One Charm Forever.(Fic)Last Part Pg53 - Page 4

NO ONE likes it?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?

ok i think i will discontinue..plzz if i get no more comments i will stop it and tell the mods to lock the topic..

please post even if its bad

Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr....... that pierre cardin..or who ever he was.......i din like him!
Anyway shreyasi no more suspense...conti fast!!!!!
And plz dont dare to disconti it OK!!!!!!

i just read da 3 prts
srry no comments in french coz i know spanish 😆 😆

but i luv it...but i dont lyk this french character
nice of u 2 plan ashi uv meeting in paris since its da city of love(i m rite,no??)
neways cont soon plz

CYA
CHARZ 😉 😃

don't u even think about discontinuing because its too good and please continue fast can't wait.

ohhhh......... such a beautiful description....... 👏

its really cute.!!!

please continue soon!

Part 4

"Bon nuit…Madame. [Good-Night]Give me some peace." Lucky for him his patient didn't understand English. He was a cosmetic surgeon.. and had agreed for a hair follicle treatment on his very irritating client.

"So dude, If you heed me, stay with me tonight. Hum baithke baatein karenge.. you know about the old days."

"Par bana.. humein to hotel jaana hai.. and day after tomorrow hum Brussels jayenge.. aap akele.."

"Chill dude, what are buddys for? We'll have fune ok.. the Dudes' night out!"

"Thik hai bana, jaisi aapki marzi."

"Great. So ranveer dude, tell me tia kaisi hai?"

" Tia achchi hai bana. Pata hai uske bina humari zindagi bahut adhuri si hai.. uske pehle humein pata hi nahi tha.. pyaar kya hota hai?……………………"

And his voice trailed away leaving Yuvraj Dev, Paris's most renowned cosmetic surgeon and Yashwant Dev's son in his own world. As Ranveer talked of Tia and Remix.. he too thought of the other girl, with red streaks and an amazing way to exclaim "Duh-uh".. the girl who was the jaan of remix.. the girl for whom he had once been prepared to sacrifice his life and love…

The girl.. who could make every burden light by her comfort, every infinite ocean of pain softer by her words and who was capable of lifting the world on her little finger and change everything,

thx. to everyone reading my fan-fic.. but plzzzz tell me if its bad cuz i am not getting comments..
I pormise i won't bore you if you hate it but plzz tell..

and mitali.. thxx for the amazing pm 😳 😳

👏 its amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏

no one is reading??

everyone is online but noone likes it?? at least you can tell me to discontinue naa..