A TWIST IN THE TALE...(updated pg.33) - Page 11

will u plzz post fast
im waiting!!!

Hey Saloni

kahan ho yaar

plz continue fast

we all r waiting desperately

Divya

k guys...i'll have my lunch and post the next pat..wait for 10-15 minutes ok... 😃

ok.. but make sure u're not late 😉

ok i know its just too late...but here is the next part

YUVI-oh god! mitra sir aaap
ASHI-Hey bhagoo...
MITRA-Woof...toh yahaan kya chal raha tha..
UV-sir woh hum toh bas..
ASHI-Sir hum yahaan kisi ka wait kar rahe hai
MITRA-Kiska?
ASHI-Aapka
MITRA AND UV BOTH-'WHAT'?
ASHI-Haan sir..im sure aapko ek note mila hoga..i called you here?
UV(BELIEVING WHAT ASHI SAID)-You did 😡
MITRA-Lekin kyun?
ASHI-Umm..bas yunhi..
MITRA-Tum mera time waste kar rahi ho...lock the shed and go back to your rooms..fast
MITRA GOES AWAY FROM THERE
ASHI-thank god...hey bhagoo...u know uv mitra is the worst in the history of creations of human beings..UV? UV?
ASHI TURNS AROUND AND SEE'S UV THERE
ASHI-Hey bhagoo..ab tumhe kya hua?
UV-Ashi,did u call mitra here?
ASHI-OH god physco...it wasd just a bahaana..
UV-REALLY ?
ASHI-YES..but i know who really sent a note to mitra informing that we are here..
UV-Who..??


OK PLEASE COMMENT NAH GUYS

ok..so no one is replying to my fic..IS IT THAT BAD?????????????????????????

its nice yaar
i lik it 😉

Hey Saloni,

i read ur fanfic yest, but couldnt reply...

im sorry for tht

but ur fanfic really rockz

plz continue soon

Divya

its not at all bad
its rocking 👏
i liked da way ashi handeled da situation
plz do continue soon 😃 😃 😃

its toooooooooooooooooooooooooo gud 😳
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz write about ashi-yuvi more n more 😉
soooooooooooooooo ur mitra wala bahana was just so sufi yaaar 😆
continue soon