A TWIST IN THE TALE...(updated pg.33) - Page 12

NOW TIA-RANVEER PART..........
IT IS THE DAY WHEN THEY ARE SUPPOSED TO GO OUT FOR A WHOLE DAY
TIA IS GETTING READY WHEN SHYLA ENTERS HER ROOM..
TIA-HAA..SHYLA..HOW DARE YOU ENTER TIA'S ROOM
SHY-TIA..GETTING READY...WELL MAIN BHI CHAL RAHI HOON YOU KNOW..
TIA-WHAT
SHY-YES I AM GOING TO FOLLOW YOU TIA..AUR AGAR TUM SOCH RAHI HO..OOPS WOH TOH HO HI NAHI SAKTA..I MEAN IM TELLIN U THIS BCOS I WANT YOU YO KNOW THAT MAIN TUMHARE AUR RANVEER KE BEECH MAIN HOON!
TIA-OH REALLY SHY..TOH TUM TIA KO FOLLOW KAROGI...RIGHT..ALRIGHT..NOW EVEN TIA WANTS U TO FOLLOW HER AND SEE THAT RANVEER SIRF TIA KO LOVE KARTA HAI..AUR KISI DUMPSTER SE NIKLI STINKY MONSTER SE NAHI OK..NOW LEAVE
SHY-WHATEVER TIA..
TIA-I WILL KILL SHY..!

IN RANVEER'S ROOM..
VARUN-TOH TIA KO KAHAN LEKAR JAAOGE
RANNY-BANNA,PATA NAHI..AAP HI KUCHH IDEA DIJIYE NAH
VARUN-M M MAIN..SORRY..MAIN KHUD VRINDA KO LEKAR BAHAR JAA RAHA HOON...BYE
RANNY-BYE BANA
RANVEER GETS READY AND GOES TO TIA'S ROOM..THEY BOTH MEET AND ARE ON THEIR WAY HOME WHEN THEY MEET SHY..
SHY-HI RANVEER..SO TUM JAA RAHE HO
RAN-HAN SHY
TIA-OK BYE SHY..HOPE TO SEE YOU NOT
SHY-UH...RANVEER..MY HED...OUCH
RAN-WHAT HAPPENED SHY?
SHY-MUJHE BAHUT HI HEAD-ACHE HO RAHA HAI
TIA-SHY..TUM ROOM MAIN JAAKE AARAAM KARO OK..
RAN-HAAN SHY
SHY-UH..UH..
SHY PRETENDS MORE N MORE...
RAN-UH..SHY AAP HUMARE SAATH CHALIYE CAR MAIN..
TIA-WHAT NO WAY RANVEER
SHY-NO RANVEER,TUM DONO MERI VAJE SE APNA PLAN MAT KHARAB KARO..U GO
TIA-YAH RANVEER...
RAN-NAHI SHY..AAP CHALIYE...
SO TIA,RAN,SHY MOVE 2WARDS THE CAR..
THEY SIT IN THE CAR..
THEY REACH A PLACE WHERE ITS VERY BEAUTIFUL...TREES AND STUFF...
AND NOW.........

OK...THIS PART WAS QUITE SILLY..IM SORRY..BUT PLZ TEMME WHAT U THINK

its nice but tia ranveer and shy together unimaginable dont let shy spoil their fun.

saloni its nice but dont let shy spoil der date plssssss.

it will b a treat to c tia nd ranveer together(atleast in ur fic if not in remix) after der breakup 😭

plzzzzzzz cont asap

Hey Saloni,

gr8 going gal,

plz continue soon

Divya

THANKYOU GUYS...I'LL TRY AND POST THE NEXT PART ASAP!

yes plz continue asap!

will b w8ing!


Divya

wen will u post da nxt part yaar

still waitin for ur next part........

pleazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue fast asap with tia ranveer part.

hey cont soon sal.its too good.but shy with tia n ranny.nooooooooooooo this cant happen.plz separate shy from them.i want tia n ranny to be alone.