one mistake,and then??last part31 - Page 15

yeah it was saying 19 first but now it is fine!
plz cont soon it rocks!

👏

i just looooooovvvvvvvvvveeeeeeee it

cont. fassssssssssstttttttttttt

How can he do this? Doesn't he care? aab enjoy kar raha hoga…..uske saath!!!
Arghhhhhh!!!!!! Tia pressed the pillow on her head.
But u don't want him!! That nasty voice said again.u don't care either do you?so!! let him do whatever he wants!!!
She was having a headache since that afternoon,since he had gone off……with that ….urghhh!!!!




tia hurried to open the door,making sure to check herself in the hall mirror.
she opened the door,a big smile on her face.
hi ranv......she stopped short when she saw who was with him,then collected herself.
hi gayathri.kaise ho?
gayathri:main theek hu didi.ranveer ne kaha aapke saath shopping ja rahe hai toh humne socha hum bhi chale.she smiled sunnily at ranveer.
chale ranveer?she pulled him out,before tia could even say anything.
tia stood there for a minute,openmouthed.she was acting as if she had some right to him. mujhe didi bula rhi hai aur ranveer ko........sirf ranveer? 😆

tia walked over to the car where ranveer was holding the door open for her.she started to get in and....
tia:hey!!yeh....
gayathri slipped into the front seat before she could get in.tia shot a dangerous look at ranveer.but he too got into the car coolly(not noticing)

the car ride ws torture with gayathri twittering away.yeh kitna acha hai,who kitna acha hai!!!
tia couldn't get in a word edgewise.and ranveer!!!smiling away benovently,as if it were all very amusing!!

Ranveer brought the car to a stop at the mall.
R:tia,aap andar jaiye.hum aapka yahi wait karte hai.
T:par ranveer,tum bhi chalo na,main akeli kya karungi??
R:nahi tia.hum bore ho jaenge.shopping humare bas ki baath nahi hai.
T(sighing):theek hai.gayathri,tum bhi chalo.(determined not to leave the two together)
Gayathri looked at ranveer in panic.ranveer put his hand on her shoulder.umm tia,hum dono aapka wait karenge.gayathri ki thabiyat kuch theek nahi hai.
Tia(in a nasty voice):agar thabiyat theek nahi thi toh ayi kyun? She turned away angrily.anyway.tum yaha bait kar gayathri ka khayal rakho.main jarahi hoon.
R:tia…humari baat to………
But tia had already left by then.

She finished her shopping quickly and hurried out.
ab yeh dono kaha gaye??

then she spotted them….shards of jealousy pierced her heart.they were sitting in the caf…..laughing and talking.gayathri said something and ranveer burst into laughter.
A mean feeling enveloped tia.
She stonily walked over to where they were sitting.
Gayathri:tia didi!!dekhiye na!ranveer ne hamare liye kitni achi cheeze kharidi!
She looked adoringly at him.
Ranveer smiled at her.theek hai phir.chale?

Tia sat in the back seat without comment this time.as she got out at the gate ranveer pulled her aside.
R:tia,aap humare liye ek favour karengi?
Tia smiled.ofcourse ranveer.shoot.
R:kya….aap gayathri ka makeover karne main uski madat karengi?who yaha pe bahut uncomfortable feel karti ahi.humne vasu se kaha par usne mana kar diya.pata nahi why she dislikes her so much!!!!
Aap unki madt karengi na?

Tia was silent for sometime.then,theek hai.il do it.
Ranveer beamed.thanks a lot tia.hum jaanthe the,aap humare baat jaroor manegi.acha hum chalte hai.hum sab lunch pe ja rahe hai.bye.

Tia stood in the driveway for a long time,long after both of them had left.there was a sinking feeling in her stomach.she felt as if…….her life was slipping away….and there was nothing she could do about it.

hey vitak it was too good.cont soon.and plz dont make tia so jealous i cant see her like this.plz do sumthing.

vitak ur fanfic is gud

it was awsummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm can't wait for the next part

aur kitna time lagega 😭 😭
plz do it fast it is awesome

Ranveer came to a stop when he saw her.she was sitting in a corner of the terrace,hugging herself tightly.she looked so lonely,so….vulnerable.
He sat down beside her.
Kya hua tia?
Tia leaned back on the wall.kuch nahi.tum yaha kyun aaye ho?
R:Tia please.hum jaanthe hai aapko koi baath satha rahi hai.aap hume bata sakti hai.
T(getting angry now)maine kaha na.tum jao ranveer.and leave me alone for heavens sake!!
R:yeh kya ho gaya hai tia ko.kaise itna badal gayi hai ki….apna dukh bhi batna nahi cahti?humse chupa rahi hai!!!

He got up to go.ranveer!!tia held his hand.please baith jao.main tumhe hurt nahi karna chahti thi.its……its just that,mere samajh mein nahi aa raha mein kya karu.
I feel …..tumhe bata hai ranveer,jab mein paris mein thi toh apni mom se mili?
Ranveer looked at her in shock.
Tia laughed bitterly.ha.who zinda hai. london mein rehti hai…..apne boyfriend ke saath .mujhse milne aayi thi.keh rahi thi bahut……yaad….aa rahi thi meri.
She looked at him.mujhe yakken nahi ho raha kii jise maine apne life ka ek idol maana,itna trust kiya..wohi…itni jhooti ho sakti hai.
Both of them were silent.

Ranveer looked at her.she had become so cynical about life.so many people had hurt her…him included…..no wonder she didn't want to get close.

'Tia',ranveer moved closer to her.'jo bhi hua hai,don't let it affect you so much ki aap life ki achi cheezo ko hate karne lage.aapko un logon ke baare mein sochna chahiye jo…aapke bare mein care karte hai.apse pyar karte hai.
Tia didnt say anything.
Ranveer:jaise……hum.
Tia closed her eyes.ranveer ……..
Ranveer:no tia u listen to me.ek galti ki wajah se aap hume puri life maaf nahi karegi?im so sick of this!!!! Aap hume nahi khud ko dhoka de rahi hai.
He turned her reluctant body towards him.hume aapse jyada kuch nahi kehna hai.you know I love you.and I always will.ab apko decide karna hai.apni stupid si complex…. ya humare pyar.

He got up to leave,then stopped.
Aur ha….agar aap na bhi kahe na,toh bhi hum aap hi se pyar karenge,hamesha.
He thought for a while,then added for good measure.lekin yeh baat bhi sach hai ki hum apne family ko dukhi nahi karenge.agar who chahe toh….i'l ….do anything.got it? Anything!!!




So youv got to help me dids!!! Vasu looked pleadingly at ashi,her eyes wide.
Ashi looked wearily at her.
A:look vasu.thakur aur timbo ko milana na,bhaggu ke liye bhi impossible hai.who dono kitne difficult hai.mein toh count bhi nahi kar sakti maine kitni baar unko saath lane ki koshish ki hai.
V:par did…..
A:nahi vasu.u listen.tia ranveer bache nahi hai.unke issues ko tum samajh nahi rahi ho.tum isse bahar hi raho to acha hai.and agar who sachmuch ek dusre se itna pyar karte hai to theyl come around on their own.

V:tab tak bahut late ho jayega.dids app kyun nahi samajh rahi? Who gayathri…aur uske parents!!! They want her to marry him.bhaiya toh unke liye ek treasure hai.its so frustrating!!hamare pure family mein kya main hi ek samajhdar hu? Bhaiya toh.…..uff!!!!

dids pleaseeeeeeee pleaseeee.mere paas plan bhi hai.aapko sirf thodiiii si help karni hai.plssss
Ashi looked at vasu and sighed.she looked like an innocent puppy dog wanting to be pampered.
A:okkk fine.this one last time.plan kya hai?


is it good?? 😕

awesum 👏 ...plz cont asap... u better...coz i can't wait to read the next part...

its amazing

continue soon

btw Nitz, since when r u online? 😕