A TWIST IN THE TALE...(updated pg.33) - Page 9

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Posted: 19 years ago
#81
hey do cont and also write sum chemistry btw tia n ranny.plzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 19 years ago
#82
hey yaar cont asap...its awesum 👏
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Thanx people here is the next part
AFTER RANVEER AND TIA GO FROM SHY
RANVEER-tia..aapne hum me ab tak nahi bataaya ki 'challenge' kis baat ka tha
TIA-woh ranveer,actually..shy ne tia ko kaha ki hum dono ek saath pure din ke liye nahi reh paayenge..phir usne idea diya ki..hum ise challenge main badal denge...thats it ranveer
RANVEER-ok tia
TIA-Par ranveer,tum tia ke saath ek pura din spend karoge na>
RANVEER-Tia,aap toh jaanti hai ki hum aapke saath ek din nahi..puri zindagi bita sakte hai
TIA-really ranveer..tum tia se itna pyaar karte ho
RANVEER-Haan tia..aur aap
TIA(OVER-BLUSHES)-ranveer..tia toh apna love express bhi nahi kar sakti..ranveer please hameshe tia ke saath hi rehna
RANVEER-haan tia
AND THEY BOTH HUG
ASHI AND VRINDA ARE WALKING
ASHI-maate,waise kal raat tumne varun ke saath kya baat ki
VRINDA-ashi...woh bahut achha hai
ASHI-duh-uh vrinda..ab toh woh tumhe acha hi lagega na
VRINDA-Jaise tumhe uv pasand hai..vaise?
ASHI-oh please maate..kya kehna chahti ho tum
VRINDA-Ashi..agar tum uv se pyar nahi karti toh kal raat latty ke aane pe..itni upset kyun ho gayi thi
ASHI-kyunki i hate all the jambhvals!
VRINDA-ashi..agar jumbo ne sun liya na
ASHI-so what maate!
ASHI IS WALKING WHEN SHE SEE'S UV AND SID
EVEN UV SEE'S ASHI AND VRINDA
UV-Hey sid..vrinda ko kahi leke jao
SID-kyun dude?
UV-just do as i say nah sid
SID-Ok..kaha leke jaoo
UV-SID! kahin bhi..
SID-ok..
UV-ruko sid..kaha jaoge use lekar
SID-uh..woh toh maine socha hi nahi
UV-oh god,u dufus,use canteen main lekar jao..jaldi
SID-ok ok chill dude
SID TAKES VRINDA
UV-Hi wacko
ASHI-hey bhagoo...duniya main kya physco's ki kami thi..ki ise bhejdiya..hi pyshco
UV-Uh..ashi..i wanna ask u sumthing..
ASHI-Kya hai uv
UV-Well i wanted to ask that....

PLEASE TELL ME HOW IT IS GUYS! 😕
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Posted: 19 years ago
#84
very nice Saloni

plz continue soon

Divu
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Posted: 19 years ago
#85
sal
the fan fic is amazing,fantabulous,too good,awesome
i luuuuuuuvvvvvv it
write more yaar!!!!!!!!!11 😛
👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey saloni its so cool.i really luved it.cont soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz rite sumthing more soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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HI SALONI
PLZZZZZZZ CONTINUE KARO NAAAAAAAAA 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey Saloni

plz continue yaar

will b waiting

Divya
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Posted: 19 years ago
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ok im continuing the fic...sorry i delayed it alot!

UV-i wanted to ask ki kya tum aaj raat free ho?
ASHI-Haan kyun...physco's ka bhoot bangla dikhaane le jaana hai?
UV-please ashi...i want you to come in the shed at 9:00
ASHI-par kyun uv?
UV HOLDS ASHI'S HAND
UV-Please ashi..mere liye??
ASHI-ok fine..
THEY BOTH GO FROM THERE AND LATTY AND SHY HAVE OVERHEARD THIS CONVO
LATTY-shy..do sumthing..
SHY-dont worry latty..i know what to do listen.......
LATTY-ok shy..
THEY PLAN TO SEND A NOTE TO MITRA TELLING HIM TO VISIT THE SHED AT 9:30
IN THE NIGHT...
UV IS ON THE WAY TO THE SHED
RANVEER-Banaa,aap itni raat ko kaha jaa rahe hai?
UV-Dude..main shed main aur tum?
RAN-Hum toh bas...anyways aap bhi apne room main jaaiye..hum bhi apne room main hi jaa rahe hai...agar mitra ne dekh liya na
UV0Its ok dude...kuchh nahi hoga
RAN-ok..bye yuvi
RAN GOES AND YUVI ALSO GOES TO THE SHED
ASHI IS ALSO LEAVING THE ROOM WHEN
VRINDA-Ashi..kaha jaa rahi ho..its past 8...mitra sir ne dekh liya to?
ASHI-hey bhagoo..maate..please..dont interrupt...main jaa rahi hoo shed main yuvi se milne ok..now bye
VRINDA-par ashi..kyun uv
ASHI-what do u mean by kyun uv?
VRINDA-uh nothin..tum jao...lekin please sambhalke jaana
ASHI-Ok bye maate!!!
ASHI AND YUVI BOTH MEET IN THE SHED AND......


PLEASE COMMENT AND I WUD LIKE TO THANK KOMAL CUZ MY FIC WAS LIKE 'BHAGOO KNOWS WHERE'!
thankyou komal for finding and posting and appreciating my pic!
and to all the others also! 😊

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