry I feel soo sad…I know u must be thinking I am soo stupid naah..but u know ever nite I wish tat I can meet u…on karvachaut I keep vrats for u…sry I guess I am wasting u r time..i ll go now..
No don't please…stay…tell me something more abt urself…wat u said touched me…tell u wat…lets go out---have something and talk okay??

Shriya was cryin ..her rdb cd deid…the cd she loved was ruined…she kept cryin……. Cryin she left her house..she reached the sea shore…sat on a rock and slowly cried…cried for the love she cud neva have..
The sniffling sound distracted sid..he turned and saw a girl and his heart went out to her…he cud some how relate her…he felt he cud connect with her pain..he walked over…
Hey u …r u ok??
Shriya looked up….omg..its u..
Ya its me I guess so….it was me till I lat checked
Shriya giggled ….then stared at sid in disbelief….
Have u watched rdb?????
Yes…infact I was watchin it for the 30th time wen my cd got ruined..
Sayin that shriya started cryin again…
Hey hey hey…lets go and watch it for the 31st time at my house okay???
He led her to his house….and together over a bowl of popcorn they discussed rdb themselves their dreams their pains….and yes watched rdb

Mads danced around the hall with Rajeev….the ring that he gave her shined on her finger….she closed her eyes and recalled how they had met …she had visited one of rajeev's sets to catch a glimpse of him..he had spotted her..her inner beauty…as he got ready for the next shot his mind wandered away to that girls eyes that spoke so many things…though she said nothing he heard each beat of her heart…then he saw her again at a mall in pune after 2 months wen he went there for his vacations…he talked to her..the became frnds and den more than dat…he loved her more than he ever loved aamna…his break up with amna was so hard…but mads beauty outshined aamna's and he forgot abt her…he propesed her and she accepted…and dey were happy….

Mads smiled as she typed away on yahoo…telling tia wat Rajeev and she had done that day..then Rajeev called and she had to go offline!
Tia looked at her screen ,,,she sighed and switched her comp off..
Somewhere in mumbai..raj switched his comp on…he opened his mail account ..there was 72 mails waitin 4 him…
His eyes scrolled down…reply ..otherwise I keep mailin u…read the subject
Raj laughed …seein the sender's name "fate" he uttered…..

Edited by fate - 19 years ago

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25165

Hibernated

Posted: 19 years ago

#68

yes thats the india forum ramayan...i know it sux..sry i had a headache i tried to all the ppl i cud...buut if u r not there i am really sry...please dont be upset..and ya the last part...ii cud nt help it..well i thot after doin sooo much of work like watchin nimmo to c who eijaz actually was..and den rajeev den...
i actually watched rdb for this thing to c who sid was...
i thot i shud get a reward so i did the last thing as a lil reward..watcha say???

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Divya

@divya_92

Rocker

Posted: 19 years ago

#69

it was awesome Tia (fate) n Pri...

i luved ur fanfics!

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exquisite gal

@exquisite gal

Inactive

Posted: 19 years ago

#70

coool but dont do shanrox's task or ne1 else's who has given a task in round 2 til now .. they didnt read rules properly ..

the rules said that they must write"i wud vote fr the participant who wud.............."

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